Akdha FF :-)I Born For You... imp note pg 36 pls check

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Hi i like to write a FF. this story is about love ❤️of-course between two people who know each other since childhood (Pari and Rajat) both fathers are friend both are business tycoon. but before stating this story i want to know about your response. sorry for grammatical mistake
This is my first attempt. so sorry if you are not happy with my IBFY

Chapter 1- Page 1
Chapter 2-page 2
Chapter3- page 3
Chapter 4-page 4
Chapter5-page 5
Chapter6-page 7
Chapter7-page 10
Chapter8-page 13
Chapter9-page 17
Chapter10-page 20


Chapter11-page 23
Chapter 12- page 25
Chapter 13-page 28
Chapter 14-page 29
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Posted: 11 years ago
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plss cotn dear
i will will fr yur ff
and dont frgt to pm,me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arey haa sure sure .. please commence 😳 😳 😳
waiting.!! 😊
all d best ... I know you'll ROCK 👏
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chapter 1
Pari(14 years old) is waiting for Rajat(16 years old) in beach she his hiding something in her hand Rajat enter the beach.
(Pari and Rajat was family friends their both fathers are so close to each other more than a business partner. Pari and Rajat stay in same home because their mothers are died in accident they both lived with their father in same house. Rajat always feel happy when he spend a time with Pari. Rajat father like Pari more than Rajat. Its like a cute family. Rajat always say that he want Pari in every step of his journey of life. Rajat father looked at him and smile and wish your dream come true).
Pari said you are late again🤔. Rajat said sorry in sweet voice Pari smile at Rajat and show a single white flower ( image whatever flower you like ) and said Happy Birthday Rajat🥳 with her cute smile, Rajat replied i am waiting for this wish since i woke up. you always try to give me a shocking surprise. Rajat take the flower from pari hand Rajat went close to her ears and whispered something Pari look so anger and tensed but Rajat giving his cute expression and waiting for Pari replies. pari didn't speak a word she move backward Rajat hold her hand and move close to her and kissed her cheeks😳. Pari didn't speak a word she release her hand and gave a tight slap in Rajat cheeks💔. Rajat said how dare you, you will pay for this one day... Pari replied i will never forgive you...😡

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SORRY FOR GRAMMATICAL OR SPELLING MISTAKE I UPDATE NEXT CHAPTER AFTER GETTING 15 LIKES BECAUSE I WANT YOUR RESPONSE
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start dear...
Continue with it...
And if possible pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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itni itni choti choti update...elongate next one...lovely good start
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww...another parijat FF...bring it on dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting start..
plz pm me if u cn...
i like ur small update..bt plz do evryday😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow wat a cute start😊plz continue sooon dear...aisa kya bol diya RT ne ki she is so angry...plz update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 2
Evening Birthday party start in Parijat House🥳. Pari and Rajat is extremely tensed and Pari is crying Rajat word is disturbing her again and again😭. Rajat say to himself i will make you accept for the reason you slapped me, i will never tolerate this😡. Pari and Rajat enter the party hall. both sharing a anger look both father is shocked by their behavior😕, this is the first time both sharing a anger look. Rajat cut the cake everyone singing a birthday song Rajat is not happy with Pari behavior. Pari sitting in the corner of the hall and she is not in mood to celebrate. Rajat father ask what do you want for Birthday, Rajat is silent his father ask him again. Rajat replied I want to stay away from you all everyone is shocked and his father ask what?... Rajat replied with is sad face i want to go abroad for my higher studies... Pari is shocked but didn't reply anything she left the hall with tear eyes. Rajat said i do my packing please get me a ticket i don't want to stay here for a minute. Rajat father said i only live for you, so you also want to leave me, he ask to reconsider is decision Rajat replied its my final decision. Rajat went to his room close the door and start cry and speak to himself, Why pari? because of you i want to leave my dad, my friends, everything Rajat can't control himself he shout I going to miss you Pari, i miss u badly. how can i spend the day without you, to whom i share my happiness and sadness. you will pay for this. In Pari room Pari speak to her mom photo. Mom why everyone leaving me alone. Rajat is very good friend of mine. We spend every moment together. now with whom i spend my time, with whom i fight, for whom i want to wait without a reason Pari cry badly. She fell in sleep while crying. Rajat enter Pari room she was sleeping peacefully with her cute expression, Rajat saw and sit near her, Rajat write a note i miss you Pari one day i will come back for the return, you will pay for it, Rajat kissed her forehead and start move Pari hold Rajat hand in sleep, Rajat move her hand and left the room with tear eyes. Rajat father gave ticket to Rajat. Rajat replied i miss u father, i come back soon. Rajat took blessing from both Father. Pari father said I am sorry Rajat i know you and Pari fought but i don't know the reason behind this but you both are good friend so for our sake don't break your Friendship. Rajat took blessing leave from there without saying a word. Next day morning Pari woke up and read the note and start to cry and say to herself, I will never forgive you😡. you don't even said a goodbye, I miss u Rajat (pari continue to cry)...😭

Precap: Rajat back to India
Edited by niveasree - 11 years ago

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