Initially I thought of this to be like.. Best friend ka break-up and the realisation kinda thing.. but yeh toh unexpected tha..
I dont know how to describe this Swayam.. firstly he shouldnt have told her about she being the reason behind His break-up.. He needs to understand her.. and not make things worse for her ...
I know usse ab tak nahi pata.. that Sharon loves him.. but best friends toh hai na.. So usse ke liye nahi bata ta.. It is so hurtful to know that you are the reason for someones pain..
Anyways.. thats part of the story..
I so freaking hate this Radhika.. she is a 🤬 She really is..
I loved the way you depicted Sharons painful state.. So marvelously..
But how blind can this person be.. he isnt realizing that Sharon is hurt.. she is pale and dull because of HIM.. his news wasnt that amazing for her..
Hopefully we get good stuffs.. in future..
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