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golpokobita

@golpokobita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

I loved how the game was changing in khushi's favour gradually.. Arnav started the fight and Khsuhi very smartly took control and started overpowering arnav ...

she was pulling it quite well but then one simple mistake.. she claimed sole ownership over her lips and how can Arnav Singh Raizada not response aptly to that!

Sweet one, loved it.

Edited by golpokobita - 11 years ago

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kanthi_chks

@kanthi_chks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

That was definetly sweet...
And cute...
And funny...
I loved it!!!
I love these dialogue only OSs of yours!!

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Anupama

@Anupama.

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

And all our frustrations if the day vanishes with your Arnav Khushi only dialogues. Very funny shot . Inspite of getting an idea where this was going I can read this ten times over, its so entertaining.

All of Khushi s crankiness would have now evaporated because this way of telling how she is affecting Arnav was better than any verbal compliment. 😃

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UV_Arshi

@UV_Arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

I think it's a good idea that you write when you're sleepy...considering u come with stuff like this 😉 it was super cute and adorable!! Arnav and Khushi completely true to their character...lovable and naughty!😆

Love all your one shots and drabbles! 😃

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stg1

@stg1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

😳 so sweet, loved it ❤️

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Too.much fun...love it when they argue, it's too romantic...well you writing is fab!

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Achu

@arshy4ever

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

☺️... That was really awesome...

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

What a beautiful and yummy way to end the tom and jerry fight. Atta boy, Arnav Singh Raizada... I always knew you had it in you... Superb OS. Its perfect. Thank you...😉

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Sorry for such a late comment. I had wanted to give you a looong one as I usually do, but I never seem to have much time for that these days... So I will just tell you that it was ADOOORABLEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sorry, the longer comments will be can in summer... =/