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I am gonna start a Fan-Fiction on Samman and Kaku

Part 1

It is 8:30 and a girl dressed in jeans is getting ready to go to college whose name is Kakul. Vanshika her sister is upstairs sleeping.

Kakul talking to her self:OMG! It is so late and di didn't even wake up yet!!! I better go call her before papa screams at her!

Kakul goes to call Vans. Vans is still asleep. When Kakul says her name Vans gets mad and screams at Kakul for waking her up. Kakul has no mad expression on her face and leaves quietly. On the other hand Vans is not even a little bit sorry and goes back to sleep. At college Kakul meets her friends Sameera and Gayatri.

Sameera:Did Vanshika sream at u again?

Kakul:How do u know?

Sameera:Come on! There has never been a single day when u came to college without getting screamed at by Vans!

Kakul,Sameera and Gayatri have a little chat and laugh at some jokes by Kakul and Sameera. Just when they were supposed to go to class a red car enters and a guy gets off. The guy is first shown in bits but later we see the whole him. Everyone looks at him but Kakul seems the least interested. Kakul grabs Gayatri and Sameera's hand and goes from there. While Kakul and her friends were alking towards their classroom, Kakul bumps into the new guy. When she bumps her books fall down and she and the guy bend down to get them but while getting them Kakul and the new guy bump their heads together.Both rub their heads.

The new guy:Sorry! I was not seeing where I was going.

Kakul:Oh! No need to say sorry! Actually it was my fault tooo! I was not seeing where I was going either.

The new guy:By the way...People call me Samman.

Kakul:So what should I do it people call u Samman.

Samman:I was thinking if we could be friends. Friends?

Samman takes his hand out for Kakul to shake.

Kakul:Excause me. But I don't become friends with strangers.

Samman:Okay! Maybe later.

Samman goes. Vanshika who was standing and watching it all was a bit angry that Samman didn't ask her for being friends. Vanshika goes up to Kakul to ask her some questions.Kakul was abou to leave when Vanshika stops her.

Vans:Who was he?

Kakul:Who?

Vans:Look! Don't act to smart or else u don't know what I can do!I am talking about the guy that you were talking to!

Kakul:Oh him? He is new and his name is Samman. Anything else?

Vans:Just go!

Kakul,Sameera and Gaytri leave for class.

Part 2

College ended. Gayatri went home. Sameera and Kakul were walkind when suddenly a basketball comes and hits Kakul on the head. Kakul takes the ball and turns around to see the basketball team including Samman playing basketball.

Basketball person 1:Kakul give me the ball.

Kakul:Can I have a try?

Basketball person 2:Girls and basketball! Forget about it and give back the ball!

Basketball person 3:Are yaar! Let's give her a try and show the girls that they are good for nothing.

Kakul goes and faces against the guys alone and shoots 5 baskets!After the game was over.

Kakul:So what were u guys saying? U were saying that girls can't play basketball right?Well how was that?

The basketball players mouths were left wide open. They didn't have an answer so Samman answered for them instead.

Samman:Nice game!

Kakul:Thanks!

Basketball person 2:That was seriously a good game but sad that our team doesn't have any place for u or else we would surley have told u to play.

Kakul:No problem.

Just then Vanshika comes there.

Vans:Kakul what are u doing her?

Kakul:Nothing.

Vans:Just go home right now!

Kakul:Bye! By the way....if any of u guys need any help call me.

When Kakul goes.....Vanshika tries talking to Samman but in vain. Samman goes to the team and satarts playing basketball. Vanshika leaves.

Part 3

It is night and Samman and Kakul are looking at the moon and smiling.

Samman to himself:Wow! It is just awsome to look at the moon shining down at u in the night?

Kakul:The moon looks so beautiful!I wish I could stand here all night!

Samman:Me too moon! I wish I can stand here all night!

Samman and Kakul go back to bed and asleep they are.

Part 4

Kakul leaves for college. She meets Gayatri. Sameera is not here. Just when they are about to go the basketball players come up to her.

B-ball player 1:We need to talk to u.

Kakul:About what?

BBP 2:About next tuesdays basketball game.

Kakul:What should I do about it?

BBP3:We were wondering if u could play on the team. Do u wanna play?

Kakul:But what happened? Why me?

Samman comes and tells Kakul what the BBP really mean.

Samman:Kakul they want to ask you if you could play the basketball game next tuesday?

Kakul:I can get that part but why do they want me to play only and not anyone else?

Samman:We do have other players but none are as good as you and we need a good player to go to game.

Kakul:OOOhhhh!What happened to Sabouth?

Samman:Actually when we were practising yesterday...he actually fell down and broke his foot and the doctor said that he can't play for 2 weeks.

Kakul:Ok! I will play.

Samman:Thanks!

Kakul:No problem.

Samman: Ok then I will pick u up to go joging each day?

Kakul:Ok!

Part 5 coming soon....

Edited by KripAngad-Kyph - 18 years ago

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Shariefah thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#2
thanks for taking the iniative to start a fanfic

i hope the fans will love your work 😳

sha
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Posted: 18 years ago
#3
AwesOoomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Workkkreally interestinggg!!!!!!!Love it :)
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Posted: 18 years ago
#4
very good stuff!!!!!
very nice job done!!!!!
relly good!!!!!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OK! I am back! But since I wasn't able to continue for the past days due to some personal problems I would like to make up for that so you guys will get some extra to read!

Part 5
Over the past few days Samman kept on picking Kakul to go joging every day while Vans kept staning there looking like a dumbo in between them.On the day of the game, Samman's team won. It was mostly Samman and Kakul who scored most of the points. After the game was over, Samman's friend invited Samman for a party.
Samman's friend:Hey Samman are you comming to the party tonight?

Samman:No yaar. I don't feel like it.


Samman's friend:Okay.

Then Samman's friend goes up to Kakul and says and asks her the same question and Kakul says yes to come to the party. Samman is listening to all this.

Samman:Hey yaar Mahesh listen! You were asking me to come to the party right! I am coming.

Kakul is smiling and so is Samman.After all the team players leave Samman and Kakul are the only ones left.

Samman:So Kakul. So u wnat me to pick u up to go to the party tonight?

Kakul:That would be great but I have my own car.

Samman:But..it would be fun if we are in the same car.

Kakul:Excause me? Are you starting to like me?

Samman stumped and blushing.

Samman:No!

Kakul:U mean u don't like me as a friend!!!

Samman:NO! I didn't mean it that way! I meant I like u as a friend but not as a....you know what I mean?

Kakul:Ya, ya! I know what u mean.

Samman:I better be going since I need to get ready for the party.

Kakul:Me too!Bye!

Samman:Bye!

Samman and Kakul wave to each other! As they are going different ways, Samman and Kakul look back to see if the other is looking. First Samman turns but Kakul is walking. Then Kakul turns around and Samman is walking. Then both turn aroung at the same time and are embarresed. Then they both start running and don't turn around.

Part 6

It is night and Kakul is getting ready to go to the party. Just when Vanshika comes.

Vans:Where are u going?

Kakul:To a party.

Vans:U are not going!

Kakul:Why?

Vans:Because I said so.

Outside Samman is waiting for Kakul to come. And ringing the horn after horn. Vans and Kakul hear it nad Vans goes to the window and sees Samman.

Kakul:Di, if u want to go then u are invited.

Vans was first going to say no but when she saw Samman she said yes.

Vans:Sure!

Vans goes to get ready while Kakul goes outside to meet Samman.

Kakul:Samman what are u doing?

Samman keeps on looking at Kakul like he has seen an angel and looks like he is going to fall down. by the wahyt he looked like he is ready to drool over her right now.

Samman:U are lookign pretty.

Kakul:What?Can u say it again?

Just then Samman comes out of his dream and says,

Samman:Oh nothing.

Kakul smiles.Just then Vanshika comes.

Samman:Kakul is she coming with us?

Kakul:Yes.

Vans:Hi! I am Vanshika! Kakul elder sister.

Samman:Nice to meet you.

Just when Kakul was about to fall Samman catches her and holds her. Vans is left dumbstruk. Kakul gets up and both her and Samman start blushing.

Kakul:Sorry. I was just that I am not used to wear heals that's all.

Samman:Oh no problem.

Vans is standing there looking like she is thinking that don't they know I am here too look.

Samman opens the door for Kakul.

Samman:Kakul there is one problem.

Kakul:What is it?

Samman:This car can only have 2 people sit in it.

Kakul:Oh okay.That means one of us will have to come in my car?

Samman:Yep.

Vans to herself:There is no way I am going to let Kakul go alone with Samman.

Vans pretends that she is hurt.

Vans:Kakul I don't think I will be able to drive bcz my feet are really hurthing.

Kakul:Oh no problem di! U can go with Samman and I will go in my car.

Vans gives an evil smile.

Samman:But..

Kakul:Samman take di, I will come in another car.

Samman:Okay.

Will do more later.Right now I have to go bcz it is night rite now.😊


Edited by KripAngad-Kyph - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey! Continuation of yesterday 😊 !

Part 6 - Continued....

Samman and Vans are in the car and Samman keeps on thinking about Kakul and doesn't feel easy while driving the car. Vabs starts talking to Samman

Vans:Samman can u put some music on plz?

Samman:Hold on...I need to call Kakul and ask her how she is doing.

Vans starts to get anry.

Vans:Umm...I know Kakul she is alright.

Samman:No but still.

Vans:Ok!

Samman calls Kakul and Kakul picks the phone up.

Samman:Are u okay?

Kakul:Why? I am perfectly fine.

Samman:Oh nothing I was just feeling uneasy so I thought I call u and find out how u are doing.

Samman and Kakul kept on taking and Vans started to et more angry and angry. Just then while Samman and Kakul were taking Samman and Vans arrived at the party. Kakul was right behind them.Samman gets off the car adn goes straight to Kakul.

Samman:Kakul so let's go inside?

Kakul:Sure!

Kakul goes to Vans and tells her to come inside.The three go to the gate but the guard stops them.

Guard:Stop!

Samman:Why?

Guard:I know u guys are invited to the party but to go the party u have to be in pairs.

Kakul:Oh! We didn't know that so can we still go inside?

Guard:No! Do one thing! There is a guy who wants to go inside but doens't have a person with him. How about one of u girls go with him and one with this guy.

Kakul:Where is the guy?

The guard points at the guy and Kakul goes to call him. Vans and Samman go after Kakul.

Kakul:Excause me?

Guy:Ya?

Kakul:The guard said that u needed someone to go inside with so I was wondering if u wouldn't mind going with one of us.

Guy:Sure! BTW what is your name?

Kakul:I am Kakul, she is my elder sis Vansikha and he is my....

Guy:Boyfriend?

Kakul:No! Just a friend, Samman is his name.

Samman:Kakul let's go. Vans will come with Rocky.

Before Kakul could say anything Samman pulls her and goes from there leaving Vans alone with Rocky.

Rocky:See I told u, they like each other.

Vanshika smiles nervously.

When the 4 get inside Kakul and Samman go straight to their friends leaving Vans and Rocky alone again. Later the DJ plays his music.

DJ:All the couples on the dance floor and we are going to play a game.

Samman:Come on Kakul! Let's go!

Kakul:OK!

Both of them go.

DJ:Guys so basically I am going to play music and then when the music stops whoever the light shines on will be the couple to sit in this chair and the couple sitting on the chair will guess a number and then the monitor will decide if the couple will make a good pair or not.

DJ:Are you ready?

Everyone:YES!

Everyone starts doing slow dance.


Edited by KripAngad-Kyph - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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story is nice 😳
come on guys give her some motivation
luv
sha

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