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..Jyoti..

@..Jyoti..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Beautifully written

So painful n heartbreaking

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180506

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: rashika
Wow!
Powerful, painful and heartbreaking.
Beautifully written.
You have really brought out paro's emotions

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it 😊

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180506

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: custodian75
Paro internal struggle is portrayed very beautifully. Her guilt and regret is so heart wrenching.

Thank you so much. I really hope the show goes through some motions of reflection and guilt on her end, our Paro is a very empathetic person and I do think she will go through some of these motions to a certain degree.

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

A heart wrenching piece loved it.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: ..Jyoti..
Beautifully written
So painful n heartbreaking

Thank you so much hun, I'm glad you liked it!😊

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Radhika

@TheInkMistress

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Reah you stunned me to silence.
I practically have no words. It's priceless, the emotion you evoked in me through this OS of yours. Gut Wrenching.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Suhana2014
Awesome post.. You showed inner turmoil of paro beautifully.. So heart wrencing.. Beautifully written..😊
Can you write one from rudra's pov.. 😊

I could try Suhana, but I wouldn't want to force it out- this one just came to me. But if something pops up for Rudra I'll be sure to post it!

😊