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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: arshiasushma

when will be the next update


😆 I Don't Know...But Maybe Soon!!! ❤️
If Possible, In Next Few Mins!! 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg cant wait to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww
All d updates r really really nice
Luvd dem all
Fantastically portrayed everything. .
Sry fr not commenting earlier. .
Nd commenting really really late..
Cont as soon as possible. .
Eager to knw wht next..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter ~ 19

Jeevika's POV

Sitting There On The Chair In Balcony, Looking Around At The Trees, And Children Playing Around, Was Adorable. Just As I Was Lost In My Thoughts I Sensed Two Muscular Hands Snaking Around My Neck. He Sat On The Handrest Of The Chair, Hugging Me.
J - "When Did You Come Back?"
V - "When You Were Lost In Your Own Little World..."
J - "Okay, Let's Have A Coffee, Virat Will Get Back Too.." That's When We Heard The Door Bell.
V - "I'll Check Who's It, You Go Make Your Coffee..."
Viren Opened The Door To Find Mom And Dad. I Exited Kitchen To Greet Them. I Walked Out To Find Mom Look Pale And Weak.
J - "Mom? You Look Pale, You Alright?" I Said Touching Her Face Which Was Burning. "Viren Take Mom To Her Room, I'll Call The Doctor..." I Rushed To Get My Cell. Soon The Doctor Arrived And So Did Virat. She Prescribed The Medications, Virat Dropped The Doctor And Brought In The Medicines, While Viren Sat Next To Mom Changing The Ice Water And Salt Strips On Mom's Forehead. I Prepared Soup For Mom And Dinner For The Others.
I Settled Next To Mom Opposite To Viren Feeding Her The Soup.
J - "Mom Here, Take These Medicines.." She Gulped Down Those Tablets As I Handed Her A Glass Of Water. "Viren, Virat, Dad...You Guys Go Settle On The Dining Table, I'll Serve You Guys..." They Left Me & Mom There, After Mom Was Asleep I Slowly Escaped The Room Without Disturbing Her. Soon Everybody Finished Their Dinner And Headed To Sleep After Having A Check On Mom. I Stayed Next To Her For The Next Hour In Case She Got Her Fever Back. Than I Retired To My Room To Find Viren Sleeping With His Files And Laptop By Side. I Placed Them In Their Places And Lay My Self Next To Him, Setting The Alarm I Turned Off The Lights, When Viren Hugged Me Tightly From Behind.
V - "Thank You.." He Said Kissing My Shoulder.
J - "Thank You For What?" I Asked Him As I Turned To Face Him.
V - "For Taking Care Of Us, We Four, And That Little Monster In London..."
J - "I Don't Need Your Thanks Viren. They Aren't Just Your Family. Now They Belong To Me In the Same Way, How They Belong To You! And Taking Care Of Them Becomes My Responsibility..."
V - "No Doubt My Choices Are Always Better! I Love You..."
J - "Now Sleep..."
V - "Good Night Wifey..." He Said Kissing My Forehead And Going Off For Tonight.

Early Morning I Was Woken Up By The Alarm Ringing. I Got Free From Viren's Grip And Left For Shower. Coming Out I Headed To Mom's Room To Check If She Had Fever. Hopefully She Didn't. I Entered Kitchen To Find Tarun Their.
J - "Tarun? When Did You Get Back?"
T - "Today Morning Ma'am..."
J - "Okay, Now If You're Here, I Guess Everything Is Fine There Back In Your House?"
Tarun Nodded With A Smile.
J - "Here Take This Money And Go Buy Some Vegetables We Need."
T - "Okay Ma'am..." He Said While Exiting The Kitchen When I Stopped Him.
J - "And Tarun, You Call Viren 'Viren Bhaiya' Right? So, Instead Of Ma'am Call Me Jeevika Bhabhi..."
T - "Ji Bhabhi."
J - "That's Better...And Get Back Soon..." Tarun Left Nodding. While I Made Tea And Prepared The Dough For Paratha's, Boiled The Potatoes, And Decided To Wake Everyone, While Tarun Came Back I Told Him To Smash The Potatoes, And Cut Few Onions And Veggies.

Entering The Room I Placed The Tea Cup On Side Table And Put Viren's Phone On Charge. I Pushed The Curtains Aside And Opened The Windows, Which Disturbed Viren's Sleep.
V - "Jeevika Can You Please Shut The Curtains?" He Said As He Pulled A Pillow Over His Face.
J - "Viren Wake Up Now! Don't You Have To Go For Office?"
V - "I'll Go Late..."
J - "Fine, But Atleast Get Up For Breakfast..." I Said As I Exited Taking Back His Tea.
Then I Went To Wake Virat Up. His Room Was As Always A Mess!
J - "Virat?" I Called Him Out As I Placed His Laptop And Phone On Charge.
Vi - "Bhabhi, Can I Sleep For 5 Mins More...?"
J - "Why Not...?!?"
Vi - "Thanks Bhabhi" He Said Before Hearing Me.
J - "Only If You Wish To Get Late For The Meeting..." He Sat Up Immediately.
Vi - "Nooo!!! I'm Getting Ready, And I'll Leave Immediately, And Have Breakfast In Office..." He Said As He Grabbed His Towel.
J - "No Need, You've Plenty Of Time..." I Said Giggling Showing Him The Watch.
Vi - "I Still Have An Hour!?" He Said As He Glanced At The Watch.
J - "Yeah! I'll Make Your Coffee...Till Then Get Ready..."
I Exited The Room.

In Next Hour The Breakfast And Virat's Tiffin Was Ready. Just As I Was Placing The Food On Table, I Heard My Phone Ringing.
J - "Hey Sweetie, How's You?"
Ve - "I'm Fine, But How's Mom?"
J - "Virat Told You?" I Inquired As I Kept The Paratha's Plate On Table.
Ve - "Yes!"
J - "Vedu, You Know I'm There To Take Care Of Everything Here, Right? Then Why Are You Troubling Your Little Mind? Just Focus On Studies And Your Own Health Baby..." I Continued As I Placed The Other Stuff On Table.
Ve - "I Know Bhabhi But Still..." Just Then Viren Hugged Me From Behind. I Shrugged Him And Gestured Him To Sit Down.
J - "Vedu, Just Don't Worry Of The Events Happening Here, I'll Take Care Of All. You Just Stay Calm And Focused On Studies Sweetheart..."
Ve - "Okay, Bhabhi I Will! But Keep Me Updated Whatever Happening There..."
J - "I Will! For Now As I Know You Haven't Slept For The Night, You Still Have Few Hours Before You Go For You Classes..So Catch Sleep For A Couple Of Hours"
Ve - "Alright Bhabhi...Love You..."
J - "Love You Too Baby..."
She Hung Up The Phone, As I Saw Viren Smiling. I Placed The Phone Aside As Virat Settled On His Seat.
I Served The Two, "You Two Have Your Breakfast I'll Send Dad And Feed Mom Also..."
As I Turned Behind, I Found Dad Making Mom Walk Up To The Table. I Rushed To Her Side. Held Her By Her Shoulders. Though She Didn't Have A Fever She Was Weak. I Gestured Dad To Go Settle On His Seat.
J - "Mom, Why Did You Come Out? I Was Just Coming In To Give You Your Soup & Medicines..."
Va - "I Was So Bored There, Just Laying On That Bed. And If I Would Stay There More I Would Get More Sick..." She Settled On Her Seat Next To Dad.
I Fed Her One Spoon And She Spoke "Jeevika, You Go Sit I'll Have It Myself..."
J - "But Mom, It's Alright, I'll Have Breakfast Later..."
Va - "No, You Sit With All Of Us..."
V - "Here, I'll Serve For You Wifey..." Viren Said Placing A Paratha In My Plate.
Everyone Smiled, While I Blushed.
Vi - "Okay, I'll Leave..."
J - "Virat, Wait. Take Your Tiffin Along."
Vi - "Are Bhabhi, I'm Getting Late, Can't Wait..."
J - "Stand There Just For Two Seconds Devar Ji..." I Said As I Went In To Bring His Tiffin.
Vi - "But Bhabhi..."
J - "Here, Now Go."
Vi - "Thank You..." He Said Smiling. "Okay Bye Everyone.." He Said Rushing Out.
Mom And Dad Left For The Room And So Did Viren. With The Help Of Tarun I Cleaned The Kitchen Counter And Dining Table.
I Entered Our Room To Find The Balcony Door Open. That Explained Viren's Absence In The Room. There He Was. Standing In The Balcony Gazing Outside As The Rain Drops Spilled Heavier From Sky. I Stood Next To Him Lost In The Moment Deeply.

Viren's POV

As I Was Lost In My Own World, I Felt Jeevika Standing Next To Me. The Wind Blowing Her Hairs, Making Them Fall On Her Face Look Her Even More Beautiful And Innocent. I Held Her I'm My Hug From Behind, To Which She Rested Her Head On My Chest.
V - "Tired After Working For Past Couple Of Days...?" She Didn't Speak Anything Just Stood There With Her Eyes Closed. I Continued "Jeevika, Thank You..." She Shrugged Me, Turned Towards Me, Staring Deep Into My Eyes She Spoke, "I Told You Yesterday Night, You Stop Saying Thank You Again And Again; Or You End Up Doing It For Your Life Time..."
V - "I'm Ready To Do That..."
J - "Okay, Now Enough Of Your Talks. Aren't You Getting Late Mr. Liar?"
V - "I'm Not A Liar Okay?"
J - "You're A! Go Get Ready, I'll Remove Your Clothes And Place Your Stuffs..."
V - "Okay..." I Said As I Placed A Kiss On Her Lips. She Blushed, Making Me Go Crazy On Her More. She Entered The Room Leaving Me There With My Own Thoughts.

As I Retreated To The Room, I Found Jeevika Placing My Stuffs.
V - "I Thought You Might Be Somewhere Else, After Placing My Things...But..." She Cut Me In Middle.
J - "Yeah, Actually Dad Left For Office So, I Didn't Knew Before, Or Else I Would Have Sent In His Tiffin With Virat. So I Just Packed And Gave It To Him..."
V - "Wow! Wifey Taking Care Of Every One Besides Husband...?" I Asked Hugging Her From Behind As She Placed My Laptop In The Bag.
J - "Your Tiffin Is Packed Too! I'll Bring In..." She Said Trying To Free Herself. "Now What Viren? Leave Me...Are You Planning To Stay Home Today?"
V - "Want Me To Plan So!?" I Asked Her Smirking.
J - "Not Necessary. Now Leave Me..." Just Than Viren's Phone Started Ringing. He Picked Up "Yes?" Jeevika Placed My Shoes, When I Suddenly Placed My Index Finger On My Brow. I Saw Jeevika Shook Her Head And Exited To Bring My Tiffin. Jeevika Entered As Placed My Wallet In My Jeans.
J - "Here, Call Me After You Have Your Lunch."
V - "I Will Call, But Before."
J - "And Waise, What Did You Forget, Mr. Bhulakar?" She Said Folding Her Arms And Raising Her Brow.
V - "There's This New Client I Have Meeting With...I Just..."
J - "Atleast Don't Forget To Tell Me, So I Can Remind You, You Know..."
V - "Okay Ma'am. I Will Keep That In Mind..."
J - "Now Go..." Kissing Her Cheeks Making Her Blush, I Left For Office.

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Thank You For All You're Beautiful Responses ~ Milee, Keany, Aayu, Sammy And My Every Single Reader! ❤️
Here You Go With Chapter ~ 19! 😛
& Apologies For The Wrong PM Title!! 😕 😆
Hope You Guys Enjoy! ❤️
Take Care All! 😛 ❤️
Edited by RiddhiTacker - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i loved this story
so much
whenever i will be free
i used to read from starting
coming to update
it is an awesome
update
totally i loved whole update
jeevika is so caring
she take care of all
the member
as she proof she is best bhabhi
and daughter in law
and perfect wife
now viren cant
imagine without jeevika
and viren telling thank you thank you
and jeevika got angry on that
how she told to
viren liar and bhulakar
how cute they are
love them
total
amazing
superb
fantastic
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
U know wht i just read this story all over again !!!
nd i must tell u tht i m in love with ur story !!!<3
its just phenominal...nd wht makes it more perfect !!!
ur way of descrbing things... i love how u describe each relationship so darn well !!!
just keep up the good work... nd update now !!
waiting fr next part !! :)
Edited by millee18 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Myyy Goddd, kithna kam krti hai yeh jeevika... amazing. .. awesummm updatee... loved it sooo muchb... im loving the small doses of romance added in betwnnn

Keeep continuinggg... eager to read the next updateee! !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
res!!!!!
*unres!!!!!
awww riddhiii!!
this update was amazing
superb
fantastic
wonderful
luved it
sooo cutee!!
back to the update!
ermm jeevika is soo carin and
aww mum was ill!
bless!!
viren not wanting to get up!! aww bless!!
and virat was funny how he dint wanna wake up but woke up when she said ur guna get late for ur meeting!
aww the cute call between jeevika and vedu <3 <3 <3
luved it the way viren and jeevika were like <3 <3 <3
thnxx!
cont soon!

Edited by sumayyah1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its really good update
awsame
amazing
Loved jeevika take care of whole family...its so nice :)
Loving virika's small romance
Fantastic
brilliant
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
me no first!no second,no third, even not in same page!!!!!😭
hope i be next time😕
first thing i want to tell u is i am damn sure u r like jeevika😊
the care the protection everything u portray about her is so fabulous 😊👏😳
every girl wants to become like her😳
and i am really very sure u r like her😊😃
the sweet,innocent,caring ,loving😊
u r having a bright future my dear😊
lots of love to u🤗❤️
in every story the feeling u describes are so amazing👏😊
i want to become like this in real life😳
coming to an update😊
it was super duper update👏⭐️
jeevika taking care of everyone
viren thanking 😉to all other things u shown😊
i m loving it❤️
it was very very nice👍🏼
dont know what to say more as i am not getting words sorry!😕
but i too want to become like her😉😳
do take care😊❤️
love u❤️
Edited by sweet_aayushi - 11 years ago

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