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Nidhi Nevatia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#701

JJ... This was AWESOME !!!!

A happy,excited Chaahat and a surprized, not so happy Khushi, when they saw Arnav enter the flight.

My daughter and wife are sitting there can you please exchange seats as mine was a last minute booking... Again an excited, happy Chaahat and a not so comfortable with the situation looking Khushi. But she gave in for Chaahat's sake.

Cute little Chaahat unintentionally playing cupid by playing musical chairs/ seats on flight.

Thank u Chaahat for giving your mom n dad some time atleast talk to each other.

What Khushi's thoughts were, what she wanted to say... Was very aptly worded in the song she chose.

What Arnav's thoughts were and went on telling her... Was very aptly again worded in his choice of song.

Poor Khushi, her heart was nearly having the same effect as before when Arnav was anywhere in her vicinity ! Her heart was slowly winning over her mind ! *dhak dhak dhak dhak*

The Orphanage... and little Chaahat all excited to be back !... Awww... She calls the Security Guard...BG uncle !

So i see where Chaahat gets her infectious smile from said Sister Claire and in her mind Khushi too agreed !

The most touching part... Arnav holds Chaahat's hand and tells all his wrong doings. How he wants to correct his mistakes and how much he loved Khushi !

In return Chaahat said that she didnt understand anything except that it was forgiveness which counts but it was her mother's decision to forgive him or not !

Arnav promising his daughter that was one thing he would work for and they would live as a happy family !

JJ... Arnav's confession to Chaahat was so sincere, so full of love and regrets too... It was heart felt ! *sobs*

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PARVATHY44

@PARVATHY44

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Posted: 11 years ago

#702

Awesome update.Really enjoyed reading it.thanks 4 the pm

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bridgeofdreams

@bridgeofdreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

#703

Arnav speaks of determination in this chapters, and promises of Their family, of US. I'm loving this. Chaahat is so sweet; she's so her dad's daughter.

Khushi's shell is gradually breaking. She trusts him, but not her fears and insecurities. And she is fair to her daughter, giving Chaahat what she needs.

Lavanya is playing her card very well. She is a nice lady.

I'm happy for Chaahat. It's so heartwarming to read the last part when Arnav apologized to her honestly.

The songs part was written beautifully.

Awesome update, Ji.

Take care :)

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sincereme

@sincereme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#704

Wonderful update...

Loves the plane ride... Chahat was so sad but the instant she saw Arnav her face lit up... I just love her...

Songs were perfect... Khushi is resisting to Arnav efforts but her heart is melting slowly... Arnav needs to win her trust back...

Loved how Arnav apologize to chahat... He has done horrible mistakes in past but now he is repenting... Loved Chahat reply...

Loved the update...

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segad

@segad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#705

wonderful story, very refreshing. glad to see a strong khushi. the kid is a precious character

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kprathiba

@kprathiba

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Posted: 11 years ago

#706

I know arnav is suffering but its difficult to forgive a man who thought will be her life partner who protect her from the cruel world but the same man left her in the middle during the most crucial part of her life and was not even there when she was carrying a part of him and he is not beside her when she gave birth to their symbol of love and telling sorry will not help him he should make her feel he really needs her in his life and she need him in her life.

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sweetydoll32

@sweetydoll32

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Posted: 11 years ago

#707

Awesome update dear plz update soon...

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#708

[MEMBERONLY]

First of all...a picture of Camellia/Cammy/Chaahat

Baby Saraa as Chaahat 😊

I have not had anyone in mind while making Chaahat's character. But when readers started asking about her picture..I was so confused. Then I watched "Deivathirumagal" a tamil movie starring Vikram and this cute baby girl was his daughter. I loved her performance in the movie and her uniforms were perfect match to my Cammy's😆

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A teaser, because I dont have time to complete writing this chapter.

I have updated all my stories except "Rabba Mere Kya Hai Teri Marzi?" and Little Red Flower.

Its a special treat to all of my readers, asked by a special reader "bhaktii"

She asked me to update all of my stories on a single day as a treat for winning "Biggest Ipkknd Fan" on IPK Member Awards. You can see it in my signature.

Thanks to each and everyone who voted for me..Muah!

Teaser

Khushi brushed back her tears and leaned onto the closed door of her room. She sensed him standing right outside the door, his face pressed against the wooden surface. She touched the door pane, as if touching him and feeling him.

"Khushi, please.."

He begged and Khushi opened the door her eyes spitting fire at him.

"What do you want Arnav? I have given you everything whatever you had asked for? Why dont you leave me alone? I dont want to feel anything that destroys me. I am so over that things and never ever want to feel that way again...Please try to understand.."

Arnav sighed, his one hand resting against the wooden door. He stepped inside and closed the door behind him. Khushi turned around and walked towards the window, her shoulders slumped in defeat. Cammy was sleeping peacefully on the mattress. Arnav tip toed towards Khushi and stood right next to her, watching the moonlit night through the glass windows.

"You asked me to marry you for 6 months, and I agreed. You asked me to sleep outside your room, I obliged. You asked me to keep away from your personal stuffs, I agreed. You asked me to marry you once again, I confessed. You made the attempt to make me yours forever and I gave myself to you. You ditched me at the altar and I accepted it by leaving you.."

"Khushi, Please..."

His voice broke with tension and Khushi smiled at him.

"Now, what do you want, Cammy?"

"Enough Khushi! I love you..its simple as that..and I want you both in my life...thats all..I wont leave your side until you forgive me for my misgivings.."

"There is nothing to forgive..I had already forgiven you long back..you can leave.."

She said turning her face from his.

"I dont love you Arnav. Not anymore. Why dont you get it straight into your head and leave me alone?"

"I dont want to understand anything. I just want you and Cammy with me... I know I had let you down in the past and I promise you that nothing sort of will happen in the future. I promise you to take care of my daughter and you like a father and husband does...Please give me a chance to prove myself. I wont be an asshole this time...just a chance Khushi..please?"

Khushi sighed looking at her pleading face. She could never get over this man, no matter how harder she tried. She could lie to the whole world, but not to her own heart. It craved for him, only him.

"I will think about it..."

She said avoiding his gaze and then the next moment found herself pressed against the window. He hovered over her form, his eyes conveying everything he felt for her. While his lips breathed hot puff of air onto her already parted ones.

"I love you so much.."

He whispered and waited for her response. She remained still, her eyes staring onto the buttons of his shirt. He lifted her chin with his thumb and forefinger, meeting her eyes.

"I know you love me too..and I want to hear it from you soon..There is no pressure Khushi...take as much as time you want..I will always be there..waiting for you.."

He said and pecked her lips softly. A gasp left her mouth and she pushed him off her form.

"Enough Arnav. You should leave now. Its really late.."

She said turning her back to him. He scratched his head, smiling like an idiot and walked towards the door. Khushi breathed heavily still staring into nothingness as he left and closed the door behind him. She looked at the closed door and exhaled the breath she was holding. Her fingers flew to her lips and touched it lightly. A blush crept up her neck and reached her cheeks. Her lips curved upwards and she lowered herself onto the bed next to her daughter.

Arnav stood outside the room, his eyes looking at her dazed form through the glass windows. He pumped his fist in the air as he found her lips curving into a smile.

"Thank you God"

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Please read the note below!😊

Edited by JforChimpanzee - 11 years ago

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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Posted: 11 years ago

#709

Phew..another note.

I have another family function to attend this weekend, so I will be leaving on Friday afternoon and will be back on Sunday night!

After that, on 15th April its our festival called "Vishu" and my whole family (mayka) is coming to my home for celebrations. I am going to be inactive for almost a week and wont be able to update any of my stories..till 19th April or so.

Hope you all understand and do not spam the threads 😆

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