jus finished reading the whole story in one go..
it is a beautiful story n u hve written it so well that i was hooked to the story till i reached the last update๐
loved it to bits...
the pain arnav felt wen khushi was away from him, the connection he felt wen he met his daiughter for the first time, the relief, concern he felt seeing khushi after 7 years all described exceptionally well๐๐ผ
loved the independent, strong, yet still in love with arnav khushi very very much... i always felt that she was a little too yielding in the show in the last episodes...
n chaahat/camellia, oh wat can i say, for u have created such a beauty..
her cuteness, her maturity n her level of understanding... jus hats off..๐ค
anjali in ur story is really a raizada.. always wondered how the strong asr's sister was soo clinging in the show... but here wat anjali u have portrayed is perfect.. she is intelligent enough to understand wats going on around her...๐๐ผ
shyam n dadi are as evil as possible..๐
u have given akash some spine.. loved it...
payal n khushboo- super cuteโค๏ธ
loved HP, so happy to see khushi...
NK n La, as they should be.. great friends n helpful...๐ฅณ
rest of the family are cute as ever...
loved Siter Claire...๐๐ผ
wonderful story, in all...๐ค
pls do pm me wen u update next...
well done๐