OS updated pg 3: Adventures of Abhimanyu and his brothers

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1. MELANCHOLY Page 1

MELANCHOLY

A deafening thunder startled at once a midst complete darkness the sparkle of the thunder gave a glimpse of the magnificent palace of Dwaraka. It was a incomparably tall building made out lustrous silver and bedecked by Royal blue sapphire stones yet its effect was neutralized by the charm of a an incredebily handsome man who had a beautiful peacock feather in his crown behind whom the beloved princess of Dwarka Subhadra stood petrified due to the lightening.

The ever smiling king of Dwarka gently took over the hands of Subhadra from his yellow fabric gently and calmed her down and asked her "Dear sister where can I find my nephew Abhimanyu?" She replied "He is with your beloved wife Satyabhama and with his favorite brother Bhanu (Satyabhama and Krishna's son) and not to forget our Sashirekha as well (Balram and Revatis Daughter)."I am sensing the disaster ahead Subhadra " said lord Krishna. As always Subhadra never understood what her brother exactly tried to tell her and this time she is not to be blamed as she was suffering due to the separation from her beloved husband. All the children being teenagers were now smitten by love and attraction.

Abhimanyu was attracted towards his childhood friend sashirekha or vatsala.Bhanu and Abhimanyu resembled Krishna and Arjuna in terms of bonding and friendship.Satyabhama was very affectionate towards Abhimanyu and thought him Archery during his childhood.Bhanu and Abhi were in a deep conversation on the terrace away from the spies especially their mother.

Bhanu: "Brother you look very tensed and worried?"

Abhi:"I am worried about the hardships my family is facing in the forest and I miss my siblings"

Then a girl in her sweet voice "My uncle Krishna says that time is the only remedy for overcoming the grief of all hardships".Abhimanyu smiles and exchanges passionate glances with this girl with extremely adorable looks.sensing the love in air Bhanu taps the shoulder of abhimanyu and winks at him. He tells his sister "please handle my brother carefully"and tells abhimanyu "Be careful brother you have no idea she is a dangerous woman".Meanwhile Revati (Balram's wife)was searching for her daughter everywhere .She heads towards Satyabhama's chambers.SHE finds Krishna and Satyabhama indulged in deep conversation.

In a harsh tone she says "Krishna I know you are very fond of Arjuna and his son.I do accept that we have thought of a marriage alliance between abhi and sashi in their childhood but the Pandava's have lost their kingdom riches and everything.I don't want my daughter to suffer hardships of a common woman.I have also seen that your son Bhanu is playing the cupid to get them together.You better warn him"Subhadra overheard her words and had tears in her eyes.Krishna said "any matter concerned to your daughter wouldn't happen without your consent respected sister in law" and smiled.

Subhadra searched for Abhimanyu and found him on the terrace with Sashi she said "Shashi it is getting late and your mother is getting worried I guess you should be leaving".Shashi reka leaves from the place.

Subhadra warns Abhi to stay away from this girl and recites him the incident.

Abhimanyu's heart filled with greif.Next morning Abhi was taken on a flying golden chariot to a forest nearby .Bhanu said"Meet the mighty Gatotkach son of incredible Bheem".Both the brothers greeted each other and discussed .Gatothkach was a person who knew magic tricks he chanted a trick and within no time Abhi and Bhanu were in the great palace of Panchala. Abhi and Bhanu were new to the palace and decided to take opposite directions in search of their brothers.Abhi spotted a huge person gulping food and he tightly hugged him and said"How are you brother Suthsom??" Sruthsom was more than happy and took Abhi to other brothers who were practicing with their weapons.

Meanwhile Bhanu was lost in the palace he gets into the room where political discussionshappen he learns that Shakuni has tricked Balaram and thought of a marriage alliance between Lakshmana (*DURY's son) and Sashi. He was shocked.He thinks that he has to plan something with Gatotkach and not let this happen.He observes Dristhadyumn and and hides himself in a room from the balcony of the room he jumps into a nearby garden .He observes a girl trying hard to pluck a flower from the branch .

He quickly takes his bow and strikes it all the flowers fall on this girl who is draped in pink fabric with lovely big eys resembling lotus petals .Her lotus eyes turn red and tears drop down her cheeks.He feels her pain and was deeply atracted towards this girl.The girl looks at this incredibly handsome guy with teary eyes he says"Who are you ?? and I was trying to help you I am sorry if I hurt you".The girl replied "Your act reminds me of my father" and sobbed she composed herself gave him a stern look and said"I don't reveal my identity to strangers" a voice is heard "Princess Suthanu Maharaj Drupad is searching for you" the dasi looks at Bhanu and says"Princess he would be a perfect match for you".Bhanu is still confused trying to figure out the identity of the girl...

TO be continued...

very nice :..👏pls do continue ..only such stories will be relief in midst of the VH track...

Originally posted by: shruthy89

very nice :..👏pls do continue ..only such stories will be relief in midst of the VH track...

Beautiful frappie. You know, your stories remind me of the 2010/2008 (i dont rem year properly) Film Ghatothkacha. It was a very very sweet film. I loved it so much. I dont watch animations generally but I loved that film. Your stories remind me of that film. (I am not saying you copied it. No never! I can understand they are original and beautifully written.) I would like you to change the colour of the font when you write so then it will look nice.😊 Only if there is no problem. 😃

Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar

Beautiful frappie. You know, your stories remind me of the 2010/2008 (i dont rem year properly) Film Ghatothkacha. It was a very very sweet film. I loved it so much. I dont watch animations generally but I loved that film. Your stories remind me of that film. (I am not saying you copied it. No never! I can understand they are original and beautifully written.) I would like you to change the colour of the font when you write so then it will look nice.😊 Only if there is no problem. 😃

frappie wow!!! 👏 👏 👏
i was actually thinking of getting bhanu into the scenes with suthanu n you juz did it!!1 sooo happpy!!!!
do continue dear!!!!!!

Your stories are simply amazing...👏

Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair

frappie wow!!! 👏 👏 👏
i was actually thinking of getting bhanu into the scenes with suthanu n you juz did it!!1 sooo happpy!!!!
do continue dear!!!!!!