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hello, this is my new ff......most probably a short ff....pls read it and say what u think abt it....i'll try to b regular....

The Name......................

Gauri Kapoor- Heroine of our story..a simple and polite girl..very caring and loving...she loves her father-Alok and sister-Kaya very much..they are her world....a small middle class family..gauri is doing her fashion designing final year...she is the best in her class...her best friend is Ipshita....ipshita is from a high class family...but ipshita loves gauri a lot...

Shiv Kapoor- Hero of our story...very hot and angry person...he's serious most of the time...he loves going to disco and hanging out with friends...but no girlfriends...he is not interested in girls....his best friend is anupam...born very rich...koi bhi kami nahi tha usse.....his family is a big one...father-Mahen, mother-Nikhila,sister-Palak, Uncle-Daksh, Aunty-Shyla, Brother-Vivaan, Aunty-Maya, Uncle-Ayush....Dadi and Dadaji....i guess u r all familiar with them.........

now for the story...

gauri got up early in the morning...took her bath...prayed to kaali maa...made breakfast....and finally was getting out to go to college....

"Didi........."

"Kya hua kaya???"

" Didi, meine aapse kitni baar kahaa ke ki sccooter mein math jaayiye...aap itni taze chalaathi hain.."

" Kaya, i'll take care..kuch nahi hoga..abhi theen ho gayi hai scooter kareedgke....usme chalna toh padega..then why did we buy one..."

" lekhin didi..."

" kaya, mujhe dher ho rahi hai..i have to leave ..."

and she ran away without listening to kaya..kaya was a bit upset..but she also had to get ready for college...she told alok that gauri had taken the scooter..she told him that she is scared for her...but alok tells her that gauri will take care...

gauri is driving fast...she is thinking abt the movie she had watched the previous day....Vivaah...she dreamed of getting a person just like prem in that movie...she loved it....how nice life would be...a love story without hurting our parent she thought....she started driving slow as it was a narrow road...she was still thinking abt the movie..when at the jn..she doesnt notice the car which was cuming on her right...CRASH...the car hit her and she fell down with blood running from her forehead....

gauri slowly opened her eyes..she found herself in the hospital..there was bandage on her head and one her left arm..she looked around and found kaya who had laid down her head on the bed...she smiled and slowly touched kaya's head..kaya raised her head and looked that gauri was now conscious..

"didi?? aapko hosh aa gayi..thank god..meine aapse pehle hi kaha tha...lekhin aapne maani hi nahi.."

"ok ok...sorry baba..abh aayinda aisa nahi hoga.."

" teek hai ...aur aage se kuch dhin ke liye no scooter..waise aap scooter chala bhi nahi sakthe...aapke haat mein fracture hua hai...do hafte ke liye..nuthing doing.."

"yeh toh hona hi tha..waise baba kahaan hain??"

"abhi aaynge.."

just then alok enetered...

" baba??"

"kaisi ho gauri beta??"

"abh teek hoon..."

"yeh sab kya hai gauri?? aisi jaldi kyun chala rahi thi??? agar tumhe kuch ho jaatha toh?"

"baba, mein toh bilkul teek hoon..aur waise mein taze nahi chala rahi thi.."

"ok now.." kaya stopped their conversation when the dr entered..

"hosh aa gayi?? gud..kaisi ho gauri???"

"teek hoon dr.."

the dr. did sum check up

" i think its ok..bas sar mein chot lagi hai aur ek small fracture..."

"dr?? mein ghar kab jaa sakthi hoon.."

" you can go home..haan aur once in 2 days check up ke liye aa jaana.."

" thanks dr..waise hospital bill kitna hua hai??"

"tumhe iss baat ki chinta lene ki koi zaroorat nahi hai..kisi ne usse pay kar diya hai.."

all 3 were shocked....alok spoke" pay kar diya?? lekhin kaun dr."

"aap uski chinta math keejiye...."

and the dr. avoids them and excuses herself..gauri found that dr. was hiding sumthing..

" aisa kaun ho sakta hai???"

" didi, ipshita didi ne kiya hoga..woh do gante pehle toh yahin par the...aur issi baaat ke baare mein baat kar rahe the.."

" shaayad kaya teek keh rahi gauri beta...tum thayyar ho jao, tab tak mein auto pakadkar latha hoon.."

and alok leaves from there.....kaya takes all the stuff and gauri gets out of the bed...both leave the room....

" kaya, tum jao, mein dr. se milkar aathi hoon.."

"teek hai, lekhin jaldi karna.."

and kaya leaves...gauri goes to the drs room..

" excuse me dr, kya mein andhar aa sakthi hoon..."

the dr was reading sum book.." haan gauri andhar aa jao..."

gauri goes inside and sits on the chair...

" kya baat hai gauri??"

" dr, mein jaan na chahthi hoon ki hospital bills kisne pay kiya hai..ipshita ne nahi kiya hoga..mein jaanthi hoon.."

dr got tensed...

" gauri, leave that matter..."

" nahi dr. mein aise kaise kisi aur ke paison se apna ilaaj karva sakthi hoon..."

" actually gauri unhone humse kahaa hai ki kisise nahi kehna..."

" dr.. pls..mein jaan na chahthi hoon..pls..atleast naam toh batayiye......."

" par gauri..unhone humse..."

" pls dr....."

the dr thought for a moment...

" ok, lekhin sirf naam hi bata sakti hoon....just bcos u want to know ki kisne paise diye hain.."

" thanks dr."

" Mr.Shiv Kapoor....."

" SHIV Kapoor???"

" bas..mein sirf itna hi keh sakthi hoon..."

a nurse enters and calls her...she excuses herself and leaves...

gauri also goes out thinking..

" meine iss naam ko kahin suna hai..Shiv kapoor???? suni hoon ya padi hoon...kuch yaad nahi aa raha...kaun ho saktha hai??? aur usne meri madad kyun ki???"

" didi??? hum kabse aapke intezaar kar rahen hain..."

she gets diverted.." sorry kaya..chalo chalthein hain....."

but the name never went out of her mind...who was he?? why shud he help her??? how does she know him??? where did she see him??? how cum she knows the name..???

i hope u liked it..pls tell me if i shud cont....

pls pls pls post in ur comments....

LUV NANDINI

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fida-cute thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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well good starting 😃 was he 1 behind her accident therefore helped her
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nandu very very interesting.....please do continue today only...please nandu update the next part now only......
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very nice part...so shiv knows gauri or something...can't wait to read the next part continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part!!!pls continue soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey!!read the intro..luvd it!!update soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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brilliant.........!! please do continue soon!~!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank u all for ur sweet comments.......keep doing it....





MR.Shiv Kapoor.....................Pehli Mulaqaat



recap: gauri faces an accident..she cums to know that sum1 payed her hospital bills...after enquiring she knows that it was shiv kapoor..but who was he..she has heard this name b4..but when and where..she doesnt remember..


gauri is sitting on her bed thiking about shiv kapoor...still she is not able to recall where she has heard this name....kaya comes there and looks at gauri's confused face..
" didi??? kya hua??? kya soch rahi ho???"
" kuch nahi kaya..bas soch rahi thi..waise kya tum kisi shiv kapoor ko jaanti ho???"
" shiv kapoor??? didi, aapki yaad daash ko kya hua?? barson hi toh humne magazine mein pada tha...bhool gayi??"
gauri just then remembered...
" are haan, mein toh bhool hi gayi..zaraa woh magazine lao na??"
" woh kyun?? aur aap yeh shiv ke baare mein kyun pooch rahin hain??? hmmm...kya ho raha hai??"
" kaya kuch nahi, wo actually meri ek dosth uske baare mein keh rahi thi isliye pooch rahi thi..."
" achcha..lekhin nahi jaanta shiv kapoor ke baare...humaare college mein saari ladkiyaan uspe fida hain....they say that he's very hot and handsome...lekhin mujhe toh aisa nahi laga..aur aapko patha hai, woh chutki didi hai na, woh uss magazine se shiv ki sabhi pictures ko kaatkar le gayi...."
" kya??? saari ki saari pictures??"
" haan, ek bhi nahi choda...wait..mein abhi laathi hoon.."
kaya went to take the magazine..gauri thought that if there was no picture how will she recognise him...and if he is so handsome then how come she forgot his face...kaya came with the magazine and handed it to gauri...there was no way she could identify him now..she kept it aside..kaya went to her room to study and then gauri thought of a way..she picked up the phone and called up ipshita...


" hello..aunty mein gauri bol rahi hoon.."
" haan just a second..mein ipshita ko bulaathi hoon.."
after a few seconds ipshita took the phone..
" hello gauri?? kaisi ho?? kahaan se bol rahi ho?? "
" mein teek hoon..aur mein ghar mein hoon.."
" oh toh tumaari discharge ho gayi hai..sorry yaar, mein tumse mil nahi paayi..subah aayi thi lekhin tum behosh thi...aur uske baad i had very imp work..sorry hunny.."
" its ok..wo sab chodo..mujhe tumse ek zaroori help chahhyiye.."
" haan bolo kya baat hai??"
" kal mujhe kapoor group of industries jaana hai..tum apne car lao, hum saat mein chalthe hain??"
" lekhin wahaan kyun??"
" shiv kapoor se milne..."
" shiv kapoor??? woh kyun??"
" ek zaroori baat thi..."
" aisi kya baat hai???? tum mujhse kuch chupa toh nahi rahi.."
" woh sab mein kal tumse kehthi hoon..kal nau baje yahaan aa jaana, ok??"
" ok darling..i'll be there..well take care ok??"
" ok bye.."
" bye..."

gauri thought that now she will meet him and ask him why he helped her...why did he pay the money.....she went to bed but did not have a very gud sleep....the next morning kaya had to do all the house work....kaya went to college as usual...gauri got ready quickly..when alok asked her she told him that she had some project work and she is going to ipshita's house and that she will pick her up...alok agreed ....gauri waited and waited...ipshita was 10 mins late...
"sorry yaar, got in the traffic..."
" its ok..abh chalo jaldi chalthein hain.."
and they left..on her way gauri explained everything....
" sach kaho gauri, kahin tum donon ke beech koi chakkar toh nahi tha....i mean not from ur side..."
" come on ipshita, mein isse jaati tak nahi.....aur mein abh usse pehli baar milne waali hoon..."
" nahi bas isliye pooch rahi thi ki mein usse jaanti hoon...directly nahi, woh mera ek dosth ka dosth hai....aur all the girls are crazy abt him...kehna padega he looks very handsome..."
" mein bas itna poochna chaahthi hoon ki usne meri madad kyun ki..."
soon they reached the place...ipshita told her that she will park the car and come back...while gauri went upstairs..she went inside the lift and the door was abt to close when someone came running to the lift and he shoutd at her not to close... she opened it again...he came inside and then it closed and started moving up...he stared at her and she could feel that..and then when he turned away a bit she looked at him..he was looking nice...she has met him somewhere...where?? why is it that she always forget......suddenly he looked at her and had an eye lock..gauri but then turned away..her face bcame all red..what wil he think...why did she look at him like that..they had reached the fourth floor and the door opened..she moved forward..the floor was very slippery..she couldnt balance and niether could she hold the table near by to balance as her hand had the plaster...she closed her eyes tight and thought that she was going to fall and there's gonna be another visit to the hospital...but then she did not fall down..she opened her eyes slowly and saw the same man holding her by her waist.....they looked into each other's eyes.....he was so handsome...gauri was melting....and his touch..she never felt like this b4....and he too was looking at her....how did she come here....how did she find him....they stood like that for a moment......and..................................



thats all guys....hope u enjoyed it....pls do reply....
LUV NANDINI






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Posted: 18 years ago
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nandu very very nice story .....u hooked me to ur ff....please do regular updates please..... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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haila!!

wonderful.. you have got me hooked as well!

please do continue!~!

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