KriYaansh OS-Letter Of Love|HBD Tehmina|

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys its Tehmina aka d3_rox Birthday today!

Happy Birthday Tehminaaa🤗Love You Loads Girl!
hope you like the OS as m writing on KR after ages!
He told me that we were going out for dinner tonight,and also gave me the address where I had to reach at 8 p.m.
I got ready wearing a red knee-length dress,i looked at the clock it was already 7.45 and I was late so I rushed to my car and drove off.
I reached the place he called me it was a kind of deserted, may be he wanted to spend sometime alone with me.
I walked inside and saw there was our table,total romantic set up,all the lights and setting brought a smile on my face,we have been so caught up with our work that its been ages we have spent time together.
I knew him very well he would definitely come up with some heroic grand entry i turned around to search for him,and i heard his voice coming fro the opposite direction.
He was in a black blazer with that millon-dollar smile on his face he had a paper in his hand,he was looking into that paper and he started speaking,"Dear Rey",I looked at him in confusion.
He continued,"This year as been very special to me,as I met you,and i got my dream of dancing come true"
As i heard it,I found it very familiar and then instantly as I understood what was happening,i stopped Rey from speaking further by saying,"Rey stop,no you cant do that, you are not allowed to steal others stuff like that"
He came towards me took my hand and started twirling me around while the paper was in his other hand,he was looking into the paper ad at the same time twirling me around,i tried to take it from him but he continued speaking,"I was just a girl from Dehradun with big dreams,the dream of becoming a dancer,the first time when i saw you on new years eve?i had a strong dislike for you,you were that arrogant guy with smart looks,and yes a great dancer too,i hated the fact that i had been caught with you and we had to go to the police station together.The last glare i gave you was thinking to never see you again but you happened to bump into me again in St Louis college,I just couldn't tolerate that dazzler attitude of your's and attitude on who each and every girl of St,Louis was crazy for,it was like a challenge for me to make you and Sharon realise that there can be others who can be equally talented and capable.
It was always difficult for me to understand you,firstly you acted like the heart-rob of the college who was so arrogant and on the other hand you helped me,when some people played a prank with me and got me dressed like a Mummy,I was tears and you came there and helped me,for a second i was actually lost in your eyes i did not know why but i did and when you touched me for the first time it was different and new,especially you coming out and helping me,but again you messed it up.
Kria was about say something when Rey hugged her from behind and said,"this letter is for me Kria and I will surely read it"
saying this he continued reading it again,"Did you that for me?dancing around in the college and helping me find my team,beacause that changed everything i got my Weakling team,i sometimes wonder why would you help me?or were you actually trying to help me?but at that time,i was satisfied that due to this i got my team,who became m friends for Life!
You kept giving me those strange stares,i never got to know why you gave them to me,especially during the Dazzlers v\s Weaklings fight,you always seemed so lost and kept staring at me,unknowingly I stared back sometimes I glared at you sometimes I just stared back,it was all so different and weird between us.
But then came a point where i thought THAT YOU ARE DIFFERENT!not like the other Dazzlers,The RDX Sir's Party,never did i imagine that you and me?would talk normally,I really enjoyed that night being Romaira and You became my Chabilal"
Rey stopped and looked at me,"My Chabilal?"and he started laughing.
He continued,"Many problems came after that,everytime i though something nice about you,you always ruined it.but on our Camp,my best moment was dancing with you,I remember I said,you wouldn't enjoy dancing with me but it was magical the way we danced together and had so much fun,also when we fell in the pool together,was the first time we were so close,in the pool,it was awkward,being so close to you and that you actually tried coming more closer?
A lot of things happened after that,one thing that changed everything was the elections,where I thought you said that speech and i slapped you in front of everyone,I had started to think your not like the others,and you genuinely liked being good to me.But no,as usual you ruined it again.
But what you did after that?did an aggressive dance with me on Rose Day,you tortured me because I was ur Assistant,you made it difficult for me to become a assistant G.S,but then came Karan Sir who got an end to this Weakling and Dazzling,we had crazy moments there like the Kabbadi Match where I was so happy that our group had won,one task actually changed everything where you said sorry to me,and then i brought my hand in front for friendship,I was glad we became friends somewhere i was tired of fighting with you,because I started to feel something,a weird feeling in my heart,the cute moments we shared in the fire-exit,or while re-uniting Swayam and Sharon,it was perfect,I really dint know what I felt for you,but you were definitely more than a friend!Which i realised during our college dance fest,where after our dance you asked me what I felt for you and i blushed and said,"App mere ache dost se kuch jyada ho" and I ran outside!
It was a beginning of all good things,we spent a lot of time together,doing crazy things like sleeping on the road and just looking into eachother's eyes and feeling the moment,hollding our hands,he fought had our patch-ups and danced too"
Rey laughed and i looked at him and seeing him laugh made me smile too.
"But then everything changed while we had our last dance together lost into eachother,my mom found out that I dance,that i had lied to her and also that we were together,she locked me in the room and dint let me come for footloose,my dream ,my friends dream,i begged her and she just put a condition in front of me,"If she lets me go for footloose i have to leave Dance and You forever,you have no idea how painful that was to let go you and Dance,but i had to because i choose my friends it just wasn't my dream i was their dream too,i couldn't backstab them so i came danced,we got selected but i also started ignoring you ,because i couldn't break my moms promise,It hurt Rey it hurted like hell,staying away from you and dance,ignoring you,but i knew I had to leave,but i couldn't keep you hanging so i had to break-up and break your heart too,and that's what i did,broke your heart told you i never loved you and i used you to get popular,th last time i saw you was walking into my room which that smile on your face which i loved and at the end you were gone with tears and broken heart,and I just fell on the ground and cried...
Rey had tears,he turned towards Kria,she too had tears,he said,"Why dint you ever give me this?"
Kria still having tears in her eyes walked towards him and said,"I wrote this the night i was leaving from Mumbai,away from you,away from dance and my friends,I wanted to give you this and wanted you to know how much I loved you,but i didn't cuz if i had you would have never moved-on i dint want to keep you hanging because a part of me told me I will never be back,I dunno why i wrote this,may be cuz i wanted to write my feelings down and keep it as a memory,so that whenever i read this i fall in love with you again and again"
Rey hugged her tight,like he just wanted her and he would never let her leave again,while they were hugging he said,"I found this fallen in your room that day,i have read it 30 times till now and everytime i read this,its made me cry Kria.
He broke the hug and went on his knees and said,"I am sorry Kria Ghai for everything for hurting you making you cry but i am glad i got you back,i am glad my baatcutter is back,you make me smile,around you i feel there is someone who loves me to no extent,someone who could do anything for y happiness,but my happiness is with you,he paused,he was just staring at me.
"What happened why are you staring?"I asked.
He replied,"My brave Kria Ghai,will you be mine forever?and marry me Baatcutter?"
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I dunno what i just wrote *facepalm*,but hope you all like it!
Hope you like it too Tehminaaa,thanx for always being there,Love you for life!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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resss


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i love it.
Its realy awesome.
The feelings,emotions all is perfect.

Happy birthday Tehmina
Edited by AishPoojaKR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Happy b'day tehmina😊
awww this was such a cuteee os😳
rey readingg d letter written by kria for him
beautifully written⭐️
and d ending was awesomeee😊
jus loveedd ittt😊
Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful os
rey had read kriya's letter 30 times...so swt
their luv is so pure

loved it


happy birthday dear...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG!!!!
Dis is just awesome!!!
Its lyk d whole kriyansh story from kriya's pov!!!
Which just focused on REY!!
I seriously love it!!!
Aawww!!! How cute!!!
Rey had read d letter for 30 tyms!!!
Gaawwwd!!! Dey r just so amazing!!!
Its lyk a rewind of all kriyansh moments described in words!!!
I love it!!! 👏
Grt job!!! 👏 👏

Happy b'day Tehmina!!! 😃 🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is an awesome os...loved it

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TEHMINA😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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U won't believe it, I was smiling the through out the OS...
While I was reading I culd actually imagine the whole scene...
U hv described their whole journey sooo beautifully...
N ya finally u wrote on KR...I was dying to read 1 from u..
I loved the OS...
Love u baby!!!:*:*
Thank you sooo much!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heyyy akshu a real nice os...u made me smile all through babe...
Its soo cute...
Loved it...

N tehmina...Happy Birthday dear...stay blessed...

Neha
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was beautiful n a very Cute one
loved it
Happy B'day Tehmina
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Posted: 11 years ago
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happy bday dear..

well the os was superb
loved it

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