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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Guys,
Well after many days I was feeling in a romantic and poetry mode so I thought to write a poem for all of you to read on PaYa and now of course RuYal! 😳 I don't know if this is any good as I have written this one quite quickly and without much thought but I hope you all like it and it makes you all smile! 😳 So here we go...please do tell me how I can improve! 😃

||A Life Without You||

This heart of mine beats without a miss where love for you always grows,
Within my soul, I am fascinated by you in every way.
Your devotion makes me feel like a king,
Your affection so sincere, conveying my love for you becomes so pure,
Imagining my life without you, I feel so insecure.
In my life you are my everything, I am nothing without you.

When I see you, my soul ignites brightening my eyes,
I fear the darkness when you are out of sight,
I will wither and die, if you ever leave me.
Forever and a day, be with me, that's my humble plea.
Your love has made me who I am today,
Here in my life I need only you, as I am nothing without you.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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👏👏😃Its beautiful Sonia...loved it. You are a wonderful poet. Your words touched my heart. You have written a poem that perfectly suits both PaYa and RuYal. Well done!!!!!👍🏼 Keep writing!!! Write more often too!!! You are a great writer!!!!😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AWW Sonia!!!!!!!!!! Do you have ANY idea HOW MUCH I missed your poems??! I have read your poems ever since I was a silent member and I remember how much our old friends appreciated and loved your poems! 👏😳And even I simply LOVE your poems! And as usual this one's wonderful too! Keep writing more poems! You are so talented!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is such a beautiful poem Sonia. 👏👏 This is amazing girl..Keep Writing more.!! You are an excellent writer.!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG this is beautiful, Sonia!
This line just got to me real bad: Forever and a day, be with me, that's my humble plea.

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