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Hey, I have another fan fiction for you guys. I'm excited about this one, I hope you like it!

Angad Khanna is the 25 year old father of six year old Ria. His wife, Mishty, died while giving birth to Ria. He is a fun loving guy and full of life. He can do anything for his daughter, since she is his life. He is the head cell phone designer of "Top Class" (company).

Ria Khanna- She loves her dad very much, but sometimes feels the absence of a mother, though she never told her dad that.

Kripa Sharma is the 25 year old mother of the six year old Rahul and the four year old Payal. They are what she lives for and could do anything to bring a smile on their faces. Her ex-husband, Prithvi Malhotra is the father of her children. While she was pregnant with Payal, she found out about Prithvi's affair, which led to their divorce. Prithvi lives in America and comes visits the kids every three months or so. She is a pharmacist.

Rahul- He loves his mom and dad, but loves his mom a lot more since she has always been there for him and with him, unlike his dad, who Rahul feels cares about his business more then Rahul or Payal.

Payal- She loves her mom and dad a lot, but just like Rahul she wishes he had more time for them, instead of caring about business more. She doesn't fully understand everything that goes on around her.

Prithvi Malhotra- He loves his kids and his business, he is the sole owner of the Malhotra Empire. He is loaded with money. He had an affair, while Kripa was pregnant, but he wishes he didn't because then he would still be with her. In America, Prithvi dates a lot of girls and takes full advantage of being single.

Alliya Sait- Kripa's best friend. She is engaged to Josh Oberoi. Alliya is a nurse.

Josh Oberoi- Dating Alliya. His best friend is Angad. He also works in "Top Class"

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Riya woke up at 10:00am on the sunny Saturday morning. She ran to her dad's room and sat on his stomach.

Riya- DADDY, WAKE UP!!!

Angad instantly woke up and looked at Riya.

Angad- What's the matter?

Riya- Daddy, whats today?

Angad- Erm........Saturday

Riya- Yes, todays Saturday, but what else?

Angad- erm.......uhgg.......ohhhhhh yeah, it's my princess's birthday

Riya- Yes!

Angad- Happy Birthday Riya, I'm sure you have a long list of presents for me to get you just like all the other years, right?

Riya- Nope, this year I only want one thing

Angad- Really? Good, your saving me money, okay, so tell me what you want

Riya- But first promise me you won't get mad and you'll get it for me

Angad- ...Alright, promise, now come on tell me

Riya- Dad, I want you to get married!!

Angad- What? Are you feeling alright?

Riya- Daddy, you need to date again and move on, moms not alive anymore

Angad- Riya, ..........why do you want me to date? Is my love not enough for you, do you need a mother's love?

Riya- No daddy, but I want someone to love you too

Angad- You do, that's enough for me

Riya- Not a father daughter love, you know, a husband wife love, please daddy

Angad- ......fine, I'll start dating again

Riya kissed her dad's cheek.

Riya- I knew my daddy would give me whatever I ask for, thanks, I love you

Angad- I love you too

Riya smiled and ran out of the room.

Angad sighed and got up to go take a shower.

ON THE OTHER SIDE OF TOWN:

Kripa woke up and took a shower. She wore blue jeans with a pink blouse and went to Rahul's room.

"Wake up Rahul." Kripa said as she opened the curtains to his room.

"Mom, five more minutes, besides there's no school today," Rahul sleepily whined.

"I know, but it's already ten o clock, come on, get ready and come downstairs, I'll make some breakfast," Kripa said as she left the room.

Kripa heard the phone ringing while she was making an omlette, she picked it up as Payal sat down on the table eating cereal.

"Hello" Kripa said casually

" Hey, it's me" Prithvi said

" Prithvi, what makes you call?" Kripa said annoyed

"Bad news, I won't be able to make it this week" Prithvi responded

" Your kidding me, the kids are waiting for you" Kripa said hoping he would change his answer.

" I know, ...but, come on, take care of it for me Kripa, actually I have some meeting in London and Canada, you know how it is" Prithvi added

" No, I don't know how it is neglecting your own kids, but this isn't the first time you haven't fulfilled a promise, anyways, bye." Kripa answered

" Come on, don't be mad, anyways, I have to go, tell my kids I love them, and take care" Prithvi said wrapping things up.

Kripa hung up and saw Payal behind her with tears in her eyes, but she continued eating her cereal. Kripa shut the stove off and sat by her.

"Why is my angel crying?" Kripa questioned while wiping her tears

"I'm not, why would I cry?" Payal said trying to sound convincing

"Because your dads not coming, but Payal, work is important too right? But don't worry, Prithvi told me when he does come to see you guys he's going to take you out and watch movies with you guys, and play games, and go to theme parks, and--------" Kripa was interrupted before she could continue by Rahul, who came into the kitchen"

"Don't lie for him mom, he's not coming" Rahul said with confidence and a broken heart.

Kripa took a deep breathe and smiled.

"Do you want toast with your omlette Rahul?" She asked as she put his omlette in a plate and poured him some juice.

"No thanks" He replied.

During breakfast Alliya came over. She poured herself some coffee and sat down with them.

"Such a beautiful day, huh?" Alliya said looking out the window.

"Yes, mom says, when it's sunny, God is smiling" Payal said smiling.

"Your moms right, and when Gods happy we should be happy too" Alliya said grinning.

"You two are too much" Kripa laughed.

"So you won't believe what Josh said to me today," Alliya said as she took a sip of coffee.

" What?"

"Well, you two have met before, he asked me if you were single, and I said yes, and guess what, his best friend happens to be single too, he has a six year old daughter named Ria, Kripa how about you try going on a date with him?

"Yay, mommy is going to date, wait...what's that mean?" Payal asked puzzled.

"That means your mom would go out with a guy and they'll try to get to know each other better, and if they do like each other, they'll keep dating, and soon if they hit it off, they'll get married!" Alliya said trying to explain it to Payal.

"Alliya, come on, be quiet, I don't want to date" Kripa said while clearing the table"

"Why not, you have to move on sooner or later" Alliya said trying to persuade Kripa.

"Well, I choose later" Kripa said trying to get out of the subject.

"Why, do you still love Prithvi?" Alliya said, getting pissed off.

" No, Prithvi is my past and you know that" Kripa said while washing the dishes.

" You should date mom, dad has moved on, and you should too, maybe this way someone can bring happiness into your life again" Rahul said.

" I am happy" Kripa added.

"Yea, mommy is happy" Payal said with joy.

"But Payal, don't you think your mom could be happier if a man loved her" Alliya said as she took her in her lap.

"But my daddy loves mommy" Payal answered.

"Dad doesn't love mom anymore, and mom doesn't love him anymore, that's why they're divorced stupid" Rahul spit back.

"Rahul don't call Payal stupid" Kripa said as she raised her eyebrow at him

"I say take Alliya aunty's advice......you never deserved the tears dad gave you and.....he never deserved the happiness you gave him." Rahul said as he got up and left for his room.

"Erm....Payal, go watch some tv" Kripa requested.

Payal got up and left.

Al- Kripa, why do you always stand up for Prithvi in front of the kids?

K- Because I don't want them growing up to hate him, after all, ....he's their father

Al- Yea, if you say the responsibility of a father is coming by every three months and giving his kids money and gifts to try to make up for the time he's missing in their lives, then yea, he's a great dad

K- Anyways, whatever. Everyone has different methods and ways to handle their kids, and Prithvi's is that........

Al- Kripa, you know you deserve better, you would have never divorced him if you didn't think so

K- Alliya, if Josh ever cheated on you what would you do?

Al- Easy, break up with him

K- And how long have you known him?

Al- Erm....two and a half months

K- I knew Prithvi for five years when he cheated on me, we have two kids, think how hard it must have been for me to forget him. But I did, right? .....I don't have the courage to love again.......I don't want my heart broken again, it's not worth it

Al- Kripa.....not all guys are like Prithvi, trust me

K- I just.......need time

Alliya smiled at her best friend.

Al- In that case, you have all the time in the world, anyways, I'll see you tonight, I have to---

K- Go meet Josh, right?

Al- Right, bye Kripa

I hope you like this fan fiction!

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Iqbal Neha1 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#2
great concept 😊
i really like angad and kripas kids who are helping them move on hope kripa agrees to date soon
so that her and angad can meet soon
the kids are really sweet
cant wait 2 read the next part
your fanfics are amazing.
👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oo, i like ur ff!!
i lovve aaliya's character!!
and i hope kripa begins dating again
anywayz, good luck and continue soon.
Edited by zeenat_786 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesomeful concept and part!! I'm loving the story line!! Hope she agrees to date him!! Continue Soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg... this sounds sooooo cool nd intirguing nd unique!!! i LOVE it!!! well,
i love ALL the FF's u have written!!! 😳 God... Prithvi is such a jerk!!! 😡
Ria & Rahul r soooo mature for 6 yr olds... nice... i think Payal is my fav
character yet... she is schoooo schweet.... i LOVE her!!! i CANNOT wait to
read more, continue soon!!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part
sounds very interesting
can't wait till AK meet
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Posted: 18 years ago
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love your new ff 👏

continue soon 😳

muahz❤️

kanwer<3*
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

great concept 😊
i really like angad and kripas kids who are helping them move on hope kripa agrees to date soon
so that her and angad can meet soon
the kids are really sweet
cant wait 2 read the next part
your fanfics are amazing.
👏

lol thank you! keep reading!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: zeenat_786

oo, i like ur ff!!
i lovve aaliya's character!!
and i hope kripa begins dating again
anywayz, good luck and continue soon.

thanks zeenat! Keep reading!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: erier101

awesomeful concept and part!! I'm loving the story line!! Hope she agrees to date him!! Continue Soon!!

im so glad you like it, keep reading!

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