sandhir ss: will love u till eternity ( plz give it a try plz) part 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys it's a small hatke story of sandhir by me i.e. naina as my exams r now over

PROLOGUE
it is a story about two soul mates who love each other truly and want to live and die together
sanyukta and randhir r just normal teenagers studying at fite but...
but things are not always same and easy going as they seem to be, are they?
it is a supernatural story about supernatural creatures.it is thrilling as well as romantic.
it is about trust u have on ur soul mate when u know they can't be urs

plz tell should I continue and also tell which other couple would u like to witness except sandhir
kaustuki - jiggy
kaustuki-yo yo
parth-vidhushi

part 1- scroll down
part 2-page 2
part 3- page4
part 4-page 4
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kaveriw2008 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sounds interesting

Supernatural horror and romantic

Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Sounds interesting

Supernatural horror and romantic

Update soon

thanks
will update 1 st part tomorrow
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interestg cntinue soon and pls pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 1
wow I'm super excited for today as I have got admission into india's no.1 engineering college fite. I worked very hard for this to come .I worked hard like a maniac for many years.I have just came here to forget my past and start a new and complete my studies after so many years.

as I was walking and taking a look around, I came across many humans.the girls were giving me a frosty nosed glare but the guys were totally lattoo on me which made girls jealous.I wanted to laugh but stopped myself as I saw my room.

it was not as good as I had expected it to be but it was better than my previous life.when I entered there was no one in the room .I thought my roomie must have not arrived yet so I decided to take a walk around the college as classes were going to start from tomorrow.

when I was returning at about 9 pm after a walk, I sensed that someone was behind.but when I looked back there was no one.but I was 100 percent sure that there was someone as I was able to hear her thoughts and I knew who she was

" kaustuki, plz stop following me everywhere.it's of no use.I won't return back to that monstrous world again"

". but sanyukta u are our leader .u just can't step back"

" I can and I have stepped down.plz stop following my trail everywhere.u r my best frnd and no one understands me better than u and I know u know why I don't want to return back .I have very hardly practiced myself to resist myself from killing those innocent people and I don't want to become a ripper again"

" but sanyukta u r our leader and you deserve it because logically u r the first VAMPIRE and u have created us and only u can read everyone's thoughts .u are my creator and this life of mine is just because of u and I really love this eternal life .plz return back...wait why r u coming near me...plz plz don't compell me..."

what else would have I done .I had to compell her to leave as I just want to live peacefully alone without any supernatural creatures around and I walked back to my room to live a normal life
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so that's it for now .plz tell me how is it and yes criticisms are welcomed


purnima209 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting nxt part be upload na when u r free
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Posted: 11 years ago
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good start yaar...
very very intresting concept...
do continue soon...
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PART 2
I came back inside my room only to find it empty.I had a class tomorrow so I decided to sleep .but still my thoughts did not allow me to sleep .I was thinking about my vampire family which I created.how they would be managing without me.what will happen if they go wild.I again thought of going back but backed off becoz I know I am much more worse than them.I am a ripper and had killed and destroyed many lives.

next day

I don't know when I slept last night and I don't want to think about it either because right now I am getting late for my classes .I am running in the corridor in a humanly speed .I don't want to use my vampire speed unnecessarily and specially when there r so many people in the corridor.

when I reached the classroom I saw the professor was teaching and everyone was sitting on their seats.he was staring at me suspiciously and when I read his thoughts I came to know I was not panting for breath which a normal human would do.I started taking in air and giving it out by my mouth and was also thinking how come he noticed me so minutely.he gave me a annoyed look and asked me to settle down fast.

I started searching and meanwhile also reading their thoughts.there were only two girls there and were getting hell jealous seeing the boys as they were thinking how beautiful I was and wanted me to sit with them.I was laughing at their thoughts in my mind

but suddenly I remembered I need to breath like normal humans .I slowly started taking in air by my nose.omg !! so sweet smelling humans .I want their blood now .I can' t wait .but mentally chided myself that I need to resist myself.I can't let it overpower me like that.I cannot risk their lives.

I again stared at the professor .he was getting hell angry and irritated with me by know.I started searching for a seat and were reading their thoughts when I came across a seat from where I could get no thoughts and no smell.I was taken aback and thought that my powers were not working but it is impossible so I confirmed my doubt by reading others thoughts .I could still read their thoughts but not his.

without giving a second thought I went and sat beside him.he looked at me and shifted.the professor started teaching.I was still thinking about him when my train of thoughts were disturbed by someone

" hi I am randhir singh shekhawat.and you r????..."

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so that's it .how was it??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey its a very interesting concept
I have a feeling that even randhir is a vampire
Cont soon and pls pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start...pretty different...do continue soon!

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