OS.....plight of Yudhishthira( Pt-3 updated pg 2 )

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-Plight of Yudhishthira-



" Patni ki raksha karna pati ka dharma hota hai...aur aap Dharmaraj aap toh mujhe dyut mein hargayae..." Paanchali was screaming in anger. Yudhishthir stood in front & listened to her he had lost any right over her the day he couldn't protect her from that vile Dusshasan.

" aap pathar ki tarah kyun khadae, uttar dijiyae mujhe..." Paanchali screamed at him... " mujhe aapse kabhi uttar nahi milega, aapkae liye toh keval aapka dharma mainae rakhta hai...mein toh aapkae liye kuch bhi nahi..." saying this Paanchali just walked away from him...


" Nahi...Paanchali..." Yudhishthira woke up sweating...he looked at his surroundings they were in a small hut...it was Yudhishthir's year with Paanchali so they shared one hut & rest shared another for the nights...Paanchali was sleeping peacefully beside him her one hand around his waist holding him tightly...he had his hand around her making her head to rest on his shoulders...his hand tightened around her...he hugged her close...

" Nahi... " he whispered " Paanchali ko nahi kho sakta mein... " he stared at her serene face...he slowly untangled himself from her grip & rested her beside him & got up from their bed of grass...& walked outside...

Fresh air hit his face...but he kept walking...he got his spear from the shed...& went to the clearing near their hut...& started practicing...his each & every move contained frustration, anger, his helplessness for the situation...out of blind frustration he swung his spear in such a way that it got swayed from his hand & hit him hard on his hand...Blood started gushing out...

" AARYA... " came Paanchali's scream from behind...

PS :: Creation credit to Sohini
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sayee thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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do tell me how is it...😊
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nice attempt dear... 😊..do continue
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Beautiful...extreamly touching..i hv always had a soft corner deep in my heart for yudi...so pls continue at the earliest...badly wanna see some romance👍🏼😳
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pls continue it is fav pls
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@Sayee...
It's awesome.. 👏👏
I never knew you could write so well. ⭐️ Do continue dear. 👍🏼
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wow sayee this is very goood!! continue soon!
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Paanchali suddenly felt the hands around her tightening, hugging her close, it were so tight that she could swear on Govind that Aaryaputra Yudhishthir was scared of something & then she heard faint whispering beside her which she couldn't make out. She was just trying to figure out her Aarya's strange behavior when she felt a slight tug on her hands & out of fear she tightened her hands around her Aarya's waist, she had this habit of hugging her Aarya & sleeping under their arms protection for which she was always made fun of by her Aaryaputra's that the one who is born of fire is afraid of sleeping alone at night, but what they don't know is that she does that out of pure love for them, but she let them have the jest because she knew that deep in their heart they loved to have her under their arms protection.

She felt that tug again & then the weight considerably lessened beside her. She thought Aarya was going to attend nature's call so she loosened her grip & let him go.Minutes passed & Aarya hadn't come back, she slowly opened her eyes, there wasn't anyone in the hut other than her. She got up from the grass bed & went out in search for him, she looked all around near the hut but she couldn't find him. She went on searching for him.

Off lately Aaryaputra Yudhishthir's behavior towards her & rest of the brothers has changed a lot. He has withdrawn into himself, become more introvert. He has lost the confidence of taking decisions for the rest of us. The eyes in which she always found pure love for her & the four brothers were now haunted or she could say blank, looking into his eyes is like staring on a blank wall. She longed to see the warmth filled eyes of her Aaryaputra Yudhishthir.

She slowly walked in the direction of the clearing, she heard the faint thuds on the grass pads of the clearing. She was just in time to see Aarya cut his hand with the spear...the very hands which were already burnt as a result of Aaryaputra Bheem's vow...

" AARYA " came out the scream from her mouth...

Edited by sayee - 11 years ago
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WOW Sayee..!!!
This is awesome.. 👏👏
Do continue soon. Love the way you are portraying Yudi-Drau's relationship at the same time also describing her other aaryas. ⭐️
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Originally posted by: Sukanya_Datta

WOW Sayee..!!!
This is awesome.. 👏👏
Do continue soon. Love the way you are portraying Yudi-Drau's relationship at the same time also describing her other aaryas. ⭐️



thanks Sukanya...😃

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