Ishqzaade part 3 updated on page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is story of asha negi and rithvik dhanjani from the time they were bffs.. as u all know they have not clearly told how they cnfessed their feelings for each other.. so i just imagined what could have happened between them..this is the first time i am writing any story.. and as a die hard ashvik fan i chose to write on their love story.. this story is all about ashvik being bffs, then realising their love for each other and finally confessing..this will be a s.s as i dnt want to stretch it.. bt lets see ye kitna lambaa jataa hai.


And this is my combine work wid Divya...and dat it is Divya's concept.


See de nxt post for Charecter Sketch

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Rithvik Dhanjani:
A hot and handsome 24 year old guy... plays the role of arjun in pavitra rishta.. very charming has a great fan following... multi talented, super fun to be with has an excellent sense of humour... cares about his family, friends.. loves his mother the most. In short he is a gentleman... he is great friends with co star asha negi and likes her tooo... bt never realises it..


Asha negi:

A 23 year old beautiful and simple girl.. plays role of purvi in pavitra rishta... she is also talented and crazy.. loves food, hanging with friends... she is generally seen with rithvik dhanjani her co star...she too likes him but never relaises it.


Ankit Narang:

Plays role of soham.. he s best friend of rithvik.. he is the only one who is damn sure that there is much more than friendship between rithvik and asha... he tries to make them realise their love towards each other..


Shruti Kanwar:

Plays the role of ovi... she is nyc, sweet girl.. nd friends with both rithvik and asha.. she somewhere know that they both like each other bt she is not sure..




So do comment whether i should or not continue this story or not..
Edited by ramya.reddy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yipeee first one to comment... Hey dear itz an awsum intro... waiting fr d update...
Continue soon n plz do pm me when u update...:-):-):-):-):-):-(
Eagerly Waiting:-):-):-):-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow!!!! ss on rithvik and asha!!! loved d cs di, waiting for the 1st chappy!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey ramya it is really awesome. Do continue soon.
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you everyone.. me nd ramya are workng on nxt part nd will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow loved the prologue..cant wait to read the first chapter..!!
do PM me when u update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ramya di...😃
ashvik story...😊
wow...👏
jaldi se update karo...❤️
can't wait...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1

Aftr pavitra rishta shoot rithvik: yaar negi, mjhe roz twitter pe msgs aate h ki arjun purvi ko milaa do milaa do.. bt pta ni hmare creatives q ni sunte.. asha: haa yaar tu shi keh raha h... hmne kitna request kia bt koi manta hi ni h.., khair chod.. kya ptaa aagey kuch acha ho.. age achi story aa jae aur arjun purvi mil jae.. chal chod ye sab kuch khaane chalte h... rithvik: bhukkad jab dekho khana khana.. kabhi khane ke aage socha hai tne.. asha: kya h irritate mat kr. chalna hai to chal. mjhe bht bhook lgi h.. itni mehnat k baad khana to bnta h.. rithvik: (pretending to b shocked) han han madam mehnat to bas tu hi krti h.. baki saare to yaaha santre chilne aate h... asha: (slaps rithvik) chal raha h ya abi tri bakwaas baaki h... rithvik: tjhse kaun jeet skta h... chal...

at restaurant rithvik: manga jo tjhe mangana h.. asha: mjhe to bht bhook lgi h. so ek dal makhani, paranthe aur achaar aur sweet dish me gulaab jamun.. tu bta rithvik: yhi manga le do plate (waiter comes) waiter: yes madam.. asha: 4 paranthe aur do daal makhani... aur ek plate gulaab jamun. waiter: ok.. ( in the mean time) asha: god itni der kyu lag rhi h.. ab tak khaaana q ni aaya. rithvik: unhe pta ni tha na ki yaha asha the great aane waali h.. phle pta hta to tre lie bna k rakhte. asha: kya h tjhe.. sidha answer ni dena aata rithvik: isme kya answer du.. jab bn jaega to aaa jaega.. thoda wait kr..

(waiter comes with the order) asha: finally. waiter: mam ghee lengi aap asha: haa haa daal do. he does that.. asha: bhaiyaa aur daal do. rithvik: kitna khaegi fat jaegi.. rehne de, asha: shut up bhaiya aap daalo. waiter( to rithvik): sir ap rithvik: ni ni rehne do..

asha: khaa liaa kar kuch ni hotaa.. rithvik : tu hi khaaa..

they both started eating and talking about some random stuff..

rithvik: chal jaldi khatm kar.. fr me tjhe drop karunga. mjhe ghar jaana h. nind aa rhi h.. asha : khane de fr chalte h.. by the way tjhe itni jaldi kyu h? rithvik : pr se phle mjhe ek aur set pe shooting ke lie jaana h.. asha: oh bht bz h tu.. rithvik: ab jaldi khatm kar..

they both walk out of restaurant.. nd rithvik drops asha to her pg

asha: chal good night. kal milte h. bie rithvik: bie..

asha crosses road and enter her pg.. rithvik stays there till asha enters.. and then goes..

at night.

asha: (to her room mate) nind ni aa rhi mjhe.. kya karu. kanika(i have assumed her room mate name: kanika): koi book padh le.. asha: kaunsi padhu. kanika: koi b padh.. mjhe sone de..

(from past few days, asha could not sleep properly.. all she could do is remeber the time spent with rithvik and other her pr friends)

asha: taking out a book from shelf.. yhi padh leti hu... kya pta nind aa ajae.

aftr reading for a while, she again started remembring, time spent with rithvik and started smiling..

(they both just fight, laugh, tease, eat, spending most of their free times together). whenever free they just look for each other. they have started understanding each other and enjoy each other's company.

at rithvik's house though rithvik had to wake up early next day, he was not able to sleep.. he was too in the same condition. he remembers her, smiles thinking of her.

asha: ye book kitni boring h.. kya karu.. nind b ni aa rhi. ek kaam krti hu rithvik ko msg krti hu.. usi se time pass kr lungi... nhi but wo to so raha hoga. distrb ho jaega bekar me. kal use jaldi b to uthna h. um lekin me kya karu.. chal msg kr hi deti hu. kya pta abi tak na soya ho. then she msgs him saying a simple 'hi'..

suddenly rithvik's cell pops up. he sees it. ( message from negi) was wriiten rithvik( just smiles) and replies: itni raat ko meri yaad kese aayi.. asha: tu jag raha h. mjhe to lga so gya hoga. rithvik: agar aisa lga tha to msg kyu kia asha: avei. mjhe nind ni aa rhi thi. bore ho rhi thi rithvik: to me kya tere time pass ke lie betha hu. asha: are, as a friend msg kr dia to kya ho gya.. rithvik: hehe . kuch nhi. mjhe b nind ni aa rhi thi..

asha and rithvik both chatted fr 2-3 hours until they fall asleep. this was just a starting fr them to realise their love for each other.. because all they could think was about each other. they miss each other when not together. but certainly do not realise it. thought of just being together would bring smile on their faces. they were most comfortable with each other. nd most importantly they were themselves with each other..

end of my part. do like and comment. nd if you want a pm, pls send a buddy request to ramya or me(divya bhatia). my id is divya11bhatia..

Edited by ramya.reddy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yeeaaa yeaaa 1st meee
Uhhhuuu
👏 wooowww nice
Bachi awesome
All the best Bachi nd Divya To
for this story
Bachi u writeing new story nd you did nt tell me 😭 😭
Very very bad
I m so hurt
Chal koi nhi teri khabar leti hu me baad me
Btw its great waiting for it lovely hoga i know
Pm me when u update 😳
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