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Journey of suffering heart /soul


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Mrs . geet sing kapoor : 21 year old daughter in law of big politician, Mr Ragav singh kapoor, wife of, vikram kapoor

Ragav sing kapoor : age 48 Imagine negative actor of Dhabang 1

Big name in politician world , go to any extend for money , power and most imp ...Name of family / khnadan ki izzat ...have one son Vikram and sister son MSK

Vikram Kappor : totally spoil Brut there is not one bad thing which is not his hobby bu he is GAY so called husband of Geet

Msk : Ragav sister son living with ragave family , man of word , moral never hurt anyone , angry young man with golden heart , just hate his mama /uncle and cousin brother

Another sleepless night , she just sitting in corner of room , clutching her own knee ...With fear, fear of trash her dignity, fear braking of her moral, fear from her own family her in law and husband, she sadly smile on word HUSBAND who destroy her life in second for name of family he destroy her life ,she never wanted money , power etc etc , she just wanted a family which support her in her sorrow , who support her in pain but look now her own family become reason of her pain ,pain of life time and she don't know how she will come out from this fear, pain which covered all her life like moon covered by thick cloud , their are no way to rescue ,she lost all her hope to come out from this pain this hell kapoor family

she accept his husband as he was full Burt , with lots of bad habit and most imp he is Gay ,but his own father not accepting this fact i accept my fate for my family name because there is more important family respect rather than life of human specially that human is girl she again smile on word WOMEN what a joke they don't respect women ,but they wanted womanhood for their hair ,Vansh i am helpful only to give child for their family name nahi to sbako pata chale jayega So called big politician of India Mr Ragav Kapoor have Gay son ...why they accept the fact ,just busy with family pride and all First become human treat other as human than make country but they are just busy with making money and caressing family pride , for this if they have to kill someone they are ready ...

But physical death is ok but how I will kill my dignity , my women hood my pride for them who are just monster in name of human why ...what should i accept from them they are with me from only last one month but family where I live my entire life they just turn their back to me like i am not existence in their world when i beg for help they just say i am dead for them my own parent , my family ,just thinking that can i live my whole life in false world away from fact can their love affection that all are false or their family pride is bigger than me ...

i come hear with so much dream , dream of lovely family , dream of caring humsafer who hold me protect me for entire life with friends teasing I start to saw beautiful dream of husband love , our Milan ,our become one in all manner but it is shutter before i can open my eyes ...humsafer to humsaya bane se phelhi hi hath chode ke chala gaya ya phir wo kabhi sath hi nahi tha don't know ...in SR just waitng him with so much shy and thudding heart ...har ek ahate pe dil ko lagta tha ke wo aa gaye mere liye sirf mere liye but reality always different from dream when i tiered after waiting for him just went near window there he going to outhouse with his friend , and i cant stop myself and just went to outhouse

sound coming from upper side , just follow that sound , with fear if anybody saw me , scold me ,but so many questions is bugging me from beginning he never , because he always cold with me always , never try to look me , touch me , my legs just moving to watch most worst nightmare of my life , which broken me in several pieces ,and i cant collect myself till my life time never

i just open the door of room and froze in my place their he is totally nude making with other other MALE my eyes winded in shock ,horror fro second my mind went blank and when reality hi me I broken like anything i just run from their , my tear just falling from eyes non stop ,i just omitting in bathroom that disgust image just again and again coming in mind , that night is start of my suffering , suffering physically as well as mentally and i cant share this to any body , and when I try to share with my family they just ans they know about this fact ...just than strike me How my father get biggest project in his life so my marriage is deal for them just deal ,when i ask qus I got slap with threaten that i cant open my mouth else , if I open my mouth than price is life of my mother ...i saw such helpless in m mother eyes that day ,That day Geet hand become orphan

i accept my faith for my mother life but destiny is not happy or satisfied with she want to saw me more suffer , and before i come out from this shock another blow in my life with demand by father in law ...that they wanted hair for family ,next generation ,i feel like somebody hit me with knife , just stabbed in my heart , , i looking him like if he want to make joke on me i just try to buried all my hope ,dream ,desire and they wanted child from me ...don't know what come in me and i just ask in taunting tone how with help of your Gay son , my pain my struggle of this days just come out with that question and for my ans i got a slap on my face ...blood come from mouth but i don't feel any pain but next word of that monster just took land from my foot ...Yes my son is gay but not me ...he just took my hair in his hand and say with lust be ready for tonight to handle real MAN and he just try to touch my lips with his another hand

just than someone come their ...i dont know who is that because it is all behind my imagination how my own father in law say like this for hair , for family pride how ...he is place of my father age and he just ,one made come near me and took me in room , my room and sit their with blank mind , I just lost power of thinking his last word just coming like hammer on my head Don't think about suiside or other ...icant give you chance to die , and after that your life become daily death for you because after that you have to sleep daily with random man get it ...

one man age 26 just doing his thi chi furiously the anger in his eyes like he fired all world with his only glare , two innocent yes painful eyes just coming in his mind , he just want to took away that pain from eyes , but he is so helpless cant done anything for that eyes ...Eyes of that girl for he lost his heart his first love of his life and irony is she is his cousin brother wife till today he thing that is she happy in this house ...because of his uncle and his son selfish ,he cant mingle with them , he stay hear because he give word to his dead mother ...but he is always out form house just visit vocationally like diwali , holi etc ,he never attached with them emotionally , that's why when his uncle try to brought him in their party he just denied and say he is happy with his construction business he is happy with his business , far from this city , he enjoying his life with his friend , adi ,but his life just mess when he come to attend Vikram marriage , when first time he saw her full of life on her bridal attire in mandap ...he just lost in her beauty and her innocence and her beautiful hazel eyes , but next moment come in reality how he think about his own bhabi like this ...he just hold his braking heart and make excused of business and just come back to his business town , but from that day he just lost his life , charm , smile , so many time adi ask reason of his sorrow but he just denied ...with smile and false reason of tiredness

from that day he struggling with his own feeling to forget her but he fail just fail ,day by day his heart get more restless , like something big and bad happen but don't get why this feeling coming in his mind and today he just cant stop himself and just come to kapoor house like his heart get ans hear only , he shock with his own action ...and he just went to uncle room for greet them , that time geet sentence come as big blow to him ...gay vikram is gay but next word of his uncle he just froze in his place ...he just controlling his anger with so much difficulty his nail dig in his palm , but he know it is not right time to enter but when he saw his uncle try to abuse he he just enter with sound ...like he coming now only

he just give last blow on ice , and sit on floor , he just crushing destiny who suffer that innocent soul like this ,he don't know how he will save her how , he just furies with all this just want to kill that man his so called uncle , just than his phone ring it is called from adi he just took it and say hello adi he just say all to adi , he also become shock with all this fact feel pity for geet but adi next word just Chang emotions from his face , he just smirk ...

he know now what he have to do he just called nakul ...he is old servant of house and he know all about this family , maan just asked routing of vikram ...with help of nakul he just plant closed camera in Vikram room in outhouse ,now he need to took away his uncle from kapoor house at list for two days , so he do his work and destiny just help him one problem come in Delhi and Ragav have to visit there and maan just took this chance Yes he is Maan sing khurana ,Msk

next morning just change life of geet , all television just giving footage of vikram love making with his male friend ...now finger start to stand against Ragav kapoor also , he just come back and start to beat vikram , maan just come there and say uncle beating is not solution , with such emotion like he really care for them , but his eyes just searching geet , maan just say uncle just took press conference and announced vikram chet on you , you don't know about it and announce geet marriage with your choice person , whom you can trust ...it help to clean your image ,and your career also saved and you get extra votes of women you no sympathy like that , ragave went in deep thought he just want to save his career ,he don't took chance when election come near , he just don't want to face humiliation

he just nodded his head and say , and ask , can you ready for marriage with geet , maan show shocks face to him but in mind he just making dance on his victory , now maan second plan start maan know how cheep his uncle is he just plant camera in ragav room also with help of nakul because nakul can went his room without checking and that help maan , ragave just called vikram in room and say all things how he make his marriage till demand of child from geet in last he say i just married her to maan but next day world saw his dead body ...but it is live telecast and Msk just destroy Ragave without any weapon ,and next hour both father son arrested by police for fraud , abuse to geet

he just went to geet room , last night when he went geet room with help of nakul , with thudding heart ,he going to saw her face to face , her heart just winch when he saw her lifeless full of fear , she just shaking with fear when maan come room she just start to scram with fear ...maan just closed her mouth with his hand and she first time watch his face , don't know why but she feel safe with him and just than he took cance and in shortly he say about him and his plan and say her that don't make any thing stupid .she nodded her head maan just went to go , she just mummer thanks and I trust you ...maan just look to her and smile

Now when kapoor get arrested, he just took press conference, and say geet to say each and everything, geet first denied maan change her mind ask her to fight for her pride, her self respect, and first time in her life she stand for herself just for herself , sach hai women biggest enemy of herself , first she say that other are touch ring her and when she get chance to fight she just surrender themselves , you cant stand for yourself for once ...

geet just say each and everything in front of media , including about her handa family , media just support her for justice and after six month all punish for deed , maan just say good by to her ,he don't want to tell about his feeling ...that she mistook his help , they both living in maan small house with nakul last six month he handling his business fro hear only ...when geet hard his goodbye the time stop for her yes she taking him as friend but when time come to say good by ,she knew it is more than friendship ...but maan fail to get her emotions he just going from there , geet just come running him and turn him and give tight slap on his face , maan shock with her action and gasp geet , geet just tearful eyes ask him you don't feel anything for me ...i know iam not good for you also think me as impure because I live with that monster , but I swear they don't touch me no but her word died in her mouth only because her rosy lips captured by maan M shape lips ...he just sucking it like there is no tomorrow ,just sucking her like candy maan ki sweet candy ,geet gasp with his sudden action and lost in his kiss , kiss of geet ke maan ka ,sometime action speak more than word

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KM has come alive after three years... Meera is very busy taking care of the guests...

Little Nanda pulls her pallu...he is her 2 year old son...

Meera: Nandu...aapko kya chahiye?

Maan just comes down...

Meera is Maan's Babhi...his cousin brother Vicky's wife...

He is still adjusting his dress...Meera couldn't control her laughter seeing Maan embarrassed...

MAAN: babhi... I look like a clown, haina?

Meera: Maan bhai, you look like the Dulhe Raja

Maan is still not satisfied...

Geet just comes...Geet is Meera's little sister...

Meera: Geet, tum Nandu ko chodkke kahan goom rahi thi

Geet: Meera, tummara beta mujhe ullu banakke bhaag gaya tha, hai toh ek Khurana haina?

Maan feels insulted...

MAAN: Khuarana's kissi ko ullu nahi banathe, Handa's kudh ullu banjaathe toh hummara kya kasoor? Haina babhi?

Meera: haan Maan bhai

Geet: Meera, tumme toh Handas ko support karna chahiye

Meera: aasie kaise? Mein toh theen sal se Khurana rahi toh ab mujhe bhi aadat ho gayi

Geet: Meera, tum bahut badal gayi ho

MAAN: par tum toh waise hi ho

Maan stares Geet...she looks even more beautiful after three years...

Geet feels embarrassed...

Geet: jaldhi karo Meera. Dadi tumme bhula rahe hai

Meera: Nandu ka khyaal rakhna

It's her Devar's marriage...And she has arranged this herself...she felt that it's her responsibility to find him a good bride...someone better than Geet...Geet was the first choice...but that didn't happen

And dadi was the one so disappointed by this...Maan is Vicky's chachu's son...His parents left him when he was 17 and from then on dadi had been staying with him in canada...When they came for Vicky's marriage dadi fell sick and doctors advised her to take rest...She needed her family to take care of her now...Maan asked Dadi to stay back in India with her elder son's family...

Dadi was not ready to send Maan back alone...She wanted to get him married before he left...So when she saw Geet Dadi immediately had an idea to make her her choti bahu...

Meera is lost in the past...Meera leaves in a hurry...

Geet lifts Nandu...She tries to leave... But Nandu is holding Maan's hand...

Geet turns back and finds Maan still staring her...

Geet: aapke Dulhan apke intrezaar kar rahi hogi, aap jaathe kyun nahi?

Geet thinks that Maan is holding them back...

Maan looks at Nandu's hand...

Nandu: chachu

Geet realizes her mistake...

Geet: Nandu, chachu ko chodo, hum jaake ice cream khathe hai

Nandu: chachu, chachu

Maan looks at him...

MAAN: what do you want honey?

Nandu: come

Nandu has just started talking...

And Maan loves his single word chit chats...

MAAN: I'll come, but chachi doesn't like me na, aapko kaun pasand hai, chachu ya chachi?

Nandu : chachu

Maan is very pround...

MAAN: dekhho, Nandu too likes me

Geet: ha ha ha, aap toh kuch nahi jaanthe, mein isski chachi nahi, mausi hoon, ab dekho, Nandu aapko mausi pasand hai ya ye chachu

Geet shows him a chocolate bar...

Nandu: Geet

Geet: ab dekha aapne, issko bhi sirf Geet pasand hai

MAAN: ye toh cheating hai

Vicky comes...

Vicky: Maan, jaldhi karo

Vicky takes Maan with him upstairs...Geet keeps looking at Maan till he disappears from her sight...It's been three years since they have met each other...But there has not been a single day that she didn't think about him...Geet is once again reminded about their first meeting...

It's a weekend and Meera had planned a trip to Goa with her friends...But Geet too wanted to go with her...Meera was reluctant but had to take her along for she got permission only after Geet agreed to be her escort...her parents always send Geet as her escort...they believed Meera is too innocent and Geet is smarter than her...

But the reality is that Geet is just a chatter box and doesn't know much...she is the innocent one and Meera being the quiet girl is mistook as being innocent...Meera and her gang checked in their hotel and Geet struggled to get her luggage in...

Someone offered to help her...

" excuse me...let me help you..."

He tried to take a bag...But Geet thought that he is a thief and started shouting...

Geet: chor...chor...pakdo

Some of the boys came out form the hotel and took her bag...

It was MSK...He got angry...

MAAN: you stupid Indian girl, you know who I'm? I'm Maan Singh Khurana

The manager came out and consoled Maan...Geet isn't ready to apologise...

Geet: I didn't do anything wrong, aapne isske shakal dekha, isse dekhke toh kissi ko bhi shak ho jayega, haina? She looks at one of the boys for support...

That boy was so scared looking at Maan's face...He just bends and laughs silently...Maan noticed it and his anger doubled...Luckily Vicky came and took Maan...

Vicky: Maan, come, let's go

Later, at the beach...

Vicky kept looking at someone stealthily...Maan noticed it and looked in that direction...It's Geet and her friends sitting there...Maan gets suspicious...Something is wrong with his brother...

Maan had just arrived for the holidays and Vicky drove him off to Goa straight form the airport...

Dadi went home with the driver...Maan is puzzled...Vicky told her that they had an important meeting in Goa...But Vicky never told Maan anything about the meeting...

MAAN: bro, what about the meeting?

Vickt smiled mischievousy...

MAAN: what?

Vicky: we are in the meeting

MAAN: what?

Vicky: come closer. I would like to tell you a secret

Maan bends down and Vicky whispers...

Vicky: there, you see, that's your babhi

MAAN: what?

Vicky: yes, I love her

Maan looks and finds Geet...

Maan is worried for his brother...

MAAN: bro, I don't think she's is the right choice

But maan liked her looks...she is so simple yet beautiful...simple natural beauty...typical Indian raw beauty...that's what Maan is looking for in his bride...

Vicky: but, Maan, isn't she gorgeous? Looking stunning in those cute Red kurthi

Maan is relieved...ohhh...it's the other girl...

MAAN: yes bro, she is a darling

Vicky: Maan, It's your babhi

Vicky feels embarrassed...But Maan doesn't know much about the Indian values and respects for every rishtha...

MAAN: haan, I understand

Maan looks at Vicky and smiles...All day long they keep following the girls...Maan couldn't take his eyes off that stupid Indian beauty...She had captured his attention the whole day...That evening the girls wanted to go for shopping... Meera pretented to have a headache and she stayed back...Geet also stayed back with her...After the girls left Meera took Geet to the disco...Geet is feeling uncomfortable for she is a little shy type though she talks a lot and pretends to be bold...

Geet: Meera, hum yahan kyun aaye hai?

Vicky and Maan are waiting for them...

Geet doesn't know about Vicky...She sticks with her sister always...Vicky wanted to spend some time with Meera...But Meera couldn't leave Geet alone...Maan understood this...He went towards their table...He bent down and said something to Meera...

MAAN: Vicky is waiting for you, I'll stay with your friend

Meera leaves reluctantly...Geet tries to follow suit...Maan catches hold of her hand and stops her...

MAAN: kahan jaathe ho? beito

Maan orders her to sit...

Geet: Meera

MAAN: sshhh, don't disturb her

Geet: who are you?

Maan shows Vicky...Meera goes and joins Vicky...They start to dance...

MAAN: I'm Vicky's brother

Geet is hearing that name for the first time...

Geet: Vicky?

MAAN: what? you don't know Vicky?

Geet blinks...Maan continues...

MAAN: Vicky Meera's Boyfriend hai

Geet: nahi, tum joot bolthe ho

MAAN: tum hi dekho

Geet looks at them dancing with her eyes wide open...Meera feels embarrassed dancing in front of Geet...She comes back...Maan shows his hand and stops her...He asks her to go back and he will take care of her friend...

MAAN: tumme yahan achcha nahi lagtha haina?

Geet bahut dari hui hai...

MAAN: come with me

Maan grabs her hand and takes her out...Geet is not used to such an intimacy with any boy...She feesl very nervous and shy...

Geet: mujhe tummare saath nahi jaana hai, chodo mujhe

MAAN: tum toh sach mein pagal ho, tum dekh nahi sakthi

Geet: kya?

MAAN: idiot, my bro needs some privacy

Geet: what?

MAAN: tum toh aaise gurthe the jaise Vciky tummare friend ko marne wala ho

Geet: par, ye toh galat hai

MAAN: jab donno ek dusre ko chahthe toh kuch bhi galat nahi hai

Geet: kya?

MAAN: tum nahi samjoge

Geet: tum mujhe kahan lekhe jaathe ho?

MAAN: darling ye Goa hai, yahan koi ladhka ek ladhki ko apne saath kyun lekhe jaatha?

Geet: kyun?

MAAN: duffer, look around you

Geet looks and finds most of the couples lost among themselves...She feels shy and her face turns red...Maan likes that very much...He secretly admires her...

Geet: chii chiii babaji, mein aaise ladhki nahi hoon

MAAN: toh Meera aaise hai

Geet: nahiii

MAAN: mein mazak kar raha tha, tumme toh bhook nahi lagthi? Mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai

Maan takes her to a nearby restaurant...Geet is happy to come out of that disco...Maan gives her the menu and Geet orders something new...And she gets a crab...She had never had crab...She keeps staring her plate...

Maan enjoys his lobster...Geet looks at him and wonders how he could eat such a thing...She thinks that it's still alive...

MAAN: come on eat

Geet looks scared...

MAAN: what happened?

Geet: mein ye nahi kathi

Maan laughs...

MAAN: phir tumne order kyun kiya?

Geet: woh...

MAAN: are you a veggie?

Geet: nahi nahi

MAAN: then, try it, it's good

Maan takes a bite...He helps her too...Geet tastes it and it's good...She likes it very much...Maan asks her to try the lobster too...And Geet tried that too...She had not tasted them till now and she thinks that she should have them now...

After that Meera calls Geet...Geet leaves with Meera and Meera tells about Vicky and their love story...Geet is surpried but tells that she will help Meera...

That night Maan kept thinking about Geet...He had fallen in love with this stupid girl within a day...And he doesn't even know her name...He should ask Meera about her later...

Geet too had the same feeling...She had just met Maan and he doesn't seemed like a stranger...He made her feel comfortable and she had no problem spending the evening with him alone...She kind of started missing him...She knew that he is Meera's devar and she would meet him often...She was just yearning to see him again...

Vicky tells his parents about Meera and dadi supports him...Maan had told dadi about Meera and that she is the perfect match for Vciky...Geet too convinces her parents that Vicky is just the right choice for Meera...And the two families decide to get them married...

Geet accompanies Meera for the shopping...It is almost endless stretching to a whole month...The boys have decided to shop in the end...So Dadi came for the shopping with the girls...She had been waiting for an opurtunity and she collected every information she could about him...

She knew that Maan is an NRI and lives with his Dadi...And when she met Dadi she deliberately made friends with her...And Dadi kept talking about Maan only...Maan likes this, he hates that and so on...Dadi is very impressed with Geet and wants Maan to marry Geet...

She tells Geet's Nani about this...Geet's Nani is the one who had been taking care of all the wedding arrangements and she had become very close with Dadi...they have become buddies...

And she also liked the idea...Nani tells her family that dadi wishes to take Geet too along with Meera for her younger potha MSK...Geet is kept unaware of these discussions...

But Geet had overheard Dadi speaking about it that day with Maan in the mall...

Dadi was discussing this with Maan thinking that Geet had already left...but she was still there buying some things...Maan had come to pick up Dadi and dadi told him jokingly that they are lucky to have Meera as their badi bahu as she has a younger sister and that she need not look outside for Maan's bride...they already have one waiting in their family itself...

Geet was so happy...She immediately thanked babaji...But her happiness didn't last long...

Maan couldn't think of anyone but Geet as his bride and at that time he thought that Geet is Meera's friend as Geet called Meera by her name...Maan immediately replied to Dadi in a funny way but also clearly conveyed his disagreement...

Maan said..." What's this Dadi? Shadhi koi discount sale hai kya? Ek saree lelo toh dusra free...waise Meera babhi ke saath unke behen free...that's weird...haina? waise bhi mujhe koi muft ka maal nahi chahiye...MSK is capable of getting a princess..."

Dadi too agreed..."that's true...and mind you...she is nothing less than a princess...I say..."

Maan didn't even bother to listen...Geet took this very seriously and thought that Maan thinks very low about her and that's why he keeps calling her stupid Indian girl...

Dadi knows that it's a joke and she decides to talk about it later...They have decided to break the news after Meera's engagement...

And Maan is still thinking about that girl he met in Goa and wants to find more about her from Meera...He had to wait tiil the engagement is over to talk something so personnel with his babhi...

Maan had come this time too on vicky's request for this secret mission...Vicky's mission...And luckily Maan has found his bride too...

It's Vciky's engagement...Geet is the star of that night...She danced and danced still she was exhausted ...Maan thought that she had come for her friend's wedding...He has been stalking her thru out the function...

At last they come face to face and Geet reacts as if he is a complete stranger...Maan comes to know that she is none other than Meera's little sister Geet Handa...

Maan tries to talk with her but she ignores him completely...Maan runs after her and catches hold of her...He tries to make eye contact but Geet is not willing to look into his eyes...

Maan thinks that she is feeling shy...That's what hooked Maan towards her...Her innocence and her shyness...

And in that function Rahul, an amateur photographer was busy taking snaps in every angle...And the boys gang tipped him to cover the girls specially for them...They were looking at those pictures and the girls found their mischief...

But after looking at the snaps the girls were also excited...Those were truly amzing...One naughty boy started a game...

He says..." I would give a million for this smile..." He remarked seeing a kids smiling face...

Then the others followed suit...Then they rated the girls snaps...Maan just enters the scene and is confused...One of them explains him what's going on...they ask Maan to join..

" aaao Mr.NRI, tum toh dollars mein rate khoroge...haina?"

Maan too starts participating...'after a few snaps it's Geet's dancing still...Maan stares it for a while and remarks subconsciously..."this one is priceless..."

The boys tease him..."ohhh...ooohhh"

Geet too blushes...

Maan continues..."I mean, I would pay zero dollars for this..."

Everybody laughs hearing this except Geet...Geet is hurt...she didn't expect this from Maan...She is heart broken...She silently leaves that place...

But Maan is completely smitten by her beauty...Maan couldn't wait to tell about his craze for Geet to Meera...Maan goes to see Meera in her room...

MAAN: babhi

Meera: aap?

MAAN: you can call me Maan

Meera: nahi Maan bhai

MAAN: this is fine for me

Meera: aap ko kuch chahiye?

MAAN: haan babhi

Meera: kya?'

MAAN: aapki behen

Meera: what?

MAAN: sorry babhi, mera matlab tah ki mujhe aapki behen bahut pasand hai

Meera: par

Vicky just comes...Vicky is very happy...

Vicky: tumne suna nahi Maan ne kya kaha? Ab toh do do shadhi hogi

Meera: mujhe bhi bahut kushi hai

Vicky: toh tum Geet se baat kyun nahi karthi?

Meera: teek hai, mein baat karthi hoon

MAAN: babhi aaj hi baat karo

Vicky: Maan, tum hi usse baat kyun nahi karthe?

MAAN: no ways...you and your Indian rishis

Meera: maan bhai, aap kya keh rahe hai?

Vicky: Rishthas, haina?

MAAN: yes, and I don't know how your sister will react, it's better to go the Indian way, haina?

Maan still can't understand why Geet is behaving strangely now...Geet comes to see meera...Meera then asks Geet...Geet refuses...

Geet: ye shadhi nahi ho sakthi

Meera: par kyun?

Geet: mujhe woh ladhka pasand nahi hai

Meera: kyun pasand nahi hai?

Geet: pasand nahi hai toh pasand nahi hai

Maan has been listening to them from behind...He then enters the room surprised...Meera leaves them alone...There is silence for a few moments...Geet then decides to leave that place...She tries to walk away but Maan stops her...

Geet is scared...Maan corners her and looks into her frightened eyes...

MAAN: darne ki koi zaroorat nahi

Geet blinks...

MAAN: I'm not here to ask you anything, I know everything

Geet: aap kya jaanthe ho?

Maan thinks that she might be in love with someone too...Just like he had rejected this proposal earlier thinking that it's not Geet as he was in love with Geet, Geet too might be in love with someone else...maybe he is a little late...

Her dreamy eyes suggest that she is in love for sure...So, it's not right to force her...Maan is happy to let her go...

MAAN: Are you in love?

Geet is shocked ...

Geet: what?

MAAN: I mean, you love someone, right?

Geet thinks that it's the best way to escape from him...

Geet: haan

MAAN: I knew it, then Ms.Geet, all the best, you saved my life too

Maan made it look like he too is not interested in this rishtha so that Geet wouldn't feel guilty...He didn't want her to regret anyway...He just wanted her to be happy...

Geet: ab mein chaloon?

MAAN: haan

Geet still stares at him...Maan had locked her in his arms...Maan lets her go...Geet runs away...

Meeera was mad at Geet for rejecting her Maan bhai... Maan kept saying no for marriage...Finally Dadi had to pretend to have a heart attack to make him agree for this marriage...The girl is Vicky's friend Rohan's sister Sameera...Maan had also seen her when she was young...Then they chatted on social networks...

Maan is ready for this relationship...And here he is about to start a new life, but his heart is still lingering in the past...Maan stands in the balcony and keeps looking at Geet playing with Nandu...How could Maan forget her?He is yet to forget his first love...He is staring her right now and Geet too had noticed him staring her...

She is a little worried...She takes Nanda and goes out of his sight...After a while Maan bumps into Meera who is searching Geet...Meera asks him to find Geet and tell her that koi ladhka aaya hai usse milne...Maan is shocked...

MAAN: par Geet toh kissi aur se pyar karthi haina?

Meera: aapko kaise patha?

Meera is surprised...

MAAN: mujhe patha hai, Geet told me

Meera: kya?

MAAN: what happened? Aapke parents ne accept nahi kiya? That's why she is so upset?

Meera: nahi nahi, that guy doesn't love her it seems

Geet had told Meera too that she is in love with some guy...But Meera found out that she is very upset...She asked Geet the reason and Geet told her that the guy she loves(Maan) doesn't like her, but still she couldn't forget him and move on...Meera had been pushing Geet to come out of the past and make a new beginning...

MAAN: what? I didn't know that

Meera: humme bhi abhi abhi patha chala

MAAN: but why?

Meera: ye toh Geet ko hi patha hai

Meera is worried about her sister...

MAAN: you don't worry, I'll tell Geet, and you see, she will be happy

Meera: you are so nice

Maan goes in search of Geet...Geet is wandering around trying to hide from Maan...Maan finds her and pulls her inside a room...Geet is nervous...

Maan is not worried at all...As soon as he knew that she is single he yearns to be with her again...

Geet: chodo mujhe

MAAN: nahi codh saktha

Geet: aaj aapki shadhi hai

MAAN: tumne ab tak shadhi kyun nahi ki?

Geet: it's none of your business

MAAN: you are my babhi's sweet little sister, how can I just ignore you

Maan keeps staring Geet...He is mersmerised by her beautiful looks...

MAAN: you haven't changed a bit

Geet: mujhe jaana hai

MAAN: haan haan, someone has come to see you

Geet: what?

MAAN: koi ladhka aaya hai, ussko bhi bhagao mat, just be nice to him

Geet is surprised...

Geet: I know

Geet tires to move...Maan stops her...

MAAN: aaise jaathi toh ladhka apne aap bhaag jaayega

He corrects her hair and adjusts her dress...

MAAN: now you look a little better, all the best

Geet stares him and leaves...

Geet chases off that boy and later Maan's dulhan runs away from the wedding...kismat connection...

.Maan gets furious...Ye Indian girls are so scared of their parents that they keep their love story secret and ditch the poor bride groom at the last minute...

Atleast Geet was bold enough to tell him in the beginning itself...As the news spreads the guest start questioning about the unlucky Dulhe raja's future...They feel pity for him...Nani got the news and she is worried that this would upset dadi and her weak heart would stop pumping hearing this...

Maan is also worried about Dadi only...Then Nani herself comes up with an idea...She wants the marriage to go on with some other bride...instant bride...And that happens to be Geet...

Maan is OK with that...he is ready to do anything for dadi...And the Khuranas also find it to be the best way to save their family name...But the only problem is Geet...

Nani goes and tells Geet about everything...But Geet is not ready for this marriage...that too with MSK...

Geet: mujhe nahi karni koi shadhi wadhi

Nani: chup...bilkul chup

Nani warns Geet...

Nanai: bas Geet, ab bahut ho gaya, jaldhi tayaar hokke mandap mein beitjao

Geet: Nani

Nani: hum tumme behther jaanthe hai, iss bar koi natak nahi, Meera issko tayaar karkke neeche lekhe aao

Nani almost threatens Geet and succeeds in her mission...Dadi pretends to be not aware of the changes and she says that she is happy as far as Maan gets married...

But all this was dadi's plan executed by nani...Geet sits in the mandap with an angry face...

Maan doesn't complain for he is very happy that his love story ended happily...Geet stops talking with Maan... And that night...It's Maneet SR...

Geet is waiting for her instant husband...She doesn't know what to expect from him...One thing is sure...she believes that he married her only to save his reputation...And that sucks...Being someone unwanted...and just got the wifey position by chance...

And for Maan it's a different problem...What should he do tonight...If he goes ahead with the SR Geet would think that he has no concern for her feelings...He doesn't wait for her approval of their relationship...He didn't give her the time to settle and is selfish...

And if he restrains from SR then she may feel rejected...She may take it as a disapproval of this relationship...And that is the worst that could happen to them now...Maan is frustrated and feels helpless...He couldn't seek anyone's advice for none have had such an experience...

Maan enters the room with a lot of confusion...But when he sees Geet sitting like an angel he couldn't control himself...He is lost in her magigal and enchanting beauty that he looses his senses and his desire wins over his conscience...

Maan gets near her and Geet gets restless...Maan removes her pallu and looks into her beautiful eyes...Geet is equally confused and she looks at his eyes for an answer...Maneet eyelock...mahi...

Geet is awestruck...what was he trying to do?And why would he stop? Geet is ahsmaed that she couldn't fulfil his expectations...She always had this feeling that she is not good enough for the MSK...She is not the one for MSK...And he doesn't like her...She is angry with her babaji for what happened...But babaji always chooses the best for us...haina?

Next day Geet wants to go home...Maan dropped her at their home and he was busy making arrangements for her departure...

They leave for Canada...Geet is afraid of her equation with MSK...Here she had her family, there she had to face him alone...She had hardly spoken with Maan after marriage...Maan takes her to their apartment...Geet hesitates and waits at the door as Maan gets in and he tips the guard for bringing the luggages...After he leaves Maan stares Geet...

MAAN: ab andar nahi aaogi? Tummare aarthi utharna padega kya?

Just then Maan remembers Dadi reminding him about the aarthi...Maan is not prepared for it...Geet tries to get in...

MAAN: rukh jao

Geet is frightened...Maan runs and gets a candy from the fridge...Geet is surprised...

MAAN: what?

Geet: I'm not a kid

MAAN: you may not be a kid, but you still behave like one

Geet: what?

MAAN: have this

Geet: mujhe nahi chahiye

MAAN: see, dadi wanted to welcome you with an aarthi, but I don't have such sofastications, so you have this sweet and pray to God that your new life is also sweet like that

Geet finds this acceptable...She chews the candy and enters her sasuraal with a blank head...She literally had no idea what would happen next...Maan looks at her and waits for her to have a look around the house...Geet blinks and looks at Maan for help...

MAAN: apna samaan utao

Geet: what?

MAAN: you know, if I touch your things you will start calling me a thief, and this is my home and I don't want to spoil my reputation

Geet drags her trolley...And the wheel is struck...She tries to lift it and the trolley falls on her foot...She sits down in pain...Maan comes running towards her...Maan scolds her for being careless...

MAAN: abhi abhi meinne bola tha, tumse toh bache behthar hai, patha nahi mein issko kaise sambaloonga

Geet ko toh bahut bhura laga...So Maan thinks that she is a burden for him...She gets up and starts to limp...Maan lifts her and Geet is electrified by that touch...

This is a dream come true for her...She is in her Maan's arms...She looks into his eyes and Maan too has lost his senses...Maneet eyelock...and unknowingly they convey their love for each other...

Maan takes her to a nearby room...Geet looks inside and finds no things of Maan...She is confused again...

MAAN: kya dekhthi ho? this is your room now

Geet gets in and slams the door...Maan expected some firework but not so soon...He leaves her alone...After a very long flight they are too tired for dinner and they just go to bed...

Next morning...

Geet was thinking about her new life overnight and so woke up late...She comes out and finds Maan ready...He is having his black coffee and sandwich which he had managed to get that morning...Since Maan had been in India there is no stock in the kitchen...

MAAN: lagtha hai tumme yahan bahut achche se needh aathi

Geet ignores him and opens the fridge to find it empty...

MAAN: coffee?

Geet is not used to having black coffee...

Geet: dhoodh nahi hai kya?

MAAN: I'll get it later

Geet sips the coffee and finds it too bitter...She makes a face and Maan gets angry...Geet then opens the cup boards and finds them empty...Maan rarely cooks after dadi left...He is used to instant food and take aways...

MAAN: mein lunch bahar karoonga

Geet stares him...Maan has forgot her...

MAAN: neeche ek Indian restaurant hai, tum wahii khalo

Geet: mujhe bahar khane ki aadat nahi hai

MAAN: I'll arrange a cook soon

Geet: mujhe khana pakana aatha hai

MAAN: then what's your problem?

Geet: mujhe toh hawa se khana pakana nahi aatha na

She shows the empty kitchen...

MAAN: jaldhi tayaar hokhe aao

Geet: kyun?

MAAN: mein tumme yahan ka stores dikhatha hoon, tum jo chaho lekhe aao

Maan takes her to the nearby stores...There he introduces Geet to the store manager Ms.Blenda.She is dadi's friend...Maan asks her to take care of Geet and leaves...Ms.Blenda is like family, and she is so happy to see Geet...She thought that she is the actual bride...She doesn't know about the confusion...

Ms.Blenda: ohh...you are so cute, simple Indian beauty that's why Maan agreed for the wedding finally

Geet smiles...how would she know the truth?

Ms.Blenda helps Geet get the groceries...Then Geet tells her that she would like to get a suit for herself for the evening party at Maan's office...Ms.Blenda is happy to help Geet...She takes her to a boutique...Geet asks her about Maan's taste...

Ms.Blenda: so, you want to impress Maan?

Geet blushes...

Ms.Blenda: come let me choose something trendy

Geet tries that suit...Maan just comes there to get a suit for Geet for the party...He wanted to gift her something ...As he enters he is puzzled to see everyone looking at someone...

MAAN: what do you think you are doing?

Geet: woh...mein

MAAN: tum ghar kyun nahi jaathi?

Geet: par bill?

MAAN: I'll pay, you just go

Geet thinks that Maan doesn't like her in that suit too...

Geet had called Ms.Blenda for lunch ...Dadi used to invite her to join them for lunch often...Geet prepares Kulcha, dum aloo and chicken tikka for her...She also makes gajar ka halwa...

Ms.Blenda loved them ...She also calls Maan to join them for lunch when she found that Maan is not coming home for lunch...Geet didn't expext Maan...

Ms.Blenda: come on young man, your lady has prepared a feast and how could you miss it?

Maan too likes it very much...

Ms.Blenda: gosh...Maan you are so sweet, you told your wife to pack the sweet for me just like Mrs.Khuarana

But Maan had not told anything to Geet...He is happy that Geet too is a warm and lovely host...Maan waits for his halwa but Geet had not saved some for him...She says that she had not cooked for him...Maan is disappointed but he knows that he would get to taste it sooner...

After seeing Geet in that sexy suit! (Geet toh Maan ko har angle mein sexy dekhthi hai), Maan has got her a simple saree...he wants his wife to look reapectful, like the new boss of KC...

When he gives her the saree and asks her to wear it for th party Geet gets angry...She feels that Maan thinks that only saree suits her...She is really angry...who is he to tell her what to wear and what not to? But she wears the saree as she is going to KC for the frist time and she doesn't want any more trouble...

At the party...

Geet still looks sexy in that saree...Maan never thought that a simple saree could be so sexy...Maan oculdn't take his eyes off Geet...Then they ask the couple to dance...

Kurban Hua...

Geet has literally enslaved Maan by her beautiful looks...Maan turns crazy and is hooked by her seductive moves...Geet becomes a mere doll in his hands that night...Maan is not ready to part with this beautiful Barbie doll...He wants her for the night...

He is desperate but doesn't know about Geet...Maan kept admiring her till they reached home...

Geet went to her room and Maan just followed her...Geet turns to close the door and Maan just makes his way in...Geet couldn't face him...She is feeling very nervous...She could sense a drastic change in Maan's looks and his intentions...She is a little scared too...

Maybe it's the drinks...She had seen Maan drinking...But that was only soft drink...Maan is intoxicated by her beauty...and this is also very dangerous...Maan had seen her scary eyes...

MAAN: betijao, mein tumse sirf baat karne aaya hoon

Geet sits on the bed and Maan sits beside her...Geet is bending down...Maan lifts her chin and brushes aside her hair to look into her eyes...

MAAN: tum bahut sundar ho Geet

Geet is shocked...

MAAN: tumme patha hai jab meinne tumme pehle bar dekha tabhi mujhe laga ki tum sirf meri ho

Geet: lekhin

Geet tries to speak...Maan closes her mouth with his finger...

MAAN: chup...bilkul chup

Geet looks into his eyes...Yes, he is telling the truth...Geet finds them filled with love for her...her only...

MAAN: itne din toh tum bolthi thi aur sab sunthe the, ab tum suno, waise tum mere saath aaise baat kyun nahi karthi?

Maan looks very upset saying that...Geet feels bad...

MAAN: aaj toh tumme uss suit mein dekhke mein apne aapko control hi nahi kar paya, you looked so hot, and this saree...iss saree mein

Maan takes a look closer...

MAAN: koi tumme na kasie kar saktha?

Geet: kya?

MAAN: woh kaun tha? Ullu ka patta, zaroor anda hoga

Geet: nahi nahi, woh aaise nahi hai

Maan thinks that she still supports him...

MAAN: tum abhi bhi usse pyaar karthi ho

Geet: haaan

Maan chup ho jaatha...Geet ko patha nahi Maan ko kaise kahein ki uss ullu ka patta Maan hi hai...She remains silent too...Maan sighs ...bids Gud night and leaves...

Geet change karkke sonne ki koshish karthi...But she couldn't sleep...She had to tell Maan everything...She goes and knocks Maan's door...

Maan is also awake...He is a little surprised...Itne raat ko Geet yahan kyun aayegi?

He opens the door and Geet stands there blinking...

MAAN: kya hua Geet? tum teek toh haina?

Geet just runs and hugs him passionately...Maan thinks that it's just b'coz of his confession...

MAAN: isski koi zaroorat nahi hai Geet, mujhe koi jaldhi nahi hai, I just wanted you to know how much I love you

Geet tightens her hold...Maan too hugs her and consoles her...

MAAN: Geet, mujhe patha hai, pehle pyaar ko bhoolna itna aasaan nahi hai, jab woh humme pyaar nahi bhi kartein tab bhi hum unko bhool nahi pathe,mere saath bhi waise hi hua

Geet gets angry...

Geet: aapko kisne kaha ki woh mujhse pyaar nahi karthe?

MAAN: hare, tumne hi kaha tha, haina?

Geet: woh meri galat fami thi

MAAN: what?

Geet: aap toh mujhe mujhse se bhi zyada pyaar karthe ho, haina babaji?

MAAN: Geeet

Geet: haan, uss ullu ka patta MSK hai

Geet blushes...

MAAN: tumne mujhe kyun nahi bathaya? Aur tumne kaha ki tum mujhe pasand nahi karthi?

Geet tells him the whole story...

MAAN: what? I was just making fun of you and you took it to be real?

Geet: mujhe toh aaisa hi laga

MAAN: tum toh sach mein pagal ho Geet, tummare pagalpan ne toh mere theen saal barbad kardhi

Geet: kya? Meinne kya kiya?

MAAN: tumne kya kiya?

Maan gets closer and closer...

MAAN: you will have to pay for it Geet, Maan hugs her tight...

Maan pauses and stares Geet...

MAAN: waise abhi abhi toh tumme jaanne laga hoon, lagtha hai aaj shuruwaad ho hi jayegi

Maan winks looking at her lips...Maan looks at her with lust...Geet closes his eyes...

Geet: aap hamesha aaise kyun dekhthe ho?

Maan takes off her hand...

MAAN: ab toh tum mere nazar se bach nahi sakthi

Geet: bhuri nazar, gandhi nazar

MAAN: mein kya karoon? The problem is you look hot in every dress, even in this night suit

Geet: ha ha ha, problem is not with me Mr.khurana, the problem is in your eyes, you always see me like that

MAAN: I just believe that you would look the best without any of those clothes

So saying Maan starts unbuttoning her dress...Geet hides her face with her hands...

MAAN: it's no use hiding anything now darling, it's time for action

Maan kisses her while his long hands start exploring her half exposed nature's gifts...

It's Maneet mahi time...mahiii...

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