Rey(Taani) OS//Reason To Live//

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Posted: 11 years ago
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"Sorry Mr.Singhania,but your wife has succumbed to death"
The doctor's words ,which for him weren't believable,were haunting him.
He didn't want to believe anything,but life isn't always a beautiful garden.She had left him,all alone...But was it her fault,or was it his fault...No, maybe it was destiny's cruelest game,which had subjected him to the most difficult times.Only if she could come back.But life is full of if's and but's...but not each and everyone of them is reality...

Five hours,for the past five hours he had been sitting on the same hospital bench,when at last Sharon,his best friend,his best friend's wife, his wife's best friend and her sister-in-law ,mustered up the courage to walk upto him.Relations don't need a name,but even if they do have a name,they don't have a limit.All you need is a heart.
Coming back to reality,the curse of time,Sharon almost whispered to the lost Rey,"Atleast hold her once"
"I don't have the strenght",he replied.
Sharon tried persuading him,but no use,he didnt move.Her dam of emotions had to break.She had just seen her best friend die few hours ago.She was controlling herself just because the two most important men in her life were broken.Swayam,shattered,Rey,lost.
But she couldn't let a poor,little,innocent soul suffer...
"Come on Rey,atleast see her once .She's your own six hour old daughter god-damn it",she shouted,tears visible in her eyes.
Controlling herself she softly said,"Taani going away from us isn't the little soul's fault,Rey.Why are you punishing her,or punishing yourself?You need to see her"
"I never said that it's her fault.But everyone who's important to me,leaves me,all alone.First Mom,then Taani,now I won't be able to see her go away.Instead ,I'll never grow close to her,so that she'll never go away ."His pain could only be seen,not felt.
"Rey,you need to see her",said a broken swayam,as he dragged him to the room,where a little bundle of joy was awaiting him.
Stopping at the door Rey said,"No Swayam,I can't"
"You have to..."
The door flew open as he finally set foot in.
His mind wanted to go away,but his heart longed to see her,their daughter.
Taani had taught him that when it's about relations,let the heart win.
The gang ,who had gathered around the little princess,finding joy in her antics,as their princess,taani went away.They made way as soon as they noticed him walking in.Steps tinier than an ant,heart heavier than an elephant,so was his condition.Taani wanted Rey to have every happiness in his life.Maybe that was the reason she decided to give life to the baby in her womb,knowing that her pregnancy complications could kill her.Well,that was exactly what happened.She left everyone,the little angel had to say goodbye to her mother the second she was born.
Rey looked at her...she was completely Taani,except for her eyes,her eyes was his.He felt a sudden urge to pick her in his arms,and so did he.The sleeping angel suddenly opened her eyes,and smiled seeing the person who had picked her up.Maybe that was the first time she smiled in her six and a half hour long life.
She in his arms,left him feel in heaven,a feeling of pride,a feeling of satisfaction suddenly took over tge feeling of gloom for few moment,as he gave a weak smile.Maybe because he had found another 'reason to live'...

Edited by ...Sanyukta... - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys..after ages your sanyu is here with an OS.
And that too in the genre which am most comfortable writing-emotional tragedies...
I started writing with no thought in my mind..was going to use a song..but went with the flow...and this is the result...Hope Ya All like it...
Like and Comment..
Guns Down for killing taani..showwy...

Love ya all
Edited by ...Sanyukta... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res 😳
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😭 why on earth do you write so emotional stuffs yaar ...
you made moi teary 😭 😭 😭

Must say, you have beautifully penned it :*
Especially the last part ... wen Rey took his daughter in his hand.
Babies are always special ... no matter how much upset we are ... they always can bring a smile to our lips.

Very well written 👏

Keep writing
Of course, not in this genre ... jk!!!
Edited by Anysia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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reswa 😳

- UnReswa - 😉

amazing one

kya OS tha Yaar...loved it

it was damn emotional 😭

TaaRey's little angel

but me is sad because of taani's death 😒

keep writing sanyu 🤗


Edited by -SunShine - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww..it was so nice os..
Well done 👏 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful and heart touching os
Love it
Always life give other reason to live life
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Emotional one !!
brillantly written .. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohhh freak u made me
Cry man damm emotional
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aapne mereko rula diya...😭
but i really loved the os...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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itna emotional os
maza ata hai mujhe rula k
😭
taarey's daughter part was cute
but taani is death so i m sad
lovely piece of writing

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