New SS And then he came...teaser, pg 39, 2/12

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

part 4
nice part...
poor Geet...
seriously Maan didnt even hear to her...
stupid idiot...
cont soon dear...

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Awesome

Geet in pain. Her body is aching just coz of Maan.
Maan didn't acknowledge in the morning. Geet dejected.

Maan knowing abt Geet pain. He is healing it. Irony is that the one healing is the only one that has giving the pain.

Y is Manan restless n crying. Geet sambhal hi nahi pa rahi. Maan wapis se accusing her. Atlast Geet broke her silence. Her outburst was needed.

Wat will be Maan reaction????
Continue soon.

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Good on ya geet
Just hope Maan doesnt retaliate
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin my way

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

FINALLY GEET ANSWERED MAAN BACK

AND SHE IS RIGHT

WHAT HAS HE GIVEN HER EXCEPT PAIN AND DISTRUST

SHE IS THE ONE WHO GAVE HIM HER EVERYTHING - FROM HER VIGINITY TO FOOD, TO A PLACE TO STAY, CLOTHES TO WEAR AND SHELTER FOR THE BABY

AND ALL THIS FOR A LITTLE LOVE AND CARE WHICH HE SEEMS INCAPABLE OF PROVIDING

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gbhat

@gbhat

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

so finally she gave him back. superb update. what will be the reaction now. waiting for the another update soon.

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Arthi

@ar_art

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: -Mithuna-
Nice part
Maan too confusing...he gave her a back massage...he cooks too...sometimes too rude
Finally geet spoke

Maan's character is gonna be like this.

actually you'll all get more confused by him from now on😆

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Arthi

@ar_art

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: gbhat
so finally she gave him back. superb update. what will be the reaction now. waiting for the another update soon.

next one wil be up on wed yaar

for now teaser is on...😃

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Arthi

@ar_art

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Teaser

Geet came into the house hoping that he was back. The house, without him suddenly looked and felt gloomy. She hated that feeling. Many a times today she felt like throttling herself for uttering those words to him. She chided herself on how stupid she could be. She kept on telling herself that any person would think like him if they had seen their child crying and on the floor. How much did he know her anyway? She questioned herself.

With wary steps she walked into the house and locked the door behind her. It was her usual time in the evening and she removed her foot wear before making her way into the bedroom as she dint see anyone outside. Her heart hoped to hear a giggle or crying of Manu or Maan's ruff humming but nothing was there.

Geet entered their room first and looked everywhere. Maan was nowhere to be seen. She couldn't hear Adhi too. Her heart clenched with worry as she made her way into the other bedroom praying for them to be there. But to her disappointment no one was there. With a heavy heart she came out and slumped down on the sofa. Tears fell down her eyes as her sobbed into her hands. The empty house seemed to eat into her. She felt the walls coming closer and suddenly the huge ancestral house seemed very small and suffocating.

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Hope you like the teaser. Update will be on on Monday.

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Edited by ar_art - 11 years ago