Ishra SS: Mixed Doubles: Note on Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago

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hiii lazy... remember me...??? naina... 😳
anyways if not, then lemme tell u that im a fan of yours... have read most of your work... coming to this ss, i think i hav read it before... 😛 was it earlier written on some other couple... correct me if im wrong...
and and and i loved it... ❤️ pm me if possible...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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AMAZING CONTINUE SOON AND DO PM ME

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awesome start, Lazy

Why didn't you inform me about this ss?? 😲

Plz pm me whenever you update next part.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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NOTE:

First of all, thanks to everyone for liking and commenting on the previous part.
@hasiniangel, naina - Yup i do remember you guys... so glad to see u guys here🤗

Okay... I would like to appologize to all those of you who were waiting for me to continue this story, the truth is that, it was a half baked story and now I don't think it would come out all that good. So I have decided to end it. But some might be curious about the story, so I am just gonna very briefly tell you what I had planned.

Raman was dating Shagun while Ishita was dating Ashok who is Shagun's best friend. Through them Raman and Ishita meet, and Ishita suggests to Raman that they should be best friends as when Shagun and Ashok are together, they both always felt like the third wheel. Raman agrees for fun but soon starts liking and appreciating Ishita's caring nature.

Raman starts getting closer to Ishita and starts treating her like his best friend, and he even goes on to confide in her that, he is actually from a rich family but had left home when his Dad refused to fund for his business and instead asked him to join family business, which even Shagun is not aware of. Meanwhile, Shagun's family doesn't want Shagun to marry Raman, and they wants her to marry Ashok.

Raman-Shagun and Ashok-Ishita go for a trip, where Ishita and Ashok consummate their relation. Raman consoles Ishita when she starts feeling guilty about it.

When Shagun's and Ashok's family starts pressurizing them to marry each other, the four of them decide to have a court marriage. This time, Raman's father calls him back home as he had started missing his son, and Raman informs Ishita about it and doesn't tell Shagun as he wanted to surprise her after the wedding.

At the court, after they had signed at the register only they find out that Raman had married Ishita, and Ashok had married Shagun. At that time, Ashok's and Shagun's fathers come there, and thanks Ishita for her help and gives her the money they had promised her for the treachery. Ishita is shocked at this, and tries to tell Raman, Ashok and Shagun that she didn't know anything about it, and that she is pregnant with Ashok's child. Ashok's father informs him that Ishita had decided to marry Raman instead of him after finding out that Raman is richer than all of them.

Raman is furious and screams at her for cheating him and all of their lives for money. Ishita tries to explains to Raman but Raman refuses to listen to her leaves. Ashok is disgusted with Ishita and leaves her.

Then months later, Raman who had been looking for Ishita over the months, find her. He tells her that after he had come out of his pain he had started questioning himself whether she would do something like that, and he have been having doubts ever since as his gut was telling him that she would never betray any of them.

Having lived a hard life ever since, Ishita is furious at him and refuses to forgive him. Raman apologizes to her, and tells her that it is also his fault that Ishita and Ashok are not together, as if he hadn't jumped to conclusions that day maybe Ashok and she might have talked and solved the misunderstanding. He tells her that he can't undo what he did, but wants to give safe and protected life to her baby, as he feels responsible for the baby. At first, Ishita refuses but finally Raman convinces her.

Ishita tells him that Raman should tell his family that the baby is not his. Raman agrees. Then Ishita moves into Raman's house as his wife, and his family welcomes her home. Soon Ishita builds a good relation with all of his family members. And slowly, Ishita starts melting towards Raman.

Raman has to go away for a major business deal for a few weeks but while he is away Ishita goes into labor. Soon Ruhi is born. Raman leaves the deal and comes back home to be with Ruhi and Ishita. This finally wins Ishita's heart. She slowly starts loving him, and Raman who has been in love with Ishita, is happy with the change in attitude of Ishita. Raman proves to be a wonderful father to Ruhi.

Meanwhile, Shagun finds out that she can never have children. Hearing this, Ashok's father regretfully tells him that it is Ishita's curse for what they did to her. He tells Ashok that Ishita never cheated them but he had overheard Raman's and Ishita's talks by chance once. Hearing this Ashok is furious, but now that he is in love with Shagun, he decides to claim his daughter.

He sends legal notice for Ruhi's custody. That is when Ishita finds out that Bhalla family was never aware that Ruhi is not Raman's. Raman tells her that he knew his family would never accept Ishita and the baby if they knew the baby was someone's. So he lied that, Ishita was pregnant with his baby and they had a misunderstanding. Ishita is furious and heartbroken by this action of Raman's. But when the Bhalla's accepts Ruhi, she decides to forgive Raman.

Realizing how worked up Raman was getting over losing Ruhi, Ishita decides to meet Shagun. Ishita tells Shagun that even if they go to court they are not going to get the custody as Ruhi is just 6 months old and she needs her mother more than father. So she tells Shagun to not let Ashok drag all of them through mud with a case like that. She also tells her that they can meet Ruhi whenever they want but Ruhi will always be known as Raman Kumar Bhalla's daughter because he had earned that right by his love, care and action, not Ashok who had abandoned the baby without a thought.

Shagun feeling guilty for hurting Raman because of what their fathers did, gives Ashok an ultimatum, chose between Shagun or Ruhi. Ashok finally choses Shagun and decides to adopt another child instead of ruining Ruhi's life by bringing out her illegitimacy.

Raman and Ishita consummate their relation, and they live happily ever after.

Now, you guys understand why I decided to drop the story?😆😆

Since, I didn't post the whole story, as a consolation I am posting one of my OS from Madhubala Forum here with Ishra. I hope, this makes up for it.

No Choice But Seduction.

- Lazy

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