Lost... AY oneshot - Page 2

simply BRILLANT!!...
seriously shrey ur the only one who brings me back to remix...ay...n fics!!...u have a gift...make most of it!...

as for the fic...it was awesome!!...n after i read it...thr was a mixed emotion...it was incomplete but evn then complete n understood!...n tht only comes wid ur style of writing...

id be glad to read more...
thks..

i dunno wat to say.......is this a continuation of zilch? seemed like tht 😳 really watever i words i use wudnt b apt to tell u how much i luved it sweety.....i cud so much relate to this n yuvis pain.....the best part of the one shot was this
"I know you love me," she had whispered, ignoring my look of shock. "Go on with your life," she had said, once again ignoring the unsaid question in my eyes.

"Why?" I had managed to blurt out at last, and her face had taken on a patronizing look, almost as if she were trying to explain the why the apple fell on Newton's head to a five-year old.

"Because, Yuvi," she had whispered, "You have got nothing to lose." She had died the next second, and the dying expression on her face was the calmest I have ever seen


i just luv ashi soo much in this part.....u truely made her appear so great wen she told yuvi to get on in life....n tht he has nuthin to loose.....wen she herself also knew she was everything to him n wud always b!!!

bt still all she wished b4 her last breath was yuvi to b good n hav a gd life.....i totally luved ashi so so so much in this!!!

thank u shreyasi .....only coz of ppl like u even now after ages of the shows end.....u still manage to make me love n respect n cherish these two ppl so much more each day!!! just by reminding how nobody in the world can b as mad as them as matured as them nd as hopeless luvers as them 😳 😳 😳 just a plain thank u is all i want to say......4 potraying ay so well in each one shot u write! luv ya so much 🤗

goshhh Shreyasi, firslt sorry dear, as I was not getting the net so was not able to view all the threads sweety.....gurl...you brought tears to me 😭 😭 😭 , I could really relate this fic to my own life yarrr 😭 😭 , it is extremely outstanding, great work, simply great work, I hardly cry in fics, but this one, goshhh...your power of expressing is way beyond one can imagine dear, honestly,your one shots are more than enuf for a person to get carried away in the world of words, 👏 👏 👏 hatts off dear, believe it or not, I applauded this shot after I read it 👏 👏 👏 I donno what more to write, as I am choked till now, AASHi and YUVI relationship is a world to all AY-AINS, and you did complete justice at this challneging concept, I swear, I cannot write nething like this, not even 10% of what you expressed, I wish I could, but can't re, but I truely enjoy reading your shots, ZILCH was a heart taking one, and this was ******************************************************* you have used the correct word OCEAN to decribe such a big thing in couple of sentences, your fic was mind blowing dear, simply gr8 work, do write more, as now I'm getting addicted to it 👏
I read this para, and got flown away like a breeze yarrr... 😭

"I know you love me," she had whispered, ignoring my look of shock. "Go on with your life," she had said, once again ignoring the unsaid question in my eyes.

"Why?" I had managed to blurt out at last, and her face had taken on a patronizing look, almost as if she were trying to explain the why the apple fell on Newton's head to a five-year old.

"Because, Yuvi," she had whispered, "You have got nothing to lose." She had died the next second, and the dying expression on her face was the calmest I have ever seen


what to say, you made my day, though in an extremely emmotional manner, but I salute you for this work of yours dearest!!! 👏