Jodha Akbar - Letter to Makers to pull up their socks

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dear Jodha Akbar team of writers and creatives


We as an audience have been patient with the kind of total character annihilation being committed by you in the hope of seeing a half way intelligent and good Love Story. But all we are getting is mockery in return. And the episode on 9th April crossed it all with the letter crafted by you from Jodha to Jalal. We are providing said letter verbatim with our expert comments and with events from previous episodes which make this letter self-contradictory and thus self-defeating. We now really request you to not make such faux pas and murder the characters and in the process make a mockery of Love and Marriage.

Here is the letter that you gave us to be Jodha's paigam to Jalal -

apne pati ko bina bataye jaana apradh hoga aur woh hum nahi kar sakte the
(Really???? So idhar hi she did apradh 3 times by going to meet Suja thrice was that forgotten by you dear writers????)

hum aapse krodhit hokar nai ja rahein hai shehenshah
(Oh goodie)
aapne hi aadesh diya tha ki hum agra chodkar chale jaaye
( No Goodie, Really???)

aap shehenshah bhi hai aur hamare pati bhi aur dono hi parasthitiyon mein aapke aadesh ka paalan karna anivarya tha hamare liye
(So you now want us to believe she always listens to Jalal and forget all the instances that you made her 'Not Listen to Jalal'?? 😕)

mann mein hamare bhi hulchul thi parantu uska kaaran yeh krodh nahi tha ki hamare pati ne humpe sandeh kiya uska kaaran woh thes thi ki hum apne pati par apna vishwas na bana sake
uss thes ne humein kuch kehne nahi diya
(Eh??? What about his thes that she didn't trust him enough to tell him the truth 😡 What about being quiet coz of her Suja bhaisa's vachan, now its all Jalal's fault she was quiet?? Seriously, do you take viewers to be imbeciles???😡)

ek asha thi ki hamara uttar chahe jo ho parantu aap hamara vishwas karenge, aap hum par sandeh nahi karenge
(😆 Here she basically just accepts to wanting him to trust her even if lies or well says anything, but Jodha aapne uttar hi kahan diya?? Trust us aap uttar deti to Jalal would have trusted you 😆 See how you contradict yourselves Cvs 😲)

yeh satya hai ki vivah ke samay aapse ghrina karte the hum parantu ghrina ke iss keechad mein prem ka kamal khila hi tha ki aapne
(So this is her love confession????? Lotus of Love had just started blooming in the keechad of hate but YOU ruined it???? 🤢 Are you making this a revenge for his love confession Cvs??? Are you as creatives so short of ideas when it comes to Love confessions and acknowledgements??????)

asha thi ki hamare pati ko humse kabhi prashna karne ki aavashyakta nahi padegi
(So let her do whatever she wants and never feel the need to be question?? Is that the msg bent sent across??????😲)

ki ek baar hamari aankhon mein jhaakenge aur unhe uttar mil jayega
(😆 did you ever get her to try looking into his eyes ever and if u did how could u make her miss his full of pain eyes on friday 😡???? )

parantu yeh asha aapne tod di shehenshah,
(Did you make her name one of her pieces of furniture Asha, Cvs??? coz yea you did make him break that asha, bad boy Jalal 😛)

aapne woh suna jo humne kahaan
(now Cvs you are saying that listening to what she says is wrong too??? 😕 he can't do anything right can he?? 😆)

shehenshah pati woh hota hai jo apni stree ki maryada ki raksha karta hai, jo uske samman ke liye ladta hai
(Cvs, patni woh hoti hai jo apne pati ke izzat ki raksha karti hai, jo uske maan ke liye ladti hai... you should have thought of that before making her go off on midnight walks huh??)

parantu hamare pati ne yeh hamara maan aur charitra par prashna utha diya to humein jaane ka nirnay lena pada
(I though you were making her leave coz of Shehenshah and pati's aadesh. Now you are making it her nirnay to leave coz he questioned her charitra??? 😕 saying i love him, i love him not in different episodes is confusing enough, she says 2 different things in the same letter too 😭 Cvs, showing Gajinitis between one episode to the next has now become Gajinitis in the span of a single letter?????😕)

pati ko parmeshwar maankar poojte hai hamare yahan
(🤣 🤣 🤣 okay still too funny 🤣🤣 kab parmeshwar maanke pooja kiya Jodha ne??? kab??? When did you show her do this Cvs???? Did we miss any episode????? hum aapse ghrina karte hai kehte samay ya tiger snack bananeka prayas karte huye ya SKLL ka aarop lagate huye??? Can Cvs please stand up and tell us????? If I treated parmeshwar like this I will either get a visit from yamrajji or manholes with no lids will pop up when I am out for walks, that is not something that I will enjoy 😆 punishment you see Cvs???)

aap 7 phero ke samay diye gaye vachan bhool gaye hai jinme pehla tha ki aap sada hamara vishwas karenge, sada hamara samman karenge lekin humein pehla vachan smaran tha ki sada aapke aadesh ka paalan karenge
(na googled it 😛, no blind trust in wife in any of the saat vachans of the groom, So please Cvs tell us from where you managed to get this version of vachans of marriage. I think many of us would like to have it to show our spouses the same!!! 😆 But it does say 'I will always be by your side' in the 6th vachan given by the wife, Seems like you made Jodha brake it 😆sada aadesh ka paalan karenge???? really when did you show us Jodha do this???)

aaj aapko hamara satya pata hai aur aapko khed bhi ho raha hoga parantu prem ke dhaage mein ek baar gaant pad jaaye to woh kabhi nahi khulti
(so now Cvs, you present us that Jodha knows that Jalal knows her truth and she also knows ki unhe khed hai, but you still dont show us any attempt from her to alleviate that khed, none whatsoever)

aapka dosh bhi nahi hai shehenshah
(Oh goodie again Cvs😡)
sansar ki riti yehi hai ki agni pariksha sada stree ko hi deni padti hai aur purush phir bhi uss par sandeh hi karta hai
(No goodie again, You just does not want him to let go of his guilt does you?? And you just dont want to show her feel any guilt either!!!! How Unequal can you get Cvs!!!! 😆)

hum jaa rahe hai Shehenshah, aapke bhavishya ke liye prarthna karte hai, prarthna karte hai ki jo hriday aapke paas nahi hai woh aapko mil jaaye
(So Cvs, on friday 4th April when you showed us this guy put his heart out there, pulled it out and showed it to her but on 9th April when you gave her this letter to write what do you do???? nope you ensure that she couldn't see his heart 😭 )

kyunki aap humein dhoond bhi le to bhi aap apni begum ko to paa lenge parantu Jodha ko kabhi nahi paa sakenge
Aapki, Jodha
(So now you end this letter from Jodha with a 'if u find me you will get your wife but not me so bye from YOUR Jodha' 😕 Cvs, do you even know that Love is not about paana but about doosre ka ho jaana???😲 Here you show Jodha as a Kanha bhakt but you yourself do not know Kanha's take on Love which was personified by Radha and Meera????😲 How could you commit this ultimate faux pas Cvs??? How could you butcher not only the characters but also Love????😭)


This is a protest and an advice to the makers of JA - Please wake up and pull up your socks - you are messing up not only with the characters but you are also sending out contrary and contradictory msgs. The audience will only take such stuff upto a point after that we we do have the remote and we do have alternatives.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks Adia 😊
Hope the stalker from Zee reads your post 😆
Hope the CVs do get their act together before it really & truly gets anymore unbearable
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i hope she does not take credit of abolishing pilgrimage tax..it will be a blunder😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that letter was like look who is talking!..will elaborate on it later adi😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Adi, I think this needs to be emailed to Balaji and Zee's official id, atleast we are sure that they read it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Didn't read, the title is enuff but still m with u. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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All who have the e-mail to Zee and BT and EK, and would like to send this post to them, please go ahead. If that will ensure some sense getting into the storyline, we are all for it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pupumon

Didn't read, the title is enuff but still m with u. 😆



jahan mere abba huzoor wahan main automatically aa jaati hun😆


i m with u guyz👏
Edited by happygolucky099 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Adi and Jeanie this is brilliant ! 🤗
How many times we will have to digest these blunders and loopholes by the makers ? If we are giving them TRPs then its their duty to give us sensible tracks and sensible characters. 😡
Even I googled the 7 vows of marriage and no vachan matches with the this imaginary one by CVs. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
I love your take on the letter, you've beautifully analysed it, and not in the sense that she's said some amazing things, but rather lack of sense and consistency with her past behaviour towards shahenshah. I can't recall the scene or episode but I do remember once Jalal questioned her about Rajputs considering their husband pati parmeshwar, and I don't remember his argument but I remember I agreed with it.

after all the bashing that's been going on, I'm happy to see the way you've expressed your views, so thank you for that as well, and this analysis 😊

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