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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guyz,vial reporting.
this os stages the story taking place after ashlok patched up and even had a baby.well,she was a girl and u know how NA would have reacted,don't u?
even if u don't ,no worries bcoz i'll tell u what happened in "VIAL E-STYLE"😆
chappals and eggs are most welcome.😃so here it goes.
i wud like to apologize for the spelling mistakes.there are a lot of them.hope u will put up with them😭
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"what does mrs.agnihothri think of herself,uh?no, aastha we have to leave this house and we will,too.i had stayed here all these years just because of baba but if this woman is bent upon destroying our family's happiness i won't tolerate it,u understand?"and he stormed off the room.
Aastha just stood ,with her baby in her arms(Anya).she didn't understand why saasubhai wanted her to hand over her baby to the orphanage.who would do that?and why?after all,be it a boy or girl anya was afterall a part of the blood of the agnihothri familly then why did she put forward such a demand.shlok had fumed on hearing that and she had to do a lot to put him in restraint before everybody .else he would have erupted and would have done something of which they might have to repent about later.she looked at the face of her annu and sighed.yes,shlok is right,they had to leave.she placed anya on the bed and started packing their belongings.
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"do u really want to go,beta?i apologize on behalf of anjali..."
"no,baba u needn't apologize,i can't put up with this woman anymore,that's it.me and aastha had to go through a lot before we were united and we can't go through all that again.i just can't lose my family.and don't worry ,we would keep in touch with u all.but plz allow me baba,to go from here."
NA nodded.ashlok took his and kaku's aashirvaad and bade farewell to everyone.but what they couldn't notice was teh tears gleaming in the eyes of anjali.she just looked on as her youngest and 'laadle'son and DIL along with ehr fav kid took their bags and crossed the door.a lone tear escaped her eyes.
"anjali ,will u plz come to the room?"the voice of NA shook her into reality.she was really afraid as to what would happen now.she had done all this on his orders but now that teh plan had backfired,she would be the one held responsible for the whole drama.she silently took her steps towards her room,or more precisely 'the hell'.
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"how dare u,anjali?how dare u?"and NA again beat anjali with the bamboo cane."bu..bu..but,saheb,u yourself told me.."
"silence,1 more word and u are dead.what if i gad told u to do all that,u should have taken care not to let them leave the house,u idiot"and whew,again flung the cane across the air towards anjali who shook like a leaf.
but no,the cane didn't hit her nor did it land on the ground,then where was it?NA was surprised to feel some force holding his hand backward.
NA turned back to see the face of shlok,and that too full of anger.both anjali and NA were shocked as wella s surprised to see him there along with aastha and anya.
flasback
aaastha had forgotten to tell NA that she was resigning from the company.shlok didn't support her fully but somehow she had convinced him on behalf of anya.and that's why she had took anya and came back to the house and then to NA's room to find all those violence,she was shocked would be an understatement.she would have fainted then and there hadn't shlok assisted her up.actually shlok had come with ehr so taht he could ask his baba to make aastha change her descicion.but the sight he saw there...as NA started hitting anjali,aastah dug her face into shlok's chest unable to bear the sight.shlok hugged her close.all those moments when he had crucified his mom came to his mind-so none of those were her doings,it was his dad's -or should he even call him that?????😭
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as shlok stopped his narration the whole family just stood there at the end of which shlok came forward and hugged his mom and fell at her feet sobbing like a child.
"sry mom,really sry for whatever i had done,really..."
anjali made him get up,her eyes full of tears.
"no,my dear u r not to be blamed.infact u r my saviour."
both had cut moments later following which the whole family greeted her as if she was a new family member.
anjali took anya and cuddled her close.shlok watched this with tear filled eyes and turned his head to see NA who was watching all this like an idiot.he suddenly realised with a shudder taht the person who tried to seperate his aasthu from him was also this wretch.
"ok tht's enough.now the person who will leave the house instead of us is u,mr.NA."and shlok took NA by his hands and pushed him out through the door and BANG!the door was shut on his face!and that was the end of the evils in the story as sojal too had turned a new leaf seeing her aayi'strue face.
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it was night,aashlok had cuudled up together, with their baby in the craddle.
"u know shlok,i fell in lve with u again seeing u so sweet with aai"
"mm,really,but u know i fall in love with u each morning."shlok said smiling and hugged her close as if treasuring something.he had got what any person would wish to have-a wonderful mom,a sweet family,a lovely baby,and above all-his angel,AASTHA.what else did he need in his life?he kissed his wife on her forehead ,feeling really happy about their future.
par,kaash...ki yeh sab kuch thoda pehle hi pata chaltha...he na??

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phew!that was a lot of effort.do pop in ur views and likes😆

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Anunilmini thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Vial does rock. Short and sweet. Loved the OS. Thanks for taking the time to write this and sharing it with us. Hope you'd continue with your writing and next go for a FF. cheers!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Better late thn never right shlok?!😊 nice update..👍🏼 wish NA gt more of what he hd givn!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anukalu

Vial does rock. Short and sweet. Loved the OS. Thanks for taking the time to write this and sharing it with us. Hope you'd continue with your writing and next go for a FF. cheers!

thanx😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice...wish to see this in rhe show ...some day!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aishaa3

Better late thn never right shlok?!😊 nice update..👍🏼 wish NA gt more of what he hd givn!!

NA will get more of that in my next one😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lachii

nice...wish to see this in rhe show ...some day!

ah!gr8 encouraging words for a growing writer😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vial


NA will get more of that in my next one😆

oh gr8😎
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

Nice story thank you

no need of thanks.what are fans for if not for supporting their fav forum?😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vial

no need of thanks.what are fans for if not for supporting their fav forum?😉

true hope you write more stories

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