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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

woww dear that was a real bliss to read...

you write so damnn well...

loved it soo very much...

beautiful writing... (:

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

fabulous write-up👏

rey's feelings wer described beautifully👏👏

loveddd ittt😊

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arsha_simran

@arsha_simran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

this is something really beautiful and very nice!!

all those feelings...

his feelings regarded to his dil his dosti and his dance!!!

it is very very nice!!!

loved it!!!!

his aggression his anger his pain...very well written!!!

and now the game is on!!! Aisa wala feeling aata wen I read the last few lines which said now he'll decide the team the prize everything!!!

and the last line frm ashes just like a phoenix loved it!!!

p.s. Sorry for being late...

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Palakh Aggarwal

@RudrakshPreesha

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Aahmazing os 😉

Edited by ..KR.. - 12 years ago

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Ankita

@anki_22

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

aughhh..!! I hate myself sooo much for giving an ONE-LINE comment on this one..!! well, needless to say that I was completely new in the forum that time, and I DID NOT get any PM for this one..!1 Just happened to stumble on it and FELL IN LOVE with the writter..!!😆😆😆
So, well, even though am wayy too late, am gonna write something...

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or may be not...😛 I mean, what can I say exactly..?? that this is awesome?? amazing..?? fabulous..?? I mean, aren't they way too cliche for this masterpiece..?? How can anyone write something soo brilliant based on just thirty seconds of a basket-ball dribbling..??? how ??

Kash, you are NO DOUBT the BEST writter in IF and am proud to be considered as a firend.. 😆😆😆 yeh meri tagline ban chuki hain ab😛..
Am just gonna post a few lines which made me go all "hayeee☺️" mode..!!😆😆

She had thrown him in the middle of all three and he was set ablaze.

^-- hooked from it, from the very start..!😊

Dosti. Swayam. The two were interchangeable for him. He couldn't tell the difference between the two even if he tried. He was his best friend, his confidant, his anchor. And he had been hers all along.

^--well, the whole Swayam part..!! abhi am not gonna copy all of it, so..!! it was my MOST FAVOURITE part of the OS..Swayam k liye I always have a soft corner and you just pnned it down so, umm, ingeniously..!!!

He knew how to rise from the ashes, stronger, better, and like a phoenix anew.
^--This line was like a ultra-rock music playing in the BG and I was grinning like an evel character of a story, with all "Yeah baby, the game is ON!"🤣 I know I know, it's creepy, but what can I do..?? I write what I honestly feel na..!!😃

Edited by anki_22 - 12 years ago

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