Virman OS: ~Pyaar Ka Ehsas~

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Heya Guys again i m Here.. With an OS on Virman.. I wanted to tell u guys I dont believe in Love N Commitments so if i said something wrong than plz forgive me.. Its reaaly very long so read it in ur free time.. SO HERE I PRESENT VIRMAN OS.. ~Pyaar Ka Ehsas~

What is love?? Some says its just a word.. some says its a relationship between two people.. But love is far away from these theories.. Coz love is only a feeling which only a true heart can understand.. Love recognizes no barriers.. Love jumps hurdles.. Leaps fences.. Penetrates walls to arrive to its destination.. Love finds its way even in the crowd.. No mattar how a situation is.. how much distance is.. But if love is true than it will surely leave its mark in the connected hearts...

Nothing is more beautifill than when the love turns in marriage.. the relationship between a husband n wife is very unique.. A person is incomplete without his/her soulmate.. The relation of hubby n wife is so special that even if they are strangers love surely blooms from somewhere as the time passes by.. It's the beauty of this relationship.. Love before marriage seems heaven.. But love after marriage seems what..??

What happens when two persons unknown to eachother binds themselves in the relation of marriage...

CHANDIGARH...

Everyone was present there In the hall.. Virat was standing keeping his head down..

Dadaji: Bas virat buhat hogaya.. tum jo karna chahte the vo tum kar chuke but now its enough.. Tumhen kaha tha humne k Maya tumhare liye thk nahi hai... Noe see she used u.. she left u in-between just for her carrier.. She married to someone else coz she got more fame from him.. U ruined ur life.. par ab tou samjh jao...

Virat stood there motionless n expressionless...

Virat: (standing still) Me ap ki baat maane k liye tayyar hun.. M ready to get married to MAANVI...

MUMBAI..

A girl was standing looking out of the window.. Her father was there lied down on the bed..

Sanjay: Maanvi beta Virat ne shadi k liye haan kar di hai.. Vo log kal roka karne aa rahe hain..

Maanvi: (looking at his ill father) Thik hai baba.. me ap k liye yeh shadi karne k liye tayyar hun.. Pr mjhse yeh umeed mat rakhiyega k me Virat ko vo pyaar ya vo haq de paun jo ek pati apni patni se chahta hai.. q k me use vo kabhi nahi de paungi..

Her father closed her eyes in relief that after that deadly disease will take him away with it.. Someone will b there for her daughter.. Who will become her shelter..

It was just a simple court marriage... n after signing the papers.. Virat n Maanvi became legally wedded couple.. N yes it was true they were JUST LEGALLY MARRIED..

Time passed by but maanvi was same.. she fullfilled all the duties of being a daughter- in-law of the family.. but still she was not able to fullfill her only duty as a wife.. she did all work of virat.. like ironing his cloths.. keeping his things on right place.. the room which seemes a messy room after her arrival became a clear cut room... Virat also started to become resposible.. He started going office just on one saying of Maanvi.. they became best friends in the mean time.. n started to shared everything with eachother.. But as time passed virat started adoring maanvi.. he started to feel different for her... The essence of marriage spreaded its fragnance on Virat.. Love started to bloom in his heart.. But he never told this to Maanvi coz he never wanted her to feel uncomfortable...

It was like a usuall day.. Virat came from office n like always saw maanvi sleeping on the dinner table.. waitng for him.. Like thousand of times he told her not to wait as he comes late.. she should eat n should sleep on time.. but she always say that she likes to do such things for her friends... These small things made a big place in his heart for her.. After dinner they both came in the room...

Virat: Maanvi me zara walk k liye jaa raha hun.. tum so jana may b mujhe deir hojaye..

Maanvi: (smiled) Me kabhi soyi hun?? Nahi na?? Tou aj kese?? Me wait karungi.. u take ur time..

Virat smiled.. took his cell n went out of the room.. Maanvi went to change her dress.. she was passing by the dressing table she saw a paper hanging under the jewellery box.. she took the paper opened it n started to read..

Dear Maanvi !!!!

I knw u would b feeling weired that me abhi tumhare samne tha kuch nahi kaha aur abhi yeh letter likh raha hun.. Pr jo aj me kehne ja raha hun vo me tumhare samne kabhi nahi keh paunga.. mjhe nahi pata is k baad humari dosti wesi hi rahegi k nahi.. pr ab me yeh baat apne dil mein nahi rakh sakta. I want to say k... I LOVE YOU MAANVI.. (Her eyes popped out).. I knw abhi tumhari yeh chhoti chhoti aankhen itni badi badi hogayi hongi..(she smiled but still shocked) Me tumse buhat pyaar karta hun.. Mene tumse pyaar kiya hai.. pr badle mein pyar kabhi nahi maangunga,, q k me badle mein pyar maang kr apne pyar ko selfish nahi banne de sakta.. ise padhne k baad jo tumhara faisla hoga mjhe manzur hoga.. me na tumse koi sawal karunga.. na koi javab maangunga.. tum mere saath ho mere liye yahi buhat hai.. is ehsas k saath me apni puri zindagi jee lunga.. aur koi khuwaish nahi.. tumne jo meri family aur mere liye kiya hai me use kabhi nahi bhul sakta.. mere aur meri family k beech jo doori Maya laayi thi tumne use khatam kar diya.. tum nahi jaanti shadi se le kar aaj tak,.. hr din.. hr pal mere dil mein tumhare liye respect sirf badhi hai.. me wapas aa kr tumse kuch nahi puchunga.. bas yeh mere pyaar ka ehsas hai jise jaanne ka tumhara pura haq hai.. I love u Maanvi meri aakhri saans tak bina kisi chah k.. bina kuch maange.. me us din ka wait karunga jis din MERA yeh pyaar HUMARA pyaar ban jayega..

Virat !!!

From that day after that letter neither maanvi nor virat discussed anything on their topic.. but after that incident thinking of maanvi for virat changed a little bit... she started to feel that virat never crossed his limit.. even though she was his wife.. he had every right on her.. but he never even touched her.. n gave her full space.. he never asked anything from her...

After few days whole family went to a wedding .. Co-incidently Maya was also present there along with her so called hubby.. Maya had every news og Virman.. she knew that they were just friends they were not husband n wife in all means..

Virat n Maya came face to face..

Maya: Hey virat.. mene suna hai k tumne b shadi kar li.. Tumhare dad k friend ki beti haina.. tabhi me sochun whole world knew that u were in love with me n I married someone else.. fir esi konsi ladki hai jis ne tumse shadi kar li.. u knw ab tou tumhen maan lena chaiye k tumhare paas sirf fame hai jo tumhara plus point hai.. aur baaki tum mein kuch nahi k koi ladki tumhare saath apni puri life spend karey.. N I heared this too that ur wife is some behen g types..

Now it was enough for virat.. he can bear his insult but if someone raise their voice on her wife it will become unbearable for him.. he was about to speak when someone raised her voice..

Maanvi: Excuse me..

All looked towards maanvi...

Maanvi: (confidently) Really ap ko itni chah hai mjhse milne ki?? BTW Hi M Maanvi.. Sorry Sorry (emphasizing each word) Mrs. Maanvi Virat Singh Vadhera..

Virat beemed in joy after listening his name along with her's..

Maanvi: Pehli baat mene yeh haq kisi ko nahi diya k vo mere pati se is tarha baat karey.. So aage se dyaan rakhna..

Maya felt like she was being slapped..

Maya: (angrily) Tumm...

Maanvi: (roared)(pointed her finger towards her) M NOT COMPLETED YET...

Maya felt that she became tongue tied..

Maanvi: Aur tum kya bol rai thi mere pati ko shadi k baare mein?? Tum kya jaanti ho shadi k baare mein?? Shadi vo pavitar bandhan hai jo tum jesi selfish person kabhi nahi samjh sakti..shadi vo ehsas hai jo do dilon ko jodta hai.. Shadi ka ehsas yeh hai (showing her mangalsutr) Jo tumhare galey (neck) mein nahi hai.. Shadi ka ehsas hai yeh (pointing her finger towards her head filled with vermillion) Jo tumhari maang mein nahi hai.. Shadi ka ehsas hai yeh (showing her hand which was filled with red bangles) Jo tumhare haathon mein nahi hai.. Aur tum mjhe behen g keh rahi ho.. tum khud kya ho?? Kon yahan tumhen dekh kar keh sakta hai k tum ek shadi shuda aurat ho?? Shadi k baare mein mere pati ko lecture dene se pehle yeh tou dekho k tumhara pati hafte mein kitne din tour pr hota hai aur kitne din tumhare paas??

She was about to go.. but turned again..

Maanvi: Aur haan.. ab agar aj k baad mere pati se unchi awaaz mein baat b ki.. tou me bardaasht nahi karungi.. Mark my words in ur brain u pin head..

Maya cried in anger.. she left from there.. After all the drama maanvi came infront of virat n said..

Maanvi: Kya tum mjhse aj.. abhi.. yahan.. isi waqt... fir se shadi karoge..??

All became shocked.. virat was not able to react..

Virat: Maanvi...

Maanvi took out her mangalsutr n hang it infront of him..

Maanvi: Kya mjhe fir se yeh pehnaoge..

Virat felt heavenly.. he was speechless.. after lot of struggle he said..

Virat: (smilled) Kya kabhi mana kar sakta hun..??

She smilled...

All came towards the Mandap.. seemed like they came there for their own wedding.. Maanvi covered her head with dupatta.. Pandit started chanting Mantars.. They started to take seven Vows around the sacred fire..

Wada raha.. pyaar se pyaar ka.. ab hum na honge juda..

Yeh... meri dhadkane sun raha hai khuda...

The both holded eachother's hand..

Chahe tumhen.. kis qadar mera dil...

Tum ko nahi hai pata... yeh... meri dhadkane sun raha hai khuda..

While taking Vows they looked at eachother...

Dono jahan ko bhula hun me...

Esi lagi hai tujhse lagan.. Chahe kaho ise deewangi..

Chahe kaho ise deewanapan..

Both smiled..

Dil ne kaha.. dil ne suna...

Mene tumhen dilbar chhuna...

After the seven rounds.. they both stood with eachother..

Ab dooriyan.. na rahi darmiyan.. Kya rang laayi wafa..

Yeh.. meri dhadkane sun raha hai khuda...

They both sat down.. Vanshika gave mangalsutr to virat...

Dekha tumhen tou esa laga. Mujh ko mila manzil ka pata...

He came forwards tied it around her neck..

Chalna hai humko ab saath mein..

Tjhse juda mera raasta..

He took pinch of vermillion n filled her maang with it.. she closed her eyes.. tears started to roll down..

Mene tou li.. hai yeh kasam.. Paun tumhen janam-o-janam..

Sajde kiye mene sham-o-seher,, maanga hai tumko sada.

Yeh.. meri dhadkane sun raha hai khuda...

Pandit: Vivah sanmpant hua... Aj se ap dono Pati Patni hue..

Vada raha... pyaar se... pyaar ka...

Ab hum na honge... Juda...

Vaada raha... vaada raha..

They both took blessings from all the elders..

Maanvi: me aj ap sub k samne virat se kuch kehna chahti hun..

Virat looked at her confused..

Maanvi: Tum soch rahe hoge k jisne tumhen ek friend se zyaada kabhi maana hi nahi.. usne aj khud tumse shadi k liye kaha.. tumhen lag raha hoga k mene yeh maya ki waja se kiya.. pr nahi.. yeh sach nahi hai.. sach tou yeh hai Virat k.. I LOVE YOU... Q.. kab.. kahan.. kese.. kis liye me nahi jaanti.. Baba sach kehte the shadi vo khubsurat ehsas hai jo do ajabiyon ko ek atoot bandhan mein baandh deta hai.. Meri bidai pr unho ne mjhse kaha tha k ek na ek din mjhe tumse pyaar ho hi jayega.. aur unho ne bilkul sach kaha tha.. Tumne mere liye vo kiya jo shayad koi kisi k liye nahi karta.. hr right hone k baad b tum aj tak mere kareeb nahi aaye.. mjhe touch tak nahi kiya.. mjhe kabhi ek pal k liye b uncomfortable b feel nahi hone diya.. Us din vo letter.. us letter k hr word ne mere dil ko touch kiya tha virat.. I felt heaven that day.. pr us ehsas ko samne laane mein buhat waqt lag gaya.. I LOVE U VIRAT.. I REALLY REALLY LOVE YOU SO MUCH.. Aj me kahungi mere Baba ne tumse meri shadi karwa kr mjhe meri zindagi ka sabse khubsurat tohfa diya hai.. Us waqt me tumhare ghr ek bahu ban kar aayi thi.. Pr aj tumhari patni ban kar aaungi.. Mera saath doge..??

Viat looked at her with teary eyes..

Virat: HUMESHA..

They both hugged eachother as tight as they can.. It was a hug of assurance that they will cheerish their life together.. N will welcome evrey phase of their life holding eachother's hand.. They became one soul...

A great mariage is not when the "perfest couple" comes together.. its when an "imperfect couple" learns to enjoy their differencess.. A successful marriage requires falling in love many times , always with the same person...

B HAPPY

LOVE SANJANA..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update...
Loved it..
Aww the letter was really sweet...
Great how Manvi answerd Maya back..It was 1 hard slap on Maya face...
Awww the married twice..
Finally Manvi confessed..
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