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Posted: 11 years ago
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I BELONG WITH YOU

HOLLA PEOPLE. I AM HERE WITH AN OS OFCOURSE ON RAHI. THIS IS A B'DAY GIFT FOR DIYA. I HOPE SHE LIKES IT. IT IS FROM ALL THE MEMBERS OF OUR YO YO RAHI GANG AKA THE MAD HOUSE.

A VERY HAPPY B'DAY TO OUR VERY OWN ROFL QUEEN..

I HAD TRIED EVERY POSSIBLE WAY TO STOP HER BUT THEN I REALIZED I WAS BEING SELFISH. HOW CAN I STOP HER FROM FULFILLING HER DREAMS. WHAT IS IMPORTANT IS THAT WE LOVE EACH OTHER A LOT SO NOTHING CAN SEPARATE US.
SEPARATION... YES THIS WAS WHAT I AM ALWAYS AFRAID OF. FROM CHILDHOOD PANCHI HAS ALWAYS BEEN MY LIFE THOUGH I REALIZED LATE BUT YES THIS IS THE TRUTH. I CANT AFFORD TO LOOSE HER. I KNOW I WILL BE HEARTBROKEN..
BUT THEN I KNOW SHE LOVES ME. LOVES ME MORE THAN ANYTHING IN THIS WORLD.. MORE THAN HER OWN LIFE.. I HAVE DECIDED.
DOORBELL RING...
RANVEER OPENS THE DOOR.. ITS PANCHI..SHE IS A LITTLE TENSED.
RV: (TRYING TO SOUND NORMAL) WAAH YAAR MOTI. KYA TELEPATHY HAI... MAIN ABHI TUJHE YAAD KAR RAHA THA.
PANCHI:NONU YEH TELEPATHY NAHI HAIN.. HUM DONO DIN BHAR EK DUSRE KO HI YAAD KARTE HAI... ISLIYE..
RANVEER NOTICED THAT HER SMILE WASNT REACHING HER EYES AND HE KNEW WHY?
RANVEER: PANCHI MUJHE TUJHSE KUCH KEHNA HAIN. B4 YOU SAY ANYTHING FIRST LISTEN TO ME.
PANCHI WAS SILENT..
RANVEER: I AM SORRY. SORRY FOR BEING SELFISH BUT I HAVE REALIZED THAT I WAS BEHAVING LIKE A JERK...
PANCHI: AISA NAHI HAIN...
RANVEER: NAHI MOTI AISA HI HAIN. MAINE APNE AAP SE PROMISE KIYA THA KI JO SAPNE TERI AANKHEIN DEKHEGI UNHE MAIN APNI AANKHO MEIN BASAUNGA.. TERE HAR DREAM KO PURA KARNE MEIN TERA SATH DUNGA. TO PHIR AB MAIN TUJHE KAISE ROK SAKTA HUN.
PLS MUJHE MAAF KARDE. MAIN TUMHE NAHI ROKUNGA KYUNKI MUJHE PATA HAIN KI TUM JAHA BHI CHALI JAO LAUT KE MERE PASS HI AAOGI. JAB TUMSE PYAAR KIA THA TAB KOI CONDITIONS TOH NAHI RAKHI THI TOH AB KYUN? I KNOW YOU LOVE ME. I LOVE YOU TOO AND I CAN WAIT FOR YOU TILL ETERNITY..
PANCHI WAS CRYING. ALL THE PAIN THAT WAS BOTTLED INSIDE HER CAME OUT THROUGH HER TEARS..
RANVEER: PLS MOTI RO MAT. MAIN TUJHE ROTE HUE NAHI DEKH SAKTA..
PANCHI: I LOVE YOU RANVEER. THANK YOU SO MUCH. MAIN BHI TUMHARE BINA NAHI REH SAKTI. BACHPAN SE LEKE AAJ TAK MAINE APNI LIFE TUMHARE SATH HI DEKHI HAIN. TUMSE DUR HONA MATLAB KHUD SE DUR HO JANA. MUJHE SAMAJH NAHI AA RAHA MAIN KYA KARU. KAL TAK TOH YEH EK PRANK THA PAR AAJ TOH YEH MERI LYF KA SAB SE BADA SACH BAN GAYA HAIN.. (STILL CRYING) MAIN KYA KARU?
RANVEER PULLED HER IN A BIG HUG...
HE KNEW THAT THIS HUG WAS THE ONLY THING PANCHI NEEDED RYT NOW. THEIR HUG WAS ALWAYS SOMETHING SPECIAL. IT WAS A SYMBOL OF THEIR PROMISE THAT THEY WOULD ALWAYS BE TOGETHER NO MATTER WHAT.
RANVEER: TU WAHI KAR JO TERA DIL KAHE. TUJHE SAHI JAWAB APNE AAP MIL JAYEGA...
PANCHI CLOSED HER EYES.. THOUGHT FOR A SECOND
PANCHI: I HAVE DECIDED. MY HEART AINT GIVING AN ANSWER. I HAVE DECIDED I WILL TOSS AND DECIDE.
RANVEER(SHOCKED): WHAT?? PANCHI THIS IS A BIG DECISION. HOW CAN YOU TOSS ABOUT THIS.
PANCHI: I DONT KNOW RANVEER. JUST GIVE ME A COIN.
RANVEER KNEW THAT SHE WAS STUBBORN AND THAT SHE WOULD TOSS. HE FINALLY GAVE IN THINKING HE WOULD REASON WITH HER LATER.. HE GAVE HER COIN.
PANCHI: IF HEADS THEN I WILL GO AND IF TAIL THEN I WONT.
RANVEER TOSSED THE COIN..
TO BOTH OF THEM IT SEEMED LIKE AN ETERNITY B4 THE COIN CAME BACK.
PANCHI'S EYES WERE CLOSED. FINALLY SHE OPENED THEM AND SAW IT WAS HEADS. THEN SHE LOOKED AT RANVEER. HIS FACE COULD TELL THAT HE WAS UPSET. VERY UPSET. HE WAS TRYING TO COMPOSE HIMSELF BUT HE KNEW THAT SHE WOULD SEE IT AND SHE KNEW THAT HIS HEART WAS CRYING. SO WAS HERS..
NXT DAY...
AT THE AIRPORT..
PANCHI WAS LEAVING. LEAVING FOR 3 LONG YEARS. BOTH OF THEM DINT KNEW HOW WOULD THEY LIVE WITHOUT EACH OTHER..
PANCHI HUGGED HER MOTHER KIYA KD PIDDI SHEEBA AND JAITLEY SIR. ALL OF THEM LEFT THEM ALONE.
SHE CAME TOWARDS RANVEER.
BOTH OF THEN WERE CRYING.
PANCHI: APNA DHYAN RAKHNA NONU. I LOVE YOU AND WILL ALWYS LOVE ONLY YOU.
RANVEER: I LOVE YOU TOO MOTI.. AUR HAAN TU SIRF MERI HAIN. I WILL WAIT FOR YOU.
THEY GAVE LAST GOODBYE KISS AND HUGGED EACH OTHER TIGHTLY NOT WANTING TO LEAVE EACH OTHER.
BUT THEY HAD TO. FLIGHT NAME WAS ANNOUNCED AND PANCHI HAD TO GO FOR SECURITY CHECK.
SHE FINALLY LEFT WITH TEARY EYES...
THAT DAY RANVEER DID NOT GO TO HIS HOME BECAUSE EVERYTHING THERE REMINDED HIM OF PANCHI. HE WAS BROKEN. HE FELT THAT SOMEONE HAD TAKEN AWAY HIS HEART. HIS HEART THAT ONLY BEATS FOR PANCHI. HE WENT TO THE BEACH TO WATCH THE SUNSET. PANCHI ALWAYS SAID THAT SUNSET RELAXES HER MIND. HE THOUGHT HE WOULD ALSO TRY IT.
RANVEER STTC: BRO I WISH PANCHI HOTI. TOH WO MERE SHOULDER PE SAR RAKH KE MERA HATH PAKAD KE YAHA BAITHI HOTI. I MISS HER..
THAT NIGHT WHEN HE FINALLY REACHED HOME..
HE WAS TIRED. HE JUST WANTED TO HUG PANCHI BUT HE KNEW THAT WONT BE POSSIBLE.
HE FINALLY RESTED ON THE SOFA.. CLOSING HIS EYES AND THINKING ABOUT PANCHI.
SUDDENLY HE HEARD...
" MUJHE GAYE HUE EK DIN NAHI HUA AUR TUMNE KISI AUR KO PATA LIYA. KAHA THE TUM DIN BHAR?
HE WAS SHOCKED. HE TURNED ONLY TO SEE PANCHI STANDING. SHE WAS SMILING WITH TEARS IN HER EYES. HE COULDNT BELIEVE THIS. HE THOUGHT IT WAS A DREAM. HE RAN TOWARDS HER. HE TOUCHED HER SLOWLY AND REALIZED SHE WAS INDEED THERE.THEN HE HUGGED HER TIGHTLY AS IF NOT TO LET HER MOVE AN INCH APART FROM HIM.
BOTH WERE CRYING..
RANVEER: PANCHI TUM YAHA? TUM GAYI NAHI? TUMHARA DREAM?
PANCHI: TUMNE HI TOH KAHA THA APNE DIL KI SUNU. US COIN NE ZAROR HEADS SHOW KIYA PAR JAB TAK WOH COIN HAWA MEIN THA I REALIZED WHAT I WANTED. I REALIZED THAT ITS ONLY YOU WHOM I WANT FOR MYSELF.
RANVEER: PAR PANCHI TERA DREAM?
PANCHI: NONU POSTGRAD KARNA KISI ACHCHE COLLEGE SE MERA DREAM ZARUR HAI PAR USSE BHI IMP EK DREAM HAI. WOH HO TUM. MAIN TUMHARE SATH REHNA CHAHTI HU. MAIN APNI LIFE KI HAR JOURNEY TUMHARE SATH SHARE KARNA CHAHTI HUN. TUM SATH DOGE TOH MERA CAREER YAHA BHI BAN JAYEGA. MUJHE BAS TUMHARA SATH CHAHIYE.
RANVEER WAS OVERWHELMED. HE COULNT BELIEVE HIS EYES AND HIS EARS.
RANVEER: PANCHI TUNE MERE LIYE YEH SAB KIYA.. I LOVE YOU. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH. AUR HAAN EK BAAR JO DECIDE KAR LIYATOH MAIN AB TUJHE KAHI BHI KABHI BHI NAHI JANE DUNGA.
PANCHI: I LOVE YOU TOO. MAIN KABHI BHI KAHI NAHI JANA CHAHTI TUMHE CHOD KE. AUR HAAN KHUD KO ITNI IMP MAT DO. YEH SAB MAINE APNE LIYE KIYA KUMKI I BELONG WITH YOU..
RANVEER GAVE HIS TYPICAL TO DIE FOR SMILE AND PULLED HER INTO A PASSIONATE KISS.
KUCH KWAAB DEKHE HAI
KUCH RANG SOCHE HAIN
AB MAINE KAL APNE
TERE SANG SOCHE

P.S. I KNOW ITS A CRAP. IT DINT TURN OUT THE WAY I WANTED IT TO.BUT I HOPE ITS BEARABLE AND DIYA AND ALL YOU GUYZ. AND YES I CANT KEEP THEM APART. DO COMMENT..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Anjali..Just love the OS like anything..I so wish ki Show mein bhi ais ahi hota..Love the way you described RaHi's pain and helplessness..Both are ready to do anything for each other..Simply awesome..This is our RaHi<3...Do write more sweets

A very very Happy Birthday to the ROFLing queen of our mad house...May you get all the love happiness, joy and success in your life...Many Many Happy Returns of the day... Keep smiling and Stay Blessed


Edited by sweetdesire - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Anjali.
U portrayed it beautifully dear.
I loved it a lot.
Yeh sab show mein dikhaya hota to kitna accha hota.
Mujhe pura story pasand aaya especially the part where Panchi returns back and he thinks that it's a dream and when he runs to her and touches her,he realizes that it's reality.I know agar aisa sach mein hota toh Ranveer bahut khush hota.
Its the best birthday gift for Diya.

Lots of love.
Priya.
Edited by priya1101 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Anji...my filmy queen...its such a sweet n nice os...brimming with emotions n tears n love... typical RaHi... n me loves all things rahi...same goes for this one too...

Rv all broken yet brave supports panchi n moti totally confused yet finally listens to her heart... wow... all that I wanted to see on the show... but never mind... n loved the entire din bhar kaha the tum at the end... rv must have gone mad with happiness...he got whatever he wanted without even saying a word... loved the way he selflessly supported his love n the way moti listened to her heart... my precious twooo...

Loved the os yaaara... thanks a ton u know why...you are such a sweetheart...muahhh

N Diya...Happy Birthday once again meri jaan...muaahhh
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omggg Res !!
FINALLY unres 😃
First of all..
A tighttt hug to my filmy queen from my side !
🤗
Writing an OS..and that too on one of my souls ?
OMG !
BEST B'DAY GIFT 😃😃
After reading the OS the first thing which came on my mind-
ANJALI CVS KYUN NAHIN HAI???🤣
Seriously !
Loved it to the core !
TBP mein bhi aisa kyun nahi hua ? 😭
Nai ek min..
Me diverted from the topic 😕
Chal chhod 🤢
Par the OS !!
First of all ...
Wonderfully written 👏
Hey bhagwaan !
Mujhe toh malum hi nhi tha ki meri Filmy Queen itti talented hai ⭐️
Phir story..
Isse behtar kya ho sakta tha ?😃
Panchi chose her Nonu 😳😃
RaHi forever !⭐️
Woww..!
Amazing 😉
Tu aur likhna .. I have a hunch you can deliver us some brilliant stories 😃
Aur phir se..
FANTASTIC B'DAY GIFT ⭐️
It was so lovely ❤️
Thank you so much <3 ^________________________________^
Muahhh
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazin OS Anji..kash show mein vi panchi wapas ajati:( write more dear..ab bas yehi sahara hai..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww... it was so cute!
I just loved it!
It was amazing!
I loved the concept!
Tossing the coin was indeed my favt. Part!
Aww and it was heads
Shit!
I loved panchi's surprise!
It was superb
Uh write extremely good
Keep writing

Love ew
Tina
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Wow Anjali..Just love the OS like anything..I so wish ki Show mein bhi ais ahi hota..Love the way you described RaHi's pain and helplessness..Both are ready to do anything for each other..Simply awesome..This is our RaHi<3...Do write more sweets

A very very Happy Birthday to the ROFLing queen of our mad house...May you get all the love happiness, joy and success in your life...Many Many Happy Returns of the day... Keep smiling and Stay Blessed



geet... thank you so much yaar. i am so glad ki you liked it. show ki toh ane hi do...
and yes this is our rahi way too special...
thanx again
muahh
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya1101

Wow Anjali.
U portrayed it beautifully dear.
I loved it a lot.
Yeh sab show mein dikhaya hota to kitna accha hota.
Mujhe pura story pasand aaya especially the part where Panchi returns back and he thinks that it's a dream and when he runs to her and touches her,he realizes that it's reality.I know agar aisa sach mein hota toh Ranveer bahut khush hota.
Its the best birthday gift for Diya.

Lots of love.
Priya.


priya thanx a ton yaar. your words mean a lot to me.
i know ywh sab kuch dekhne milta toh maza aa jata. rv wud hav been jumpng.but chuck it
thanx again..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneha02

Anji...my filmy queen...its such a sweet n nice os...brimming with emotions n tears n love... typical RaHi... n me loves all things rahi...same goes for this one too...


Rv all broken yet brave supports panchi n moti totally confused yet finally listens to her heart... wow... all that I wanted to see on the show... but never mind... n loved the entire din bhar kaha the tum at the end... rv must have gone mad with happiness...he got whatever he wanted without even saying a word... loved the way he selflessly supported his love n the way moti listened to her heart... my precious twooo...

Loved the os yaaara... thanks a ton u know why...you are such a sweetheart...muahhh

N Diya...Happy Birthday once again meri jaan...muaahhh


thank you so much neha. i am so glad you liked it.. i know yaar this is our rahi selflessly and endlessly in love with each other... the perfect two..
you are most welcum dear.
muahhh

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