Straight from heart ~ KriYaansh OS (HBD pyaari kamini aka nikki :*)

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Straight from Heart



Kriya was standing in the middle of a well decorated gazebo. The gazebo was decorated with white and pink colored curtains. It was like every girl have dream about for their date.

There in front of Kriya was a boy on his knee. He took Kriya's hand in his and spoke.

"I really - really from my depth of heart like I mean love you. I just don't know how, when but m mad for u. I really love u"

He said and looks at Kriya for answer with a cute face. Kriya smiled and said

"I love u too Swayam"

She said in really different tone and Swayam looked at her she smiled as if saying something which Swayam understood and he hugged her. Kriya too responded back.

Their hug was broke by a sound of someone laughing. They looked in that direction and found a Rey who was laughing like mad person.

"Rey...?"

Kriya shouted and that's when Rey shut his mouth and came towards them and looked at them and chuckle again and Kriya smacked his back play fully.

"Rey tu kya kar raha hai idhar...?"

Swayam asked hugging Rey sideways. Rey looked at him. Swayam was dressed in a total gentleman dress.

"What do u mean by me idhar kya kar raha ho...? tu meri best friend ko propose kar ne wala hai and me idhar nah raho..?? Esa hosakta hai..?? Haina Kriya...?"

Rey spoke and looked at Kriya.

"Of-course tum toh idhar rahoge hi."

Kriya said with smile. Swayam looked at the duo with confusion. But he chooses to ignore it.

"Rey tu haas kyu raha tha...?"

Swayam asked Rey not getting why he was laughing like mad. Rey again laugh a little and looked towards Swayam.

"Swayam really..?? Tera proposal sunke koi bhi haasega depth of my heart I like I mean I love u' seriously Swayam tu ese bolega...?"

Rey mimicry Swayam. And this time it was Kriya who started to laugh like mad and Rey to join her. Swayam pouted cutely.

"Guys stop laughing m hell nervous"

Swayam said and both Rey and Kriya stopped laughing and look at Swayam in disbelief.

"Swayam come on yaar u have to only propose her."

Kriya spoke looking at him. Swayam looked at her and nodded in nervousness.

"Swayam tune Kriya ke saat I guess 100 bar practice ki hogi ab tak. Logo ko toh Kriya hi teri girlfriend lag rahi hogi seriously."

Rey said and laughed at his not-so-funny-joke and in return he got a hard glare from Kriya.

"Swayam yaar don't worry everything will be fine."

Kriya said in assuring voice and Rey to nod his head as if agreeing with what Kriya said.

"And Swayam tera dost ho iskeliye bola raha ho proposal natural rakh. Sharon loves it."

Rey advise him. And Swayam smiled at him and nodded his head and hugged his two best friends who were helping her a lot.

They broke the hug. They heard Sharon's car stopping. Both Rey and Kriya bid a quick all the best to Swayam and went away. Both Rey and Kriya were there only, they hide them self means Sharon couldn't see them.

Rey and Kriya hide themselves behind some tree. Both of them were very close to each other Rey's hands were on Kriya's waist supporting her from not falling. Kriya was busy in looking at Swayam and Sharon.

Kriya was not at all knew how close they were standing. Over here Rey was totally lost in Kriya some unspoken feeling were taking place inside him. Rey adored Kriya to the fullest.

"Rey Sharon and Swayam kitne cute lagte hai nah saat me...?"

Kriya spoke looking at Sharon and Swayam and smiling towards them.

"Hmm"

Was the only reply which Kriya got? Indeed Rey was totally lost in Kriya by now. Kriya looked behind to find a lost Rey who was staring at Kriya.

Kriya started feeling uncomfortable due to Rey's intense graze on her. She to look into his eye. Both could feel the sparks between them. Kriya tried to move away but her leg slipped and she was about to fall but Rey hold her protectively in his arms.

Kriya had closed her eyes and she waiting to hit the ground but soon she realized that she was protectively held in some ones arms she slowly opened her eyes only to meet a pair of chocolate brown orbs which was staring her and waiting to open her eyes.

Kriya looked into Rey's eyes. And there started the famous LLHH of them. They were only staring at each other's eyes. They both could feel the emotions for each other, the love in their eyes for each other. And the respect which they both had. In that movement it left like they didn't need any words to speak to tell each other anything.

I strand of Kriya's hair was disturbing the beautiful eye lock and Rey's view too. So Rey gently with his free hand tuck the strand behind her ear. They were in same pose for god knows how much time and their eyes were speaking volumes. Their eyes were conversing the unspoken words of both of them.

Soon a loud noise broke their eye lock. Both looked at each other and then at their position. Rey quickly made Kriya stand on her feet and step back a little. Both were not at all awkward as they got the clear idea about each other's feeling.

Both turned around to look and Sharon and Swayam to see what happen..?? And to find the reason of that voice. They turned around and the look surprises them.

"Yuppie Swayam ne finally propose kardiya"

Kriya said in excitement clearly visible on her face. And in this excitement she hugged Rey tightly. Rey too hug back Kriya tightly. He was too happy for his best friends.

"And Sharon said yes"

Rey said and broke the hug both were looking in each other's eyes again. Kriya was the one to look away she looked at Sharon and Swayam who were hugging each other.

"Rey lets go and congratulate them nah"

Kriya said in excitement to wish her best friend. Rey look and her and smiled at her childish behavior.

"Kriya I think that's a bad idea. Hume unhe thoda private time dena chaiye. We should go now."

Rey spoke. Kriya first made a sad face but after listening everything she smiled. And both of them left the place.

Both were walking on the streets of Mumbai. After leaving the place both didn't speak a word. But were steeling glances of each other from Conner of their eyes. They never need words to speak.

"Rey chow patty...!"

Kriya shouted like a 5 year old girl. Pointing her index finger towards the beach. Rey looked towards the beach and then at her.

"Kriya itni raat ko..?? Chow patty jaana..."

Rey's sentence was left incomplete as Kriya cut him.

"Shut up Rey"

Saying this she dragged Rey on the beach. Soon Kriya's shoes were on the sand and Kriya in the water. Kriya loved playing in water from childhood but in her home town there were hardly any beaches. Rey was standing near water and admiring Kriya.

Kriya soon sense a pair of eye looking at her. Kriya turned around and saw Rey standing near water. By hand Kriya indicated Rey to come in but Rey nod his head in no. Kriya shook her head and went towards Rey and pushed him into the water. Due to this Rey felled and he got totally drenched in water. Rey looked at his wet shirt and then towards a Kriya who was madly laughing at him.

"Tume badi hassi arahi hai nah... ab haaso"

Saying this Rey started to throw water on Kriya. Soon Kriya too join him in this game. They were playing like 2 five year old kids playing in water. They threw water on each other, they danced in the water, and in short they were gone crazy in water.

With the noise of a cop which was telling them to come outside of water and go to their home, both realized that it's quite late and both came out of the water totally drenched and again started their walk on the streets of Mumbai. Both were again silent. But soon both burst out in the peals of laughter.

"Kriya u know u are totally mad"

Rey said in between of his laugh. Kriya looked at him and said

"I know that... But tell me it was fun nah...?"

Kriya said controlling her laugh.

"Yep it was great fun."

Saying these both looked at each other. Again silence took over them. Kriya was looking here and there but not looking at Rey. This time it was Rey who broke the silence between them.

"Kriya..?? I want to say something"

Rey spoke and stop on the place. Making Kriya to stop, Kriya looked at Rey and indicate him to say what he wanted to say.

"Kriya m going to keep it short and simple, I don't know how to say this to a girl it's just I want to say u that I love you"

Rey said directly looking into Kriya's eyes. Kriya knew that what Rey said was directly from his heart. Kriya never ever dream about the proposal but she every time wanted that he proposal should be direct from the heart and that was what Rey did for her.

"I love u too Rey..."

Kriya said and throw her arms around Rey's neck. Rey to hug her back with all his mighty. Finally the unspoken words were out on their mouth. They finally confessed their feeling for each other. Now they were finally KriYaansh from Kriya and Rey.

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Happy birthday meri pyaari kamini aka nikki
I hope tujhe ye mera chotasa OS aacha lage joh I don't think acha hai. But aacha nah lage toh pehle se hi sorry as me beemar ho and isse jada kuch nhi likh payi teri liye.
Hope u guyzz to love it..
Do review me back with lots of comment and do hit like tab plzz..
Have awsum day
Lots of love,
Abhilasha

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ramya.reddy thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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mai unleshingg hehehe🤣
awesome os
jab starting mai pade the swayam proposing kria i was like😡
maine sochliya that i am goona kill u for sure
tab aage pade thhe tab pata chala that swayam practicing with kria to propose sharon😆
hehehe then rey ke entry swayam ka mazak udayingg becchara swayuu
then kria ne rey ko glare dii tab chup hogayaa hehehe😆
and then sharon aagayee unka proposal hogayaa
tab rey kria ko admiring hayee
then unke llhh awieee
then they went frm their then unke mastii pagalpanti was cute
finally rey ne confess kardee hayeee
then unke kiss😳
awesome it iss totally loved it
Edited by ramya.reddy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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kaaammooo
me unresing!!! khush ho jaa😃

jab i read swayam was proposing kria i was like totally shocked... and my mind was thinking ki rey kya karega kaise milega kria se how wil they bcum kriyaansh
and i was like i'll kill u😡
but kya twist laya...
waah kamo waah...
swayam practising with kria😆
haaayyyeee rey laughing hehheheheheee
nad then sharon aayi so kriyaansh hiding behind a tree😳
waahhh itna close!!!**dead** rey saving kria from falling...
and unka famous LLHH perfect!!! saari baatein keh di!!!
chow patty!!! yiiipppeee sooo beautiful!!!!
haayyyeee kriyaansh paani mein kheling!!!
chhhooo cute!!!!
and then rey ka confession!!!!wo bhi beach par!!!!
yaaayyy sooo romantic!!!!
kria ko aisa confession chaiye tha!!!! kitne cute hain ye dono!!!!
direct dil se confession!!!
mast updaTE!!!!
loved it!!! and hate u dheerr saara dil se!!!!
p.s. dekh le bada comment dia... ab tu bhi accha sa reply diu
Edited by arsha_simran - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hayee kya mast likha hai yr..
Strtng mei to dara e dia tha sachi..
Par bad mei thank god swayum was practicing..
Too good as always.. :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Phle toh happly wala bday nikki di..
Abhilasha.. Superb os yaar...
Loved it...
Phle Steeling glances.. Den duriya kam hoti hui... Den pagalpanti.. Den a cute , simple n straight from d heart confeesion..
Superbbb os yaar...
Me loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Kamini I love u 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing storyline ...!
loved the way that you included both confessions into the storyline ...!
beautifully written ..!
and Happy birthday to Nikki
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing OS...
In the start in was shocked but thn later it was a relief to noe tht Kriya n Swayam were rehearsing...
Loved KR moments!!:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sweet os.. love it.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome os!!!!
Start mein mujhe doubt hua k ye kya kar rahe hai??? 😲
Fir socha rehearse kar rahe honge!!!
N rehearse hi kar rahe the!!! 😆 😃
Kreyam convo was actually v nyc!!!
What n os yaar!!!!
Ek hi os mein swaron n kriyansh dono ka proposal kara diya!!! 👏
I love it sooo much!!!!
Hope ki ese hi b'days aate rahe n tu ese hi likhti rahe!! 😉 😆
Bt it really was a fab os!!! 👏 👏 👏
N i personally lykd d cute shortlived eyelocks!!!

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