jus finished reading the whole story in one go..
it is a beautiful story n u hve written it so well that i was hooked to the story till i reached the last update👏
loved it to bits...
the pain arnav felt wen khushi was away from him, the connection he felt wen he met his daiughter for the first time, the relief, concern he felt seeing khushi after 7 years all described exceptionally well👍🏼
loved the independent, strong, yet still in love with arnav khushi very very much... i always felt that she was a little too yielding in the show in the last episodes...
n chaahat/camellia, oh wat can i say, for u have created such a beauty..
her cuteness, her maturity n her level of understanding... jus hats off..🤗
anjali in ur story is really a raizada.. always wondered how the strong asr's sister was soo clinging in the show... but here wat anjali u have portrayed is perfect.. she is intelligent enough to understand wats going on around her...👍🏼
shyam n dadi are as evil as possible..😈
u have given akash some spine.. loved it...
payal n khushboo- super cute❤️
loved HP, so happy to see khushi...
NK n La, as they should be.. great friends n helpful...🥳
rest of the family are cute as ever...
loved Siter Claire...👍🏼
wonderful story, in all...🤗
pls do pm me wen u update next...
well done👏
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