Forver Yours ||Kriyaansh Os|| Page 7 :D TY ^_^

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DO LOOK AT THE NOTE AFTER THE OS.

Forever Yours

Excited and Delighted were the only two words that were defining kria's current mood. After all she had just over heard Rey and swayam talking about Rey's plan of proposing her after the deal is signed.

After a lot of hardships the integration had been signed , and the work for the dance academy had started with a bang. Kria had decided to stay back in India with the gang much to their delight or to be more specific Rey's delight.

Today , the gang was going to celebrate in a restraint. It was rey's idea , obviously with the hidden motive of proposing his love Kria. Kria took 3 hours to get ready for this special day as she knew what was going to happen.

Rey's car reached . Kria came out of the guest house . Rey stared at her. For him , it felt as if a goddess was descending from the stairs , with her pure and angelic smile , her eyes shining in delight , and her cheeks having a natural hue. Her hair was tied in a bun , with few strands freed and curled up.

He forwards his hand to kria like a gentle man. Kria took it.

"Hi rey."

"Hey."

Kria looked at him , he looked into her eyes , and at once knew that she was anticipating for his thoughts about how she looked.

"You're looking good kria."

Her smile disappeared for a second. She was just looking good? Not perfect , gorgeous , out of this world or something? But then at least he gave her a compliment. He suddenly stepped forward a bit close to her now. Kria looked at him with wide eyes. He smiled and removed her clip . letting her hair fall on her shoulders.

"Now you look perfectly gorgeous kria."

Kria lowered her eye lashes blushing. With her fingers she adjusted her hair. Rey opened the door for her. She sat inside. Rey sat on the driver's seat. The car ride was silent , but not without the constant touches and the love lost smiles to each other.

They finally reached the place. All smiled seeing the couple approach them. They were happy for both of them, as they knew now they are going to be one after so many hurdles and misunderstandings.

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It was finally time for Rey to propose kria. Kria's heartbeats had increased at a very rapid speed , she was feeling tensed , excited . She was confused as to what was going to happen.

"Girls , why don't you all go out to the garden , there is a camp fire going there I guess."

Kria was now nervous. The girls knowing his plan immediately nod.

"Let's go kria."

Kria nods , her throat was dry. In few minutes , rey was going to propose her. She drank a glass of water and got up , when swayam's phone rang. Swayam picked it up.

"WHAT!"

He shouted at the top of his voice. The girls turn. Swayam looked at everyone tensed , he had tears in his eyes. Sharon spoke.

"What's wrong Swayam?"

"Taani , she met with an accident and is critical."

All look at each other in shock. Kria looked at rey , who had a blank expression. For rey it was a hard blow . Just as he was going to start a new life with kria , his past is in front of him that to with such a bad news.

Swayam got up and went. The gang also reached the hospital. Kria was with sharon all this while , who immediately went to swayam as soon as they reached the hospital. Swayam was crying , why wouldn't he? She was his sister after all.

Rey also sat. Kria puts his hand on rey's shoulder , she gave him an assuring smile.

"Don't worry Rey. She'll be fine."

Rey looked at her and gave her a weak smile. He knew , kria must be thinking that he still loves taani , but no he didn't. Taani had been an integral part of his life but now he loved kria , she was his first and true love. He won't say taani was an infatuation , he had loved her , but didn't love her enough.

He was tensed for taani as a friend's perspective and not that of a lover's. He felt bad for kria right now. He knew the turmoil she must be going through. In these two years she had been the one who was left alone , and now when she was getting her love back to her , she might be feeling that he going away from her again.

And that is what exactly kria was thinking. She thought that rey still loves taani and just got distracted by her. This thought could bring tears in her eyes , but she knew she had to be with rey. So what if he didn't love her , but she did and she would support him right now. The thought that he was going to go far away from her again made her shudder.

"Kria."

She heard his voice , it was filled with care and tension. She looked at him , and then at swayam , who now looked at the two. He gave her a weak smile , she smiled back at him . Sharon had consoled him. But now he was tensed for kria and rey. He mouthed.

"You fine?"

To which kria replied by blinking her eyes in assurance. Rey made place for her to sit , kria sat beside him. The doctor came and told that taani was out of danger , and sleeping. They could meet her but one by one.

First went vishesh of course , then rishi , then swayam , then sharon , then the others , and at last it was rey's turn.

Kria had been holding his hand . He got up and sighed deeply. He turned to kria , who gave him a weak smile. Rey left her hand.

He had just left her hand to go inside , but for kria , she thought that he had left her hand forever again. He was going inside. She remembered that night , the way rey had gone out of her room , and she couldn't stop him. He entered taani's room and she couldn't stop him again.

Well maybe that is why love is called selfless. Where you don't seek for your happiness but you're partner's happiness.

She looked down , the eyes which had been shining with delight this morning , now had fright stored in them. She felt sharon hold her shoulder. She didn't dare look up , knowing she would burst out crying.

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Inside .

Rey entered the room and saw taani lying there. She gave him a smile. Rey smiled back and sat on the seat.

"So?"

"So what rey?"

"Vishesh se jhagda hua?"

"No. Uh yeah."

"You love him?"

"He made me fall in love with him Rey. How is life?"

"Great."

"Swayam bhai told me. She is back isn't she?"

Rey looked at taani and nods.

"Rey , have I ever told you , I have spoken to kria?"

"No."

"She loves you a lot rey. I was too selfish to tell you at that time , but now I want to. Don't lose her rey. Don't! "

"I won't. She is mine just mine."

"Good."

They spoke for 15 minutes about everything that changed in these months , and about their respective loves.

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Outside.

It was 20 minutes since rey was inside. Swayam looked at vishesh who blinked his eyes in assurance knowing exactly the conversation that might be going in. Swayam got up and went to kria. Swayam made her look at him.

"Kria?"

Kria hugged him tight. She didn't cry , but just hugged him. She needed her best friend's support right now , and he would give her. The door opened , but neither kria hadn't seen it not swayam.

Rey came out and his eyes immediately darted towards the place where kria was sitting. He looked at sharon in confusion , sharon looked down.

Was she crying? No! He couldn't let this happen , he couldn't hurt her again. With slow steps , he went to kriyam.

"Kria."

Kria pulled back , she looked at rey . Swayam moved aside .

"It's late. Come on I'll drop you."

Kria didn't say no because she just wanted to spend these moments with him. She got up , and followed rey. They sat in his car and reached kria's home. Kria was going to go when rey held her hand and pulled her to him.

"Kria."

Kria lowered her lashes , this time not to hide her blush but pain. Rey puts his hand on her cheek and made her look at him. He kissed her forehead.

"I love you and I am just yours. Not taani's."

Kria looked at him. Rey pinned her hair back. He gave a kiss on her cheek.

"Kria , I love you just you."

Kria didn't reply , she really thought it was a dream. Rey then moved back and claimed her lips to his. He kissed her softly , kria responded back . He then pulled her back.

"I love you too rey."

She had tears of happiness in her eyes , but rey kissed both her eyes.

"No. Don't cry."

"You're mine?"

She asked innocently. Rey looked at her and nods.

"Forever yours kria."

Saying this he again kissed her. Kria replied back this time with more love , trust and happiness.

---

Destiny had played It's last game with them. It played this game to remove the last bit of trouble in their life. To finish rey's past's chapter forever , so that it never haunts their fresh relation again. And thanks to rey's actions , they won the game.

***

Hope you liked it. This Os as I said , will decide whether it is my last OS or not. I am NOT discontinuing my FF/SS because I have some loyal readers who make sure to read and review my updates. For them I have not discontinued my works.

Guys if you think am over reacting then tell me. If you think I DO NOT deserve the number of reviews I expect , please tell me . I won't ask for them I promise you , but at least don't keep me blindfolded and confused about your thoughts on my stories. I would love to improve , if you find faults in my stories.

Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
nice story...
Edited by AMAR_LOVE - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it's awesome os i love it
and thanks for continuing your stories.. i really appreciate your stories and i love your ff. always pm me.

thanks for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Ishu...

Awesum OS dear...

Loved it...

Kriyaansh p.o.v...
Kriyam scene...

Everything was grt...

Hope dis isn't ur last OS...

Thnks fr d pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its awesome!!!
Pehle kriyansh ka almost proposal!!!
Fir achanak se taani ka accident!!! 😭 😲
N dono k thots were precisely described!!!
N den taani ne kriya ko na jaane dene k liye bola!! 😲
I lykd dat!!!
N den d not-so-grand bt definitely emotional n soothing proposal!!!
Yaar tu to bahot romantic hai!! 😉 😆
Atleast kriyansh ko lekar to hai hi!!!
N kriya ki cuteness kab kam hogi yaar!!! Humesha flat kar deti hai logon ko!!
She asked you're mine?? N he replied from d heart!!!
Meaning everything he spoke!!!
Awww!!! Wat a grt os!!!!
N bacha thnx ki tu ku6 discontinue nahi kar rahi hai!!
N dnt get disheartened!!!
Ab tere works ki aadat ho gayi hai!!! So regular update deti rehna!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS...
Really loved it alott...
1st happy kriiya...and then pain of loosing her love once again...
Tthn finally rey purposeed her...
Awsome
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ishu...🤗...
do u know how much m proud of you...???...just be like this always... okay...???
about OS..it was a pure bliss to me...i hv always dreamt of smthing like this in show...
rey all set to propose her...nd she knew it...dat excitement plus nervousness...too adorable...compliment session...evrything was so cute...
then taani ka accident...dat part was amazingly beautiful...
jo darr tune kriya ke mann me yaha dikhaya...m still waiting for it in show...
nd how rey shooed away all her insecurities...dat was best...
dat kiss of love...i loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was very very very good... This shouldnt be your last OS ...U should definitely continue ... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazon OS ..!
Loved the ending .. :)
Thanks for the PM about this OS
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice OS...
Hey this shouldn't be your last... Keep writing more...

Thanks for pm...

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