ff...i m sorry(chap 2 teaser pg2)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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After a few days when aliya thinks that there is something fishy about barkat...knowing this barkat has been trying to create as much differences between her and zain to get her out of the villa
Barkat:(weeping) zain bhai bhabi slapped me
Zain:(furious) y?
Barkat:she said she hates me and will get me out of this house...when i asked y...she slapped me.
Zain being really protective abt barkat didnt even give a second thought..he ran towards the room
Barkat :hahaah...kaam ho gya *evil smirk*
Zain marches in his room .grabs aliya from her wrist
Zain:chahati kia ho
Aliya:kia?what happened
Zain:kiu meri khushian barbad karna chahiti ho?
Aliya:magar...
Zain:shut up...pehle tumne mjse zabardasti nikkah kia. Meri zindagi pe qabza kia...ab itne saalon se wese hi tumate chacha ne meri behn cheeni hui ti...aj mili to wapis lena chahti ho tum mje...kiu maara tum ne use?
Aliya:zain me ne nhi mara us he (crying)...balke zain wo bht ajeeb hai or wo kuch chupa rhi hai;
Zain:bass aliya bht hogya
Aliya:magar zain
(Zain raises hand to slap aliya...but stops)
Aliya:ruk kiu gye...maaro na ..maaro
Zain:(speechless)
Aliya:itni nafrat krte ho mjse...itni nafrat...(broken in tears)
Zain:nhi aliya..
Aliya:bas zain...bas...me aj is hi waqt tumhari zindagi se jaari hu..lekin tumhe ehsas hoga k ma ghalat nhi ti
Aliya rushes out of room
Zain:aliya ruko...ruko
Aliya:goes out of the villa and zain fails to stop her
..to be continued
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Anniiee thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It seems interesting Dear.
Its nice. Really liking it.
Do continue & PM if possible :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u sooo much...bhopal track coming up
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely I was waiting an ff aboout barkat being an negetive character so please continue <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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seems interesting Dear.
Do continue & PM if possible
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Posted: 11 years ago
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really good
can u pm me if possible

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chap 2 teaser : aliya has been in bhopal for a week...she is not answering his calls and is very upset...she keeps on crying and remembering him...zain is also tensed...he misses her alot
..on the other hand he finds something wrong abt barkat...what will happen next? Coming soon if u guys comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG! i loved chap 1
update soon and pm me when
updated!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yayy!! I am super excited. Do continue soon Dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its so gud when will u update the nxt part i m eagerly waiting

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