The Dusk

Okay now this is the first poem of mine that im posting on the forum.
The pestering credit goes to Ms.P.K. Tunn!!
And this is for all those who wanted to read more from me..
Anu di, Harshu n Kriti darlz thankyou for all the support,..
And all those who are thinking that im gonna bore you with a philosophical long poem then sorry cuz you will be proven wrong as you read on! 😆


THE DUSK

As you hold my hand in yours,
The saffron entwines itself with the blues.
As I take every step along with you,
The green blades make audible whispers.
As you lovingly cup my cheeks,
The fragrant beauties slip into a solace.
As my eyes close when your lips take hold of mine,
The powerful brightness shies away itself into the blues.
As you pull me close and let me snuggle into your embrace,
The dusk marks the dawn of an eternal love...


Thanks for taking time and reading my crap 😆
Please do like and comment..
Critique has always been a friend of mine so be my most favorite guest in it! 😆
Hope you all liked it 😉

Res!! Teri esi ki test 9tanki!!

-----x-----

Wait! Did you just call this "crap"?
Where are my shoes?!!

This was beautiful!! Pitegi jo agli baar apni kisi bhi writing k baare me esa kaha toh!!

I loved it sooo much and I dont know why I was imagining SanDhir ❤️

But itne se mera mann nhi bharega.. I need more !! 😛 and that too jaldi xD

Loads of Love My FIRST FRIEND

Kriti ❤️

Originally posted by: BrunoMars

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Thank u Menika! 😃

Beautifully written sweetheart!!!!
Loved it.
Keep writing.

Originally posted by: iraa_parsh

Beautifully written sweetheart!!!!
Loved it.
Keep writing.

Ty dear...
Im sorry idk ur name 😳

Originally posted by: Ms.P.K.Tunn

Res!! Teri esi ki test 9tanki!!

-----x-----

Wait! Did you just call this "crap"?
Where are my shoes?!!

This was beautiful!! Pitegi jo agli baar apni kisi bhi writing k baare me esa kaha toh!!

I loved it sooo much and I dont know why I was imagining SanDhir ❤️

But itne se mera mann nhi bharega.. I need more !! 😛 and that too jaldi xD

Loads of Love My FIRST FRIEND

Kriti ❤️

Thanks a lott Kriti!!!
Will try posting mre though..
Thankyou dear
🤗

Originally posted by: barauni

Ty dear...
Im sorry idk ur name 😳

Itz Samaira nd yours is the same?? as in your username??

Originally posted by: iraa_parsh

Itz Samaira nd yours is the same?? as in your username??

Hey Samaira,
My user name is my biggest nautanki!
Im Nikitha 😊

Can't help it Sochu... I am always the first!! xP
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