|VeeBa OS| ~Pighalne Do Zaraa~

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Posted: 11 years ago
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NOTE:-
#This takes place after RanJan left for their trip.
#My thoughts are within { }
#This can get a bit intimate πŸ˜³πŸ˜†πŸ˜³


Flashback:-

Baldev- m pyaar karta hu tujhse veera!!!
Veera- bass kar baldev! Bohot ho gaya! ye koi mazaak hai? Tu toh bacche ka baccha hi rahega! Chala jaa yaha se! mai nai karti tujhse pyaar vyaar! Jaa yaha se!


Flashback ends.

"jaa yaha se! Jaa yaha se!"
These words echoed veera's ears as she felt very guilty for what she had said in anger.
It was late night. RanJan were not at home and she found the perfect opportunity to slip out of the house.


She reached his house and knocked.
The door was opened by bansuri.
Bansuri- veera? Tu inni raat ko yaha?
Veera- vo... Taayi ji.. Baldev se kuch zaroori kaam tha.πŸ˜•
Bansuri- baldev? Vo toh garage me hai, apni bike theek kar raha hai.
Veera- jee mai jaake dekh leti hu.

Bansuri- veera... Koi baat hai ki? Baldev ne subah se kuch khaaya tak nahi hai aur abb keh raha hai ki use akella chadd doon.
Veera- M..M... Mai dekhti hu.. Aap chinta matt kariye...

Bansuri nodded.


Veera went to the garage to find baldev engrossed in repairing his bike.
Veera- ahem! Ahem!

Baldev looked up at her. Rolled his eyes which were filled with pain. And then looked away.

Baldev- kya kar rahi hai tu yaha?πŸ₯±
Veera- tu kahi jaa raha hai?πŸ˜•
Baldev- tenu ki? Chup chaap bata kya kaam hai?😑

"kaise kahu... Kya kahoo??"
She thought. Baldev looked back at her and sat on his bike to ride away.
Veera- baldev!! Ruk oye!!😲😲.

He went away and veera was helpless.


Cold wind, rainy whether, dark forest, full moon night and baldev's bike broke down again.

Baldev- khotya!!! Ye bhi abhi karaab honi thi!!!
Ki karoon abb!!😑😑

He got down and dragged his bike to the side of the road.
He looked how dirty it had become due to the mud on the road.
Baldev- eh inni gandi bhi ho gayi hai...!!
He knelt down to analyse the damage.

Suddenly he stopped what he was doing.

Baldev- kyu aayi tu yaha!!??πŸ₯±

Veera, who was hiding behind a tree.. got scared.πŸ˜•
Baldev looked up.

Baldev- bahar nikal! Yaha chupa chupi khelne toh nai aayi hai na tu!!!

Veera bit her lips and came out of her hiding.
Baldev got up and stood in front of her.

Baldev- chal chabbi nikaal apne bike ki... Meri bike kharaab ho gayi hai.πŸ₯±
Veera- mai bike leke nahi aayi.
Baldev- kyaa?? Tu paidal aayi yaha tak?? Inni door!😲😲
Veera- paidal nahi, daudd ke aayi... mai bike se aati toh tenu pata chal jaata aur tu...
Baldev- shhh!!!!! Gadhi hai tu ek number ki!!!😑

Veera was silent. Baldev fussed.

Baldev- ek kaam dhang se nai kar sakti tu!!😑

Veera dropped her face.

With a faint thunder sound; it started raining.


Veera- haawwwhhh!!! Baarish???😲
Baldev- iski tohhh!!! Bhaag abb!!😲😲
They ran and took shelter in a nearby shed.

{it was a perfect shed for the two... meant to be for them so everything was available there including privacy πŸ˜³πŸ˜†}

Both were half drenched.
Baldev looked at veera who was in a white and blue kurti and her wet hairs were spread around her face and she looked so beautiful.
He withdrew his gaze as veera looked at him.

Baldev- tu yahi ruk. Mainu jaake bike laane de. Agar bike jaldi theek nai ki na toh naa jaane kaise ghar pohoch payenge.

Veera noded. Baldev went out and dragged the bike into the shed. He was totally wet. He came in and took off his court. Veera could not stop her eyes from noticing his physique.
He ran his fingers through his wet hair and this gave veera chills.
{OMG! imagine him totally wet ☺️}
When this wasn't enough.. He took off his kurta too.. And he was only in his white vest!
{*dead* dead* dead*}
Veera took a deep sigh unknowingly.
He gave a side look to her , spread his kurta on the dry hay and squatted to repair his bike.
Veera- b.. B... B...
Baldev- baldev!! Naam bhi bhul gayi ki mera??
Veera- nai.. Vo... Mujhe na tujhse aise baat nahi karni tha... Mujhe ...
Baldev- ho gya? Ho gaya tera!? Abb muh band karr!!πŸ₯±
Veera- tu mujhe maaf kar de mai kuch nai bolungi.
Baldev- agar chup rehne ki yahi keemat hai toh theek hai. Kiya maaf!! Khuss???

Veera- sach me maafi maang rahi hu baldev tu samajh hi nahi raha.

He didn't pay attention.
Veera- theek hai. Mai jaa rahi hu.
Baldev- jaa na! Mai kaun sa rok raha hu!

She got angry and went away.

Baldev- (to himself)- dekhta hu kab tak bahar bhatak paati hai akele.


It was nearly an hour and veera wasn't back. Baldev was tensed now. He went out looking for her.
It was still raining heavily.
Baldev- veeraaa!!! Oye! Kitthe chali gayi ye ladki..!!
Veeeraaa!!!!πŸ˜•

He looked for her helplessly.

And finally found her shivering and sitting on a rock.

Baldev- veera!!!πŸ˜²πŸ˜•
He went to her and held her by her shoulders to pull her up.
Baldev- paagal ho gayi hai ki? Itthe ki kar rahi hai tu??!!😑😑
Veera- mai vo... Tune kaha tha ki,..πŸ˜”
Baldev- chupp abb!!πŸ˜•
She was nearly fainting. He carried her back to the shed in his strong arms.
Veera circled his neck with her hands. She looked into his eyes, she could feel her suffering in it.

He laid her down on the hay and rubbed her palm. He was so tensed, he couldn't think of anything else.

Veera was lost in such a caring gesture.

She was shivering a lot... He knew she could catch severe cold if the wet kurti remained on her body. It could have been dangerous.
Baldev (putting her head on his lap)- veera... Tu sona matt.. Theek hai.. Jaagti rehna...
But she was totally in her senses till then.
Veera- theek hai baldev.
Baldev- aur tujhe ye... Vo... Ye... Uhmmm!!πŸ˜•
He went and brought his kurta which was dried up by then.
Baldev- ye le aur... Ise pehen le.. Geele kapde se teri tabiyat aur bigad jayegi,

He gave the kurta to her and turned his back towards her.
Baldev- jaldi kar...
Veera took a couple of minutes to slip into his kurta.

Veera- ho gaya baldev.

He looked back

Baldev- abb tu baith itthhe mai kahi se aag jalaane ka intezaam karta hu...
Veera nodded.


He gathered few dry wooden sticks, and started to light them up.
Veera stared at him.
Veera- mai gusse me thi baldev.πŸ˜”
Baldev- mainu koi farak nai padtaa... Tere hisaab se toh mere liye eh sab majaak hai na... Toh bhool ja!

The fire lighted up and he stood up to leave but was stopped by veera.
She held his wrist tightly.
Veera- baith itthe.
He sat down.
Baldev- ki hai?? Bol jaldi.
Veera- (lovingly taking his cheek in her palm)
Accha hua na .. Agar maine inna gussa na kiya hota toh aaj mainu pata kaise chalta ki tu sach me inna pyaar karta hai mujhse.

He stood up.
Baldev- chhadd iss baat nu abb veera. Mainu koi matlab nai hai abb tujhse!

He went to other side of the shed.
Veera followed him.

He was standing with his back towards her.
She kept her hand on his shoulder and tried to turn him around

Veera- matlab nai hai? Eh ki baat huyi!
And she slipped.
Baldev- veera!😲

He held her by her waist before she could fall off.
With one hand supporting her waist and other holding her hand tightly, their fingers interwiened for the grip.
{don't forget, he is in his HOT white vest πŸ˜³πŸ˜†}
They cudn't help but look into each others eyes.
Baldev slowly pulled her up, her other hand which was holding him by his arm, moved up to his shoulders.
He brought her closer and closer and closer.
Veera- mai samajh hi nai payi ki tu..
Baldev- kya! Ki mai sach me pyaar karta hu tujhse?
Veera- h... Haan..
Baldev- kyu? Kyuki mai sheheri ladko ki tarah nahi samjha paaya? Hai na?
This he said with passion and intensity. All the sexiness of the world came at his feet!
{☺️}
Veera- nai mai toh bass keh rhi thi ki...
Baldev- shhh!!!
He touched her lips with his thumb and moved his hands into her hair and grabbed her head for support, then he pulled her closerrr!!!!
Baldev- teri bolti aur teri saanse... Dono chheen sakta hu mai veera.

Veera knew exactly what he was talking about.

Veera- (unknowingly and purposely both)- kaise?😳

He pulled her closer and kissed her. It was a small kiss, then he kissed her back. And soon she gave up to him. They hugged each other tightly and kissed!
{i can't believe i am writing this. i hate u ballu... u have spoiled me completely}

She soon sat down and baldev laid her down against the floor.
He kissed her cheek, her neck and all she could do was melt.

He slowly grabbed the kurta on her shoulder and pulled it down a bit.

And the sudden realization of what he was up-to, made him leave everything at once and get up.

Veera was still confused about everything.
She didn't resist? Why?

He ran to his bike and got himself busy in repairing it.

Veera sat there wondering why she felt so good, and why on earth didn't she stop him?
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That's all. How was it? πŸ˜• please tell me.😳

Edited by ..RiMjHiM.. - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice plzz update soon and do pm me 😳
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😳 Very nice great early morning read loved it please continue and please accept my buddy request so i can get story updates from you via pm thanksπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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That was great. Am so glad u back with yr stories. My favourite line " teri bolti aur teri saanse... Dono chheen sakta hu mai veera." πŸ˜ƒ looking forward to reading more from u!
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awiee nice updatee...
i can't imagine..
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Super hawwt!!! Ab CV's to show Mein VeeBa ka intimacy dikhane se rahe..πŸ˜† keep writing more and more!! You are a brilliant writer!! πŸ˜ƒ
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hum tho pigal gaye yaar!☺️ good writing. any ideas of continuing?

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It was too good😳
Are you gonna continue?πŸ˜ƒ
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That was perfect. can definitely picture baldev in a vest and her in his clothes. A very good relization story
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rimi u r back dear with ur wonderful writings ohhh i m happy
nice OS and thanks for pm

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