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Posted: 11 years ago
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When the show had started, I had made a VM on Shlok. After that I wanted to make couple of VMs on Anjali and other Agnihotri family, but either did not have time or my software was not working properly. I will do them one of these days.

I was finding it hard to find a song on Shlok and Astha as a couple. Now I have found a song which applies to both. The first half was easy to make, but the second half was the problem as that would be more appropriate for Shlok once he realizes and accepts his feelings for Astha.
Regardless, this is made from Shlok's perspective. The song is more of a longing by somebody who is unable to express his feelings. It starts on a pessimistic note, but I have tried to end it on the optimistic note.
The song is "Baarish" (Rain) from the movie "Yaariyan" which roughly translates into "Relationships".
I have titled this VM as "Longing" based on Mathhew Arnold's poem.
Longing by Matthew Arnold
Come to me in my dreams, and then
By day I shall be well again!
For so the night will more than pay
The hopeless longing of the day.

Come, as thou cam'st a thousand times,
A messenger from radiant climes,
And smile on thy new world, and be
As kind to others as to me!

Or, as thou never cam'st in sooth,
Come now, and let me dream it truth,
And part my hair, and kiss my brow,
And say, My love why sufferest thou?

Come to me in my dreams, and then
By day I shall be well again!
For so the night will more than pay
The hopeless longing of the day.
Here is the VM "Longing"
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=c-FinyyA3As[/YOUTUBE]
English Translation of Baarish Song (Thanks to Whoever Translated It)
Baarish LyricsMovie: Yaariyan
Music and Lyrics: Mithoon
Singer: Mohammed Irfan, with Gajendra Verma

Yaariyan ve... Yaariyan
Yaariyan ve... yaariyan ve..
Yaariyaan... yaa..

Relationships,
these relationships...

Dil mera hai nasamajh kitna
Besabar ye bewakoof bada
Chaahta hai kitnaa tujhe
Khud magar nahi jaan sakaa

My heart is so mindless,
the imaptient (heart) is an idiot,
how much it loves you,
it didn't understand itself.

Is dard-e-dil ki sifarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ki mil jaaye ise wo baarish
Jo bhigaa de poori tarah


Now someone make a case for
this pain of heart..
so that it gets that rain (of love)
that drenches it completely..

Kya huaa asar tere saath reh kar na jaane
Ki hosh mujhe naa rahaa
Lafz mere the zubaan pe aa ke ruke
Par ho na sake wo bayaan
Dhadkan tera hi naam jo le
Aankhein bhi paighaam ye dein
Teri nazar ka hi ye asar hai
Mujh pe jo huaa

what such effect was there of being with you,
I don't know,
that there was no sense left in me..
my words stuck on my tongue,
but couldn't get spoken..
In my heartbeat there is your name alone,
and the eyes give this message too.
It's all effect of your sight
that is there on me..

Is dard-e-dil ki sifaarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ki mil jaaye ise wo baarish
Jo bhigaa de poori tarah

Tu jo mila
To zindagi hai badli
Main poora naya ho gaya
Hai be-asar duniya ki baatein badi
Ab teri sunoon main sadaa
Milne ko tujhse, bahaane karoon
Tu muskuraaye, vajah main banoon
Roz bitaana saath mein tere, saara din mera


As I found you,
my life has changed,
I have become all new,
all talks of world are ineffective..
Now I listen to you always,
I find excuses to meet you..
When you smile, I wish to be the reason,
(and wish) to spend all my day with you, everyday..

Is dard-e-dil ki sifaarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ki mil jaaye ise wo baarish
Jo bhiga de poori tarah
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Angie you finally did your VM. 👏 Liked your choice of song and the scene were matched perfectly. I also liked that you tried to give it a positive end by showing Astha's support. Also liked your poem.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: misti73

Angie you finally did your VM. 👏 Liked your choice of song and the scene were matched perfectly. I also liked that you tried to give it a positive end by showing Astha's support. Also liked your poem.

Misti, thanks for the appreciation.
Somehow Astha and Shlok as a couple did not inspire me though Shlok and Anjali did either as individuals or in one song together. They have a lot of complex scenes together that I would like to use one day.
The first scene I used (Jan 2 episode) in this VM was the first time I felt like making a song on Astha and Shlok. But I was thinking more from Astha's betrayal point of view. But then when I found this song, it fit Shlok so I ended up making another one from his perspective. I tried to show that even though Shlok is still in darkness, there is now Astha who is there to support him to come out of it. The second half was the problem but then Holi scenes kind of worked for that stanza.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angie12

Misti, thanks for the appreciation.
Somehow Astha and Shlok as a couple did not inspire me though Shlok and Anjali did either as individuals or in one song together. They have a lot of complex scenes together that I would like to use one day. What about Shloke and Kalindi?😉
The first scene I used (Jan 2 episode) in this VM was the first time I felt like making a song on Astha and Shlok. That scene is one of my fav ones in this show... But I was thinking more from Astha's betrayal point of view. And I was thinking from Shloke spoiling his own life POV. But then when I found this song, it fit Shlok so I ended up making another one from his perspective. Good that you did... I tried to show that even though Shlok is still in darkness, there is now Astha who is there to support him to come out of it. The second half was the problem but then Holi scenes kind of worked for that stanza. Yeh his journey to out of darkness has started...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful VM Angie and the name 'Longing'. It fits Astha, Shlokie perfectly. oh..and you translated the lyrics too..😊
Edited by jia.astk - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jia.astk

Wonderful VM Angie and the name 'Longing'. It fits Astha, Shlokie perfectly. oh..and you translated the lyrics too..😊

Jia, thanks. Here Longing is more from Shlok who wants Astha to be with him, but his pride does not let him admit his need for her.
I did not translate the lyrics😉. I found the translation on google as I was too lazy to do any translation. Sorry and Thanks to the person whose work I plagiarized.😳😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its a very nice vm...loved it...
at first your song selection was too good...the scenes are perfectly matched with the song...
keep it up...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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could you please post the URL of the video as i have to use proxies to watch videos😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

Its a very nice vm...loved it...

at first your song selection was too good...the scenes are perfectly matched with the song...
keep it up...😊

Mon_sayan, thanks for liking it.

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