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Today the setting was that of a honeymoon and where two people who were in love with each other was meant to enjoy and consume their relationship with love.
Here shlok and astha both are very much in love with each other and almost all ready to consume their love but for the interference of many problems which were keeping them apart.
Like shlok's past in the form of aditi/swati issue that was constantly between them like a ghost and keeping them apart and not allowing shlok to move forward for the fear of losing love again.

Like the divorce in the form of police raid which pulled them apart and which was being used by others to again keep them apart as husband and wife.

Like astha's intoxication of love and jealousy in the form of the druggie which was not allowing her to see what shlok really wanted from her even though she was sensing it.

Like the intentions of both families which were like a jungle in which astha was losing the way and from which shlok was trying to save her in his own twisted manner but which astha was not understanding and therefore shlok had to make her follow him without giving her a choice, which astha was misunderstanding as hate for her.

But finally, even though aditi tried to keep Shlok away from astha and take her place, shlok didn't allow her plans to work as his love has shifted to astha and is not interested in going back to the past even though aditi /swati is trying her level best by trying to seduce shlok.

The divorce has made astha aware that she loves shlok and wants to live with him her whole life and so she's looking at shlok to somehow save her but all she has to do is say no to it, but for that she needs shlok's confession of love, even though she knows he does care for her, but that is not enough,only his love will save the relationship this time not force.

Astha's very love and jealousy has already started to break down the walls that shlok has built around him and his love and concern is becoming obvious as he can't control his feelings anymore or doesn't want to as he himself wants to be with astha.

Today when Astha asked shlok how he allowed aditi to call herself as his wife, shlok told her, that by now she should have understood the relationship between them both(shlok and astha )and so not feel jealous about what anybody said as it doesn't count before the truth of their relationship and so stay in her limits as his wife and be safe.(indirectly telling her to cancel her plans for divorce).When astha also berated him for not expressing his love directly and using a twisted way to do it,(as in showing his care and love when Astha is in danger or hurt) as he forgot how to love, shlok got angry and called her a certified mental and gone case as he himself also is.

Today,astha indirectly told him she was ready to have a relationship with him and went inside the room only to find aditi in a slinky nighty, when she knew shlok was there and astha got angry with aditi for telling lies about being shlok's wife, but again wrongly forgave aditi,who occupied the bed she offered to them, showing that she can't be trusted at all.

When shlok saw aditi occupy the bed there was a disappointment and anger in his face as he looked at astha,who herself was looking helpless and angry.It just simply and clearly showed how much they wanted to be together alone and it also indicated that they might take their relationship forward.

When shlok went to sleep outside astha also accompanied him, but again both were on opposite sides apart from each other in a setting naturally made for lovers, with fire of their love which will melt shlok's hardness of heart, with the open sky indicating freedom, fullmoon indicating their love and it's shine giving them it's blessing,astha covering shlok with her love and affection and her words, that she wanted the night to never end so she could be with shlok forever frozen in time, and didn't want the sun to rise(shlok after the hate confession told her that shlokagnihotri is the black night that she will never escape all her life and now it was astha herself who wanted the night not to end so that she can be with shlok)with the moon and stars giving them light,.Her longing for shlok was very clear.

Here shlok was listening to astha's words which he himself was feeling towards her and felt sad that he could not express to her , his feelings as he was still scared of losing in love.
But even though they were far away from each other they are one in their hearts where their love shines like moonlight on each other bonding them for life as their honeymoon of the hearts has already started and will slowly become full like the moon in the dark night.
The full moon indicates they love will be fullfilled and it's shine will always bestow it's blessing on them.



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Asusual romantic poetic analysis...thank you...😳
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lovely interpretation of the scenes akashavani. great job.
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Originally posted by: decemapr

Asusual romantic poetic analysis...thank you...😳

Thank you very much.😉
What's ur name if u don't mind.
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Originally posted by: dsr11

lovely interpretation of the scenes akashavani. great job.

Thank you very much rekha.😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very beautiful and hatke take of the events, loved how you connected aditi with past and police with divorce👏
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Wau wonderful post 👍🏼
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Originally posted by: Neelum.drashti


very beautiful and hatke take of the events, loved how you connected aditi with past and police with divorce👏

Thank you very much neelum.😃
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Originally posted by: kop93


Wau wonderful post 👍🏼

Thank you kop.very much.👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great post good analysis 👍🏼

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