New SS And then he came...teaser, pg 39, 2/12 - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
nice teaser
lagtha hai maan left geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
poor geet
feeling sad for her
waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Maan left Geet. He must be very angry.

Wat will Happen next??? Maan will come think so.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
nice teaser waiting for update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
painful...so finally maan left her...hope that he didn't ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so he left
but i thought she leaves him
ahhh seems she is used to living with them both
what with them both gone she misses them
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice teaser ...

Maan left with manu leaving geet alone 😲 Why did he married her then agar kuch dino mein chodna hi tha 😡
Edited by _SnowFlakes_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Next part

This morning was also like the same one. Geet got up with a really heavy head. She looked around to see the room empty. She freshen up and looked around the house to see where Maan and Manu were but she dint find them. This made her really restless. Where could they have gone? She wondered as she looked outside the house including the shed where she had found them in the beginning. She walked inside as her mind was filled with worry and fear. She entered the room and looked inside the cupboard. Manu's bottles and diapers were also missing. Fear grew in her as she thought they had left. But she pacified herself thinking they wouldn't leave. Maan was her husband now and there is no way he was leaving her. She looked at the time and hurried with her morning activities as she had work to do. She told herself that Maan and Manu would be here by the time she came back in the evening.

Geet came into the house hoping that he was back. The house, without him suddenly looked and felt gloomy. She hated that feeling. Many a times today she felt like throttling herself for uttering those words to him. She chided herself on how stupid she could be. She kept on telling herself that any person would think like him if they had seen their child crying and that too on the floor. How much did he know her anyway? She questioned herself.

With wary steps she walked into the house and locked the door behind her. It was her usual time in the evening and she removed her foot wear before making her way into the bedroom as she dint see anyone outside. Her heart hoped to hear a giggle or crying of Manu or Maan's ruff humming but nothing was there.

Geet entered their room first and looked everywhere. Maan was nowhere to be seen. She couldn't hear Manu too. Her heart clenched with worry as she made her way into the other bedroom praying for them to be there. But to her disappointment no one was there. With a heavy heart she came out and slumped down on the sofa. Tears fell down her eyes as her sobbed into her hands. The empty house seemed to eat into her. She felt the walls coming closer and suddenly the huge ancestral house seemed very small and suffocating.

Where should she go and search for them. What would have happened to them out there? She thought. Suddenly remembering the way she had first seen Maan. She remembered how hurt he was and this got her to panic. What if he was in trouble? Her body started shaking in fear as she realised the amount of danger he and Manu could be in now. She quickly got up and left the house, locking it. She took her rodeo (her 2-wheeler) and went outside to look for them praying that she could find them.

The streets were getting dark as it was past 7 pm now. But she dint mind all this. Her only thoughts were to find them. He was her husband and irrespective of what he did to her she would not let him suffer. Moreover he had Manu too with him. This thought made her increase the accelerator and the vehicle move on as Geet steered it to the places she thought she could find Maan.

It was really 9:30pm when a very tired and worn-out Geet entered the house. The first hour of hope and determination in her mind of finding them had started deteriorating as time passed. By the time she had taken the second round of the village, fear had made its way again into her telling her that they have left. She couldn't take this. He cannot leave me. She cried stubbornly to herself.

Her mind explained to her that the house was clean as and how it had been when she had left. There was no way any one would have entered it and taken Maan and Manu forcibly. So that only means that he had left willingly. No.. her heart clenched with the thought of him leaving her. He cannot leave her like this. She would die if he left. Just then the door knocked. Relief flooded her heart as she ran towards the door.

He was back.. was the only thought she had when she opened the door only to be disappointed. There on the other side stood Maharaj with a really worried face.

Kya bath hai? Geet asked unable to hide her disappointment.

Wo.. beta.. I just came here to check on you. He said getting embarrassed by her actions. Were you sleeping? He asked as he realised the time

Ji. Abhi jane wali thi. She told him as she moved away from the door to let the middle aged man enter.

Geet beta, you need to be careful. He said as he sat down. His whole body was rigid when he said that

Kya hua hai? Is there some problem? Geet asked getting panicked again. Maan and Manu was outside. They would get hurt. She worried

Han beta. You remember the big haweli near the edge of the forest? He asked her.

Han. Wo madhuban na? She said with a confused face

Yes beta it seems someone has broken into it. But luckily the alarms rang out and the police got there.

So beta I want you to lock the house and be very careful. The Maharaj said with a fatherly concern.

Ji I'll be careful don't worry. She said with a smile.

The Maharaj got up and left the house as it was getting late. Geet closed the door with a sigh. This news that the Maharaj had given her completely disappeared from her brain. The only thing she was thinking off right now was where Maan and Manu was.

She walked towards their room and washed her face. She was in no mood to cook. She dint want to eat anything. She cried into her pillow as she hugged the one Maan used to sleep in. She just couldn't find the peace she was so sought after. She quickly go up and looked into the dirty clothes basket. There she found Maan's used shirt. Without thinking anything she stripped her clothes and wore it. His manly scent covered her senses as she clutched it closer to her bare body. She took one of Manu's toys and cuddled to it as she tried to sleep.

He has left her. The thought hurt her immensely but it was the truth. She remembered him speak to someone on the phone. So he really did leave her. It was mainly cos of her. She really felt like killing herself for talking so heartlessly towards him. She was in need of him not the other way. He could have gone to anyone. But Babaji had made him come here. Maan was supposed to be the one for her. A light in her dark and lonesome home. But what did she do? She drove away him. She made him leave her with her venomous words. Thunder broke the clear sky making her shudder in fear. She clutched to the pillow more closely as she cried her grief

Geet tried to close her eyes to get some sleep. Her body was begging for the same but her mind and heart was busy cursing her. Just then the calling bell rang. She got up with tear stained eyes and moved towards the door. She opened it hoping it was some murderer who has come to kill her. Actually she prayed that it was one as she dint want to live anymore in this hollow house. She dint care of what he did later on. The only thing she wanted was him to kill her as she was really a coward to do it to herself.

With tears pricking her eyes she looked up to see who it was and was shocked, surprised and suddenly very guilty as she looked at the person before her.

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I know you hate me for doing this. But common guys I know you know who that person is. So smile.

Next part on Friday.

Precap will be up on Wednesday that is tomorrow or Thursday.

Do check out my other Maaneet stories.

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My life's mistakes

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Posted: 11 years ago
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poor geet still she is feeling guilty for hurting maan and she searched whole village i think maan must have returned back
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part...why is maan so heartless...poor geet

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