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Posted: 11 years ago
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This OS will be from Kd's POV . Its based on the spoliers..
AWKWARD COFFEE
Finally kiya patched up with her mom. I am so happy as she looked so happy and relaxed after days . As i was busy thinking all this my cell phone ringed . I know must be Kiya . So i quickly went and lifted my cell but screen displayed unknown no. I picked up call..
Kd: who's dis ??
After hearing the name of person ob other line i was shocked as hell . I was literally sweating and my mobile nearly slipped from my hand but i managed to catch it ..
Kd: hello mom i mean sorry aunty i mean mam . Yes ..
Yes it was kiya's mother and my future mother in law . My stupid tongue was practising to call her mom . How idiot i am ?
Kiya's mom: kd i want to meet you tomorrow . So can u come at my house at 4 in noon for coffee ???
What me at kiya's house . Its not that i hadn't been at her house but this would be the first time when i will enter her house in humanly way ..
Kd: yes aunty sure i will be there. Its all my pleasure and thanks for inviting me . I will,surely come and ..
kiya's mom: okay okay see you than ..
With that she cut the call. God Kd what were u doing blabbering in front of your girlfriend's mom . I think i should call kiya right . I was about to call her when she called . I picked up the call and before i could say anything ..
kiya: wow kd i so excited . U know mom ne samne se kaha that she wants to meet u . I am so excited yipee. Kd what happened??
what happened?? And why is kiya so excited doesn't she know her mom hates me.
kd: kiya main nervous hun . I mean u know what i mean
kiya: kd calm down . I trust u, u will impress my mom ..okay i luv u ..
kd: i luv u too ..
NEXT DAY
Today is my dooms day . I chose to wear blackk shirt and blue denims. I fixed my hair and was ready to go . I bought some flowers on the way . Finally i reached here . I messaged Kiya that i reached and asked her to open the door .. I rang the doorbell and thankfully kiya opened the door with her cute smile. But suddenly her smile vanished and she started frowning ..
kd: what??
kiya: salesman banke kyun aaye ho ?
Kd: matlab ..
Kiya: i mean your shirt and hair ..
Saying this she messed my neatly combed hair and opened the first two button of my shirt . What is she doing??
Kd: kiya kya kar rahi hoon
kiya: kd tum interview dene nahi aaye ho comeon in
I went inside and saw her mom and sister sitting on the couch . The look on their face indicated that now they are ready for hunting and i am poor prey ..
Anya: oh kd take a seat ..
Kd: yes di .
i sat on the most comfortable couch in the most uncomfortable situation . I was so nervous . Kiya sat besides me and gave me assuring smile .
Kiya's mom: so kd what are your future plans??
Kd: actually i am planning to so MBA and i have been offfered internship too so i will do that too ...
Anya: perfectly boring boyfriend .. Right kiya
Kiya: oh chuck it anya di . You know what Kd is not at all boring he is gonna sing in fest . Right kd
What ? Kiya me sing ?? I am not a singer bf and you are boosting about my singing talent wow kiya brilliant job ..
Kd: yes yes i am trying to sing ..
and than i gave "u r so gonna pay for this" look to kiya while she just winked at me ..
Kiya's mom: okay than we will have coffee lets go there. We settled at dinning table . Me and kiya were sitting opposite to eachother . Kiya's mom ordered 4 black coffee to maid and in about 5 min he brought coffee .
Kiya's mom: kd have coffee ??
Coffee u call this crap coffee i mean no milk, just two tsp sugar. That's it . How could kiya like this ?? Yaa like mother like daughter . I somehow acted as if its the best coffee in the world and started drinking it . Suddenly i felt something on my legs . Yes it was kiya's feet rubbing across my leg . She gave me naughty smile . Kiya is this time to play footsie footsie with your bf . I chocked on my coffee and started coughing . Kiya stood up from her chair came to my side and started rubbing my back. She offered me water and i drank that . Finally i was settled ..
kiya's mom: r u okay? Wat happened suddenly??
what happened ?? Ask this question to your daughter who was cause of this whole fiasco ..
Kd: i am fine aunty ..
After that she again asked some questions regarding my career and future plans . I calmly answered all questions but seeing kiya's reaction i found out she was not at all pleased with her mom's question . She was about to interrupt but i held her hand under the table and singnalled her that it was okay ..
kiya's mom: kd u know kiya loves going to shopping and do u know what's her shopping bill ? Can u afford my daughter and her lifestyle ?? Do u want her to stay at that chawl with u??
kiya: mom plzz its enough u cant just ...
I interrupted
kd: kiya its okay she is your mom ,its her right. Aunty don't worry i know kiya is a princess and one day she called me her prince charming and i will prove myself that i am worthy of this princess. I promise that i will build palace for her .. And i will achieve all this for Kiya coz i truly love your daughter more than myself.
After that kiya's mom seemed convince that i am good enough for kiya and than the conversation was somewhat smooth ..
After about 2 hours i took their leave
Kiya came at door and gave a peck on my cheeks and said : thank u i luv u
kd: i luv u too
With that i left from there
so here is another OS . I hope acha ho . So plzz tell me how dis ??

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Uh make me feel proud!
Uh rock brotha!
It was so funny!
Kiya's mom called kd on coffee!
Hehe loved the portrayed kd in this OS! It was so real! I could see everything happening before me!
Loved the end as well !
Ur concepts are so unique!
It is a treat for kishaholics!
Loved it
Amazing title 😊
Keep writing
Lots of love
Tina
Edited by tinaswea - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kd prey 🤣
Dued you have write kds dilemma awesomely I loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Awesome os...
Loved it...
It was fab...
It was really funny...
Thnx for writing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey dear
Its awesome
Hope aisa hi kuch ho
Awiee KD is super cute
Loved it

Geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Stavan it sooo nice i hope show mein aisa hi ho,but can't trust CVS u see.Stavan do you join Fahad & Bharti fan club,if not than please join them.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Stavan awesome Os yaar, Kash aisa hi ho...
Par sachchi bolun...i didnt like the idea of KD going to kiya's house, per ab kya anyways show kahtam hone wala hai so it was quite expected ki aisa kuch hoga...

I wanted ki KD pehle successful ho jaye fir woh kiys ki mom ke pass jaye...ek luxurious car main full on attitude ke sath...per i know ab show main aisa kuch nahi hoga...

Over all nice OS
Thank u so much

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely os. ... I predict kuch aisa hi hone wala hai track mein 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: tinaswea

Uh make me feel proud!

Uh rock brotha!
It was so funny!
Kiya's mom called kd on coffee!
Hehe loved the portrayed kd in this OS! It was so real! I could see everything happening before me!
Loved the end as well !
Ur concepts are so unique!
It is a treat for kishaholics!
Loved it
Amazing title 😊
Keep writing
Lots of love
Tina

thanks a lot tina
i am glad u like it
thanks a ton for appreciating
it means a lot
thank u
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: NaughtyRa

Kd prey 🤣
Dued you have write kds dilemma awesomely I loved it

thanks a lot
I am glad u like it

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