THREAD III-ASYA DADDY PRINCESS last part @83-5/4/14 - Page 51

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Posted: 11 years ago
i just can wait for the nest part .Im curiuse i hope you show a sweet asad for a pregnant zoya im waiting thanks be happy😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow akka so cute, amazing,adorable, fabulous update... 👍🏼👍🏼
I just loved it to the core..❤️
cherishing FB of ajmer moments
I must say that u have written it so beautifully👏
Loved the pictures which u posted😳

I Love you zoya - aww
AsYa were too adorable as always😳
Asya was such a cute little princess😃
Office meeting scene was amazing loved their talk in conference room❤️ and a little funny too akka😆
woohoo finally Afzal is coming soon dhinka chika woohoo..
plz akka don't end this FF so soon😭
I was busy akka so this much of delay in comment. But gladly i have commented before u update next part😆
Ani❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
i know i havent replied to any of ur comments.. the net is very down right now.. will get back there soon..
till then enjoy... there is a surprise at the end.. hope you all like that😛😛

Part 52:

They cherished the family hug, and as they came out asad saw asya yawning, and in a second zoya repeating the same, and he did too..

A: let sleep..

The family went to the bed, with asad in the centre with asya and zoya on his left and right. As usual asya slept on her dad with her legs thrown over his hips and zoya doing the same on hs right side. Her head on his chest on their leg entwined, asad hugging them with his hands. This is their regular sleeping habit.though asya has her own room she sleeps with her parents on a passionate she will shifted to the green lounge. As the girls eyes closed in sleep, asad eyes were wide open expressing joy and guilt. He is going to a father again and now he will be there with zoya during each step of this pregnancy. The guilt feeling was inevitable. He remembered how zoya expressed her anguish to dilshad few months back after realsing her pregnancy. He was supposed to be there for her. Just like today the other day was suppose to be a cherished day in their life. But it was filled with pain for zoya, and he was not even aware of it.

His thoughts dwelled in the past and his heart was becoming heavy with guilt and tears poured out silently expressing his helplessness. Though everything was right now..he couldn't undo the past.. after a few minutes, a soft hand removed the tears from his cheek.

Z: that is enough asad... No more tears.. for the past.

A: zoya are u awake..

Z: I am.. and I know u will be feeling all this. I was silent for sometime so that u could make peace with the past. Now No more tears.

She leaned in and kissedhis cheeks and forehead. And caressed the whole face with her lips.. and asad did find peace with zoya in his arms.

A: when did u discover the presence of afzal..

Z: yesterday..

A: u didn't tell me..

Z: I wanted tell today on asya birthday.. and I know the moment I tell u. u will be torn between joy anf guilt. So thought on ur princeess bday.. u will be more happy..

A: hmm... u know me..

Z: more than yourself.

And the love birds hugged each other and went to sleep.

As the morning dawned, the dad and daughter got up before, and zoya was selepping . both of them dropped a good morning kiss on her and moved out to get ready for the day without disturbing her .

As everyone assembled in the dining table zoya was the last one to come, as soon asya saw zoya she jumped from her chair and hugged her ammi by her legs, zoya bent down and picked her and kissed..

AS: good morning she kissed her cheeks, and she bent down in her mom hands to her stomach and droped a kiss there and whispered.

As: good morning.. bro..

Dilshad and Radil.. looked at asya reaction and looked at asad for confirmation, and asad nodded his head in a yes.. and smiled..

Ze: this is a very good news appa. Come on .. moo meeta khigiyee.. sabko..

D was so happy with the news she went and hugged zoya and planted a kiss on her forehead, and applied kala tikka to remove evil eyes.

D: thank u so much .. dear..

Anwar congrualated zoya and took asad for a hug in happiness. The family settled down for the breakfast. Asad cut the apple with care and silently placed in zoya plates and signaled with his eyes. Though all the elders observed it, no one commented knowing asad nature.

D: now u r going to be at home and look after your health.

A: no ammi she will come to office. He answerd for his wife. Zoya was happy with his reply.

D: why so..

A: ammi.. everything will be her choice ammi.. and if she is working she will be 24* 7 with me.. and I didn't want to miss a moment this time.

The family went to doctor for the first check up and asad explained what is ultrasound in detail to his 3 year old daughter and explained afzal heart beat to her. The doctor asked asya how you know it is brother.

Asya proudly replied.. BCOZ MY ABBU SAID SO...

Asad office room has become a modular kitchen, with latest mixer and fridge filled fruits and veggies specially carrots ad dry fruits. His book shelf with pregnancy books and nutrients books. Yet he never put pressure on zoya . it was all timely food. And as zoya was eating for 2, and when everything was filled with asad love.. she never said NO for anything. She did find her ammi in him. And his care and sometime with tears, and asad had tears too bcoz what he missed in the past. The growth of his child inside his love. Due to hormonal secretion, her passion level in the night was both heaven and hell for him. He wanted to be smooth and soft, but zoya wanted raw passion.. their day in office was cherished,even the office staff piped in with some ideas and the older generation came with some tips and tricks for the couple.

They went to couple pregnancy class due to asad insistence, and asad learned the execise to follow for a normal delivery. Only on that he was strict with zoya, rest was her choice.

It was close to 5 months, zoya sat back in her chair in the office and closed her eyes.her thoughts went back 3 years back, the day she realized asya inside her. She was feeling a bit sick, and she didn't get the reason. Though she stayed in SM, her food intake was very less and she really survived on pizza and fruits she purchased on her money. Then she remembered she missed her period, as they were taking about this with humi on the morning. Then the whole thing crashed on her mind, she silently slipped and got the pregnancy test kit, and checked to see her doubts becoming true.

That moment, she was filled with joy and pain.. she is caring the symbol of her love... and she couldn't share that with him. She stayed back in her room, and thought long about what to do.. and how to do. She will never keep her kid away from her dad, only till things become normal in their life. She coaxed herself to stick to the thought. She came out of the room, only to see asad eyes searching for her and their eyes locked. Both the eyes echoed love and pain. Zoya hands went to her stomach and caressed it, and wished asad could do the same, feel their love inside her. Tears flow in their eyes, and zoya dissappeard back to her room.

She felt a hand caress the slightly grown stomach of her with care and touch, and she opened her eyes to see asad on her knees, and looking at her with tender love and care. Both their thoughts were the same, they will share everything they missed for asya. He kissed bump and kissed the forehead, and held her hand. And they went for their home.

I know it is smaller... but here is the surprise..

The part 1 of the other story I shared with you. The hidden truth.. do read it guys... and let me know ur views.. will be waiting..

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3968631/asya-ss-the-hidden-truth-note-teaser-85

Aishwa.. I know part 2 of holi is pending.. hopefully next Sunday...

last but not the least.. the whole sequence of asya barging into the conference hall in the last part was not my idea.. it was urvasini... and she gave the thought somewhere in the first thread of the story... i am just a drag person i used it in the thread=3,, thank u dear... everyone loved ur idea...

Edited by kals82 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

I LOVED IT...😳


Edited by aksasya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I missed you darling !!
I love it ... It was short but very good ...
Waiting for next update ... Please make it soon ... Love the chemistry between asya ...
Thank you for the Pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
ressy messy lionel messi 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part but short ,,
last scene was soo emotional ,,
u have described it beautifully (:

Asya was asusual super cute <3
Update sooon !!
going to read ur new story now :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res ...Unres
Finally, I have arrived...I am extremely sorry for being late...
The time here is 11:08 pm and here I am commenting on chapter 52😃
Oh wow...
Chapter 52, what a feat Kal👏
This was surely the sweetest part yet...The much anticipated arrival of little Afzal...
Well he hasn't arrived yet but he has blown the trumpets and announced that he will be here to stay soon
I could feel Asad's emotions coursing through my veins...His saddness and regret for not being with Zoya when she was pregnant with Asya...His helplessness of his lost moments for his daughters first smile, first word, first touch...Although you did not mention it...It was there, unspoken but still a very strong feeling...
I loved the way Zoya consoled him...The understanding, the mutual feelings...and the forgiveness...
The way they shared the news with the rest of the family was awesome...especially Asya's sweet kiss to the belly of her mum...
I loved Asya's line to the Dr..."Cos my abbu said so"...So much faith and trust in her Abbu's words...that she brought a smile to my lips at Asya's sweet and beautiful words...
I adore your version of Asad...You have made him into a beautiful man who has learned to respect and trust the one's closest to him...I adore the way that he showers his love on Zoya, asya and his soon to be born son...He is possesive but not in a stifling way...more protective and amazingly adoring...
Kal, I cannot wait for the little one to arrive...
I know the next part is the last but would you believe I didn't even peak at the update...not that I don't want to read but because I don't want this to end...
But I have braced myself, reigned in my emotions and I am off to read it...😃
Edited by NAVI55 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i m so happy for the emotions that asad felt for zoya pregnancie and he is so sweet.Thanks because your writte its amazing on passing emotins i just love it .And thanks for the surprise i enjoy a lot.Be happy😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Asad is so caring <3
Cont soon :)

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