MG OS: A Moment of Love Part 4 Page 63/10th September - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh wow ! lovely Os 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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m waiting for more
awesome start
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Posted: 11 years ago
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welcome back akku
so geet lost everything she had and now she end up in a bar with rahul who wanted to take disadvantage of her druken state
she came to know that rahul was the main culprit to spread the news about he sleeping with seniors and yash was innocent
so maan came to rescue her and took her to his private room
ab yaha lake chhod diya, ab hum kya soche ke aage kya hoga
ab jaldi se aa jao aur next part update karo
waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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update sooonnn its jst tooo gud...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
As always lovely but I am waiting for you to continue all your other stories.
It has been ages my dear.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nyc ud lkng fwd for nxt upcmng prts
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved the start what a creep loved the slap and punches he got hope the bouncers break a bone or two and maan saved her loved it awesome update thanks for the pm congrats on the new ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start
really nice os
plz do cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Teaser:

"But whatever we were noticing from past days nd that day at the restaurant, all just lead to all this misunderstandings." Yash said as he tries to defend himself though he knows that whatever he's saying is nowhere to justify his acts.

"Weren't we know Geet enough Yash that we made this assumption for her. She was you doll right then how then how can you even think of so low about her. Yash, whether you accept it or not but you too know that were wrong since the start. It was nothing but your bloody Ego that lead to all this. Due to this ego of yours only there were differences between you nd Vicky because he was in the relationship with a girl who had dumped you once nd due to this your Ego got hurt 10 times. It was because of Geet only that you both are standing here together sorting out all your differences nd what you did, once again because of this bloody ego of yours you had shattered her to this extent. Can you see around yourself Yash? These empty bottles of Vodka, beers nd god knows what not, that dry stains of puke, this messy home; From past 7 days she's been living in this hell. The girl who hates even the sight of drunkards, who chides you for drinking, who keeps everything neat nd clean has destroyed herself like this nd all because of you nd your one wrong assumption. At least now both of you come out from that ego of yours nd see the extent of damage you both had done." Meera barked as angry tears trailed down her cheeks feeling so helpless.

"But why would I blame you both when even I am at fault. To support my Love I had betrayed my best friend. She had always considered me as her sister nd I had left her alone the time she needs me the most. I don't think that I'll ever be able to face her now nd all because of you two. Mark my words Yash that if anything happened to her then I won't forgive you ever." Meera said as she wiped away her tears harshly before storming inside Geet's bedroom shutting the door hard leaving both Vicky nd Yash behind to drown in the pool of guilt nd regret


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It had been quiet sometime that Geet had been sleeping in that room. She blinked her eyes couple of tymes before opening them as the sunrays peeping from the curtain forced her to wake up nd welcome the new day of her lyf. She rubbed her eyes to get off the remainants of sleep as she takes in her surroundings trying to figure out where she is. She knows that she had talked a lot last night nd she remembered only pieces of it but how she comes in this room nd how she lands up on this bed she doesn't remember. Her eyes widen in fear as she realized the place being dead quiet nd empty as if she's the only soul present on this earth. She would have probably panicked but her head was being hammered by a million sledgehammers nd things were slowly coming back to her but still the picture was not clear.

"Sit down"She heard a strong male voice from behind as she was about to get up making her to turn around only to see a mug in front of her face.

"Drink. It'll make you feel better." She heard him yet again as she held the mug hesitantly nd sat from her half standing position. She raises her lashes gently to look at the owner of such baritone voice only to find a boy rather a man in his late 20s came around nd sat in front of her in the chair gesturing her to drink the beverage.


Ok Guys! so here's the teaser for next part... hope you guys like it...


Ok few things i want you all to know that this OS is not completely my creation.. i had read a novel of an Indian Author sometym back nd this OS is inspired from the story of one of the character of that novel nd hence that's the reason that the place is "Hyderabad" this tym nd not "Delhi"... All i have done is to make the changes according to Maaneet nd story line is same except in few places... just felt like telling you all about it...


Nd as of my other FF's well i'll update them too but just need some tym to get into the track as i lost track of all of them so just give me few days more to get into the flow😳😳...


Enjoy the teaser till i update next... Eagerly waiting for your responses😃😃


P.S. Can anyone help me with the banner of this story please... do PM me with the banner😳😳


Luv Aakriti😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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itna lamba tease..isse to achchha update hi de dedti Akku😆😆
but I love this teaser
ab jaldi se update de do
I m waiting..

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