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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow loving it enjoyed reading it like always
do continue soon😳
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TEREMERE LOVE STOR

aur manvi

Tavi wo guday virman k pass ajatain hay manvi virat k pichay chuptain hay aur virat k arm ko kas kar pakdtain hay virat manvi ko sir gumakar dhekta hay aur gudo ko angry 😡 look dta hay


Gunda1: ye bachay ye laday ko humain dey dey aur yaha se chup chap culti mar samja

Virat : gussay mainlaal hota hay aur gudoko apni blood shot eyez se dhekta hay ]nahi deta to kya karee gaa chup chap yhaha se chalay jao nahi to jo ajam hoga uska jimedar tum log kud hogay

Gunday2: bhai mere ko to lagta hay ki ye choka is ladke ka akaley hi mazza lutna chahata hay

Virat : akaely ladke dhekhi nahi ched na suru kardiya [ virat gunday k taraf badta hay pr manvi virat ka arm pakad kar roktain hay ]

Manvi : virat mat jao plzz mughee yelog bahut khatarnak lag rahay hay

[manvi ki taraf dhekta hay aun manvi ka hath apni baju se hata hay gundao k jam kar dhulai karta hay aur wapas ata hay

Virat : ab chaly ? challo

Manvi virat k pichay pichay langaday pao slowly chaltain hay virat pichay mudkar dhekta hay aur manvi avi v pichay hotain hay virat ko pata nahi hay ki manvi ki pair main chot lagi hay

Virat : 😡 tumahari cz se sab itnani tension hay aur tum hoki itani slow chal rahi ho kya wapas janey ka irada nahi hay kyaa ?

Manvi k akhoin se ashuu behene lagtain hay cz usey apnay pao main bhaut pain horaha hota hay aur tav virat ye baat notice karta hay wo manvi k pair ki taraf dhekata hay jo khoon se latpat hota hay

Virat : [ bhag kar manvi k pass jata hay ] i..im really sorry manvi tum mughay pehelay nahi bata saktain thi kya ? [ virat manvi k pao ko chune ki koshis kartain hay ]

Manvi [ manvi pichee jatain hay ] plzz virat mughe mat chuoo

Virat : 😡 dekho tumain chune k liye main mara nahi jara hu tumarain pair main choot lagi hay damit... [ virat manvi ko jabber jastain apni baho main uthata hay aur jeep main bithata hay ]

Virat jeep se 1stadd box nikal ta hay aur manvi k pair dressing karta hay aur jeep drive karta hay purain main manvi aur virat kuch nahi boltain kuch der baad virat manvi se puchta hay

Virat : bhuk lagi hay ? I mean kuch khaya tumne ?

Manvi : manvi sir hilatain hay aur ys kehetain hay virat ko pura rasta kuch nahi dhekaie deta hay kyun ki sab shop hoel band hochuka hota hay kuch der baad virman ko dhawa dhikaie padta hay

Manvi : virat gadi rook na [ virat stop d jeep]

Virat : kyaa huwaa ?

Manvi : mughee bhuk lagi hay

Virat : to ? [ pointing towards d dawa ] no manvi main tumain kuch der main ek achi si resturent lejauga not here

Manvi : plzz virat plzz meko yahi khana hay plzz

Virat : chaloo

Virat carry manvi in his arm n went 2 d dawa

Papag : woe qudiye ki lau tuday wastay ?

Manvi : kya milta hay yaha uncleg

Papag : woee sab kuch milta hay g lasi , makid roti sarso da sag , biryani parade sab kuch j sab kuch

Manvi : hwww mu main pani agaya app sab lado plzz

Papag: koe nai g avi ajaye ga [to virat] mudenu ki lau ?

Virat : [with uk face] no thank mughee iney ladijiyee

Papag : tik hay g [ to worker ] woi chutuuu

Chotu : ji sardar g

Papag: woe kudinu sab lady

Chotu : g sardar ji

Kuch der baad

Chotu : ye lo mem sab

Manvi : thank u [manvi start 2 eat jst then] virat tum v khahona bhahut tasty hota hay davhay khana

Virat : no thanks main ye sab nahi khata samay

Manvi : han tumain to resturent k uplain huway khanay ki adata hay main kharahi hu

Manvi kana suru kartain hay virat manvi ko dhekney lagtahay manvi kuch der main sab kuch chit kar detain hay

Virat [thinking] o god insaan hay ya ajagar ktna khatain hay } : pointing 2 d lassy : ye v khalo

Manvi [ J] hmm [ manvi lassi pine lagtain hay virat k eyez manvi k lip main padtain hay aur lassi manvi k lip k corner se niche girta hay virat manvi k lip main dheek ne lagta hay tavi main jor se Dakar martain hay aur virat scenes main ata hay

Virat : hogaya ki aur kuch v khana hay

Manvi smile n nodded her head in no

Chutu : mem sab app ka total 255/- rupaye huway

Virat pesay nikal kar deta hay aur manvi ko apni bhao main uthakar wapas gadi main lejata hay viraman ki jodi dhek kar

Daway walay sardarg : kinee soni sodi innu kisi kin ajar nalagay wahi guru ye Jodi nu hamaysaa duwa denaa

Manvi : virat ?

Virat : kyaa huwaa any pro ?

[irately ]

Manvi : wo tx main kal tumarain sarain peay chukka dhugi sachii wala promiss

Virat : kyaaa? 😲 uski koe jarurat nahi hay

Manvi : nahi main na kisi ki udhar nahi raktain thi so main kal tumarain pesay dey dugi

Virat : [irately ] whar ever ?

Virat driving karta hay achnak manvi ko simi ki yad attain

hay manvi apni mobile cheek kartain hay blc nil n battery down

Manvi : [slowly] virat ?

Virat : ab kyaa hay ?

Manvi : kya main tumhara phone use karsaktain hu ?

Virat [irately ] kyun tumharain pass tumahara phone nahi hay kyaa ?

Manvi : hay pr wo kya hay na mere phone ki blance khatam hogaya hay soo plzzz

Virat : [giving his mobile ] ye lo sirf phone karna mobile check mat karna

Manvi simi ko call kartain hay aur simi ko kehetain hay ki wo tik hay aur hostel main hay wo tik hay aur bobby ko apnay sat hajj raklay aur kal clg milnay k liye boltain hay manvi k baatain sunkar virat shock hota hay

Virat : r u mad huu tum ne jhut kyun bola ? 😡 k tum tik hoo ?

Manvi : [calmly ] agar main simi ko jhut boltain nahi to mughee wo avi mil ne ko butain aur [ pointing 2 d led] aur ye lekar main simi k paas v nahi ja saktain soo isliye

Virat : oo 😡 ab sab ghar chalay jayegay to tum kya karoo gi avi to hostel v band hochuka hay [kuch der socnay k baad ] kahi tum ye to soch nahi rahi ho na ki tum mere ghar main rukogi huuu 😡 agar yeshaaa hay to main pehely

Manvi : [lil anger] 😡 tumain taqlif karnay ki koe jarurat nahi main ajj raat apnay rajan dada k ghar main rulu gi tum bs whohi chod do

virat driving karta hay kuch der baad

manvi : ruko [ virat immediately stop d jeep ] abb kya huwaa ? yahi pass main mere bhaiya ka ghar hay main chali jaugi

virat : main tumain pohochdugaa kaha taq jana hay

manvi : nahi thank u wo kya hay ki itani raat ko agar main kisi ladkay k sat hunk ghar jau gi to mughay bhahut dat padegi [ manvi slowly nichay utartain hay n pichee mudtain hay ]by d way thank u 4 help

virat : 😡 wat ever jaan chutin to lakho payee [ virat jeep lekar chala jata hay ]

[ manvi slowly slowly chaltain hay aur rajan k ghar k bahar attain hay par rajan k ghar main tala laga huwa hota hay ] " ye rajan dada khaha chalay gaye ab main kya karoo ummm [shitting on d bench ] chal main ajj raat yahi pe tughay gujara karna hogaa

Nxt side

Virat drive karraha hota hay tavi uskay dil main achanak manvi ka khayal ata hay

Virat gadi rokta hay [to self] virat tu pagal hogaya hay manvi ko itani raat ko tunay akelay janey diya are uski pair main choot lagi hay wo becharin kesay chalay gi ... o god aur to aur wo to anath hay na to ye rajan bhaiya khaha se agay kahi manvi ne mere baat k cz se to jhoot nahi bola ooo virat tu v naa ek no. ka ideate hay "

Virat immediately apni jeep ghumata hay aur manvi ko jaha choda tha uha jata hay manvi ek ghar k samney ajata hay jaha manvi ek bench main so rahi hotain hay virat ko manvi ka yesay sota huwa dhek bhahut pain hota hay bura v lagta hay aur kud pe gushaa v ata hay virat manvi k sleep ko disturb na kartain huway slowly manvi ko apni strong arm uthta hay aur usay jeep main rakta hay virat manvi ko apni ghar main lejata hay aur apni room main lejakar apni bed main suladeta hay aur manvi ko sotain huway dhekta hay aur virat achnak manvi ki beauty main khojata hay kuch der baad virat sense main ata hay aur virat coach main jakar sojata hay

Next day manvi ki need kultain hay wo dirain se akhay kholtain hay aur achnak shock hojatain hay kyun ki woe k kubsurt royal room main hotain kal to wo bahar thi , wo apni niche dhketain hay wo kud ek kingsize big bed main sohi hue thi pr kal to wo bench main thi manvi thodi dar jatain hay won ajar ghumakar dhektain hay aur manvi kin ajar virat pr padtain hay jo couch main soraha hota hay manvi samaj jatain hay ki wo virat k ghar main virat k room main virat k bed main soe hay manvi aur dar jatain hay aur soch letain hay issey pehelay ki virat uthkar fir se manvi pe gushaa utarain ussay pehay lay manvi us place se culty marlay isliye wo jaldi se bed se utartain hay aur bhagne wali hotain hay tavi wo bhul jatain hay ki uski pair main chot lagi hay aur dard k mare uskay musey awaz nikal ti hay

Manvi : aaahhh😭

Virat : manvi ki awaz sunkar jaldi se uthahay aur manvi k pass jata hay ][ inpanic voice] manvi tum tik to hona I mean dard hora hay kyaa I mean tumain kuch chaiye to mughe bulaya hota kyun uthi tum bed se

Manvi touch by virat care

Manvi :[softly ] nahi woo main yaha kesay aiee I mean main to bench main ...

Virat : lil anger 😡han yaa tum to kub keherahi thi mere rajan dada kehekar bench main sorahi thi tum

Manvi : 😡 lil anger] to mere dada ghar pe nahi they to kya mere galtain hay kyaa mughee kya pata wo ghar par nahi hogay hato

Virat : khaha jarhi ho

Manvi : bathroom kya nahi ja saktain

Virat : ruko [ carry in his arm again ]

Manvi : [virman sudden eye lock n manvi feel nervous then loking here there ] ummm vi..rattt wo main kud chali jaugi

Virat : han mughee pata hay chal saktain ho tum

[virat manvi ko washroom k door bahar chodta hay ab jao n han main bahar hu ok manvi luck d door from inside n take deep breath ]

After that virat manvi ko hostel k bahar chod deta hay manvi virat ko thanks boltain hay aur virat chala jata haybench main so rahi tum main tumain uthkar laya yaa tum to kub keherahi thi mere rajan dada kehekar bench main sorahi thi tum

Manvi : 😡 lil anger] to mere dada ghar pe nahi they to kya mere galtain hay kyaa mughee kya pata wo ghar par nahi hogay hato

Virat : khaha jarhi ho

Manvi : bathroom kya nahi ja saktain

Virat : ruko [ carry in his arm again ]

Manvi : [virman sudden eye lock n manvi feel nervous then loking here there ] ummm vi..rattt wo main kud chali jaugi

Virat : han mughee pata hay chal saktain ho tum

[virat manvi ko washroom k door bahar chodta hay ab jao n han main bahar hu ok manvi luck d door from inside n take deep breath ]

After that virat manvi ko hostel k bahar chod deta hay manvi virat ko thanks boltain hay aur virat chala jata hay

finally finishhh 1st thread 👏 yapeee

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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

TEREMERE LOVE STORY


jor jor se chilaney lagtain hay "plzz plzz ughee chod o plz plzz

😭 manvi ki sasy uk jaain hay tavi achanak manvi koek awaz suaidetain hay "manvi " manvi akay khol kar dhektain hay aur ye aur koe nahi manvi ki dil ki dhadkan virat hota hay manvi shoch aur chup hojatain hay manvi virat ko apne pass pakar apney app ko safe mehesus kartain hay 😭 aur roni awaz main boltain hay : virat 😭

Aur virat ko jor se hug kartain hay aur hay 😭 virat manvi k tiny boby ko apne strong arm se pakdta hay aur manvi k back ko rub karta hay

Tavi wo guday virman k pass ajatain hay manvi virat k pichay chuptain hay aur virat k arm ko kas kar pakdtain hay virat manvi ko sir gumakar dhekta hay aur gudo ko angry 😡 look dta hay

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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
nice update he save her from goon and
after that he take care her update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Really nyc update. Ist thread is awesome. Waiting for your second thread.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Superb update!!! Thanks for the PM!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
awesome update
hate maya and tanya
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
awesome
loved it
thanks for the pm

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