With or Without You # 2| Ch 17 Pg 110/Thread 3 link Pg 125

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Posted: 11 years ago

#781

Beautifully nuanced story, & the latest updates are very philosophical in a way as Khushi is making an effort to confide her reservations to Arnav. Its strangely cathartic I'm sure as one confronts the feelings one is tempted to hide under the carpet or forget they ever happened.

Really love the way you raise the story to something beyond just romance.

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mbbsrocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#782

Update soon please..

Cant wait more

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Bavari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#783

Loved the chapter. Loved sensitive, loving and caring Arnav. As Khushi admits it he has been there for her always knowingly or unknowingly. Even though she knows and understand him she's Once bitten twice shy stage. But unfortunately she gave a chance to tormentor and refusing to trust a protector. Hope she realizes soon and forgive herself and start accepting him a part of her life so that he can be there completely there in Sarah's life. That Neel guy is really creepy and his new wife is a perfect pair. How come he's not continuing his patern with her. Waiting for the next chapter. Thx 4 d PM.

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Frozen_Ana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#784

Loved the chapter so much.. love the way u showed Arnav trying his best to let go of his past and make Khushi believe in him... Also liked the way u have depicted Khushi's insecurities with Arnav when her past had people like Neel... Neel seems to be over-possessive of the people around him which makes him kind of maniac!

Nani is so supportive and Sarah is as cute as always... 😳