One time short story (6th Update Pg.12)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Birdy91
Ahaaan.. super awesome... clap clap yaara

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Originally posted by: zeylanica
Superb ..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: Birdy91
hehehehe.. Talli Ram and hittler Biwi.. perfect Combo 😆 loved it..

Hehe, thank you 😊

Originally posted by: zeylanica
Too good ... loved d drunk Ram ...if possible plz continue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: Birdy91
Awwiiiee sooo cute and dreamyyy...

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Originally posted by: zeylanica
Awesome ... loved it

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Birdy91
Awww.. it was such a lovely one yaarr...
well That was a really surprise for priya
yaara and vikrams experssions.. heheh
he is really a true friend... kya yarana hai...
wht a writeup yaar..Priya's restless ness and den vo surpise... ahaaann.. golu bana gentleman..

Thanks, glad you like them 😊

Originally posted by: zeylanica
Wow that was fab.. Thanks for this lovely one...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Birdy91
Wowww Wowww Wowww speechless yaar 👏 loved each n evry dialogue... superbbb

Really glad you like them 😊

Originally posted by: zeylanica
Wonderful OS ... Just love it

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: Birdy91
Hey Eli... hiii buddyy.. just Loved it yaar... seriously.. it was all rayalicious... ram was right ki unko signal mil rhe h n i was just smiling n smiling thruout d update... 😳 golu ji aur vo bhi Bus ride.. ahemmm priya ka pyar 😉 reallyyy liked it alottt yaa...

Thanks... glad you like it so far 😊

Originally posted by: zeylanica
It was awesome ...
You are an excellent writer Eli .. You come up with really great ideas...
so keep writing!!
looking forward for ur more works..

Thank you a lot, glad you like them 😊