Rey Rising - OS inspired by BB Court precap and Kriya's return - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Woww yaar..
Its actually an superb os..
I really really loved it..
Keep writting..
Would love to read ur write ups more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
WOW that was ... I don't know what to say
I loved how you portrayed Rey's feelings
Please pm me when you write something new
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful Oneshot👏👏
u should write more :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
it was sheer awesomeness.

the way you have penned it.. is amazing in itslef.

and the emotions were lined up so beautifully..

i loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

I feel like screaming "that's it!" That's it" and vent out the anxiety!😳

Girl! Take a bow!👏

I mean you depicted his state bang on!👍🏼 I am from those who always was with Rey and his dilemma. He always had me there. But today as a reader, I came to know that even I didn't see it in complete picture. It is much more that a dilemma and pain. Thanks for this OS!👏

You pitched his conundrum so aptly. Dil Dosti Dance! Kria's comeback actually shattered it all for him. His whole rebuilt structure is being scattered like cards with the wind which brought her back.

You nailed it! You defined it more than perfectly. You left no stone unturned. 👏

Loads of applause to you!👏

Loads of love!🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
HAINA ADITI ?
God this is.sheer brilliance and.Iam NOT going to get tired by saying this again and again
You make me feel so blind ...
I lost the count how much times Ihave read this masterpiece since yesterday
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
I agree Jerry! 😃
I can go on praising this work. Honestly, I never saw someone depicting the emotions in better way. Each sentence seemed to come out of Rey's heart itself! I am in love with this work!
Kudos to writer 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Rey ki peeda ko tumne kya khoob darshaya hai...
Rey ki peeda ko tumne kya khoon darshaya hai...

Iss kahani se lagta hai tumne uske dard ko aapne dil se aapnaya hai...



Hats off...
Edited by widowmaker - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
A M A Z I N G!
I'm honestly speechless...

Truly spellbound!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey! This is a mind blowing piece of writing! Every emotion comes out so clearly. Usually descriptive writing gets so dragged and boring but this had me hooked till the last word.
Awesome!

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