ArHi OneShot |Leave out all the Rest|

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piggie

@piggie

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

LP "leave out all the rest"... has always been an amazing song... but using them in such creative manner has made the song even more special and meaningful...

beutifully emoted... i felt a stab in my heart while readind it.. all those words that he had said her the kidnap scene trhe cliff falll alll running in my head... beautiful loved it..

p.s. if ur first tym is so good i urge u to write more of such stuffs..

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

You have managed to capture the entire essence of Ipkknd in this OS of yours and dare i say with much more intensity and passion than what i have seen otherwise.

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Hated that part of the show ...kept waiting for him to retract his words ...he was cruel .

Wanted to heap coals of fire on his head , this os almost makes up for it .

Thnx for the pm .

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Gosh.* That was heartbreaking. But beautiful nevertheless.I bet he wins her again.😳

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dprover

@dprover

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Really good, loved the way the song used in this os

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stg1

@stg1

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

😭 u made me cry! this is so beautiful, i love ur version of events and ur narrative is as hauntingly lyrical as the song. even if i couldn't exactly get the order of what happened when, it didn't matter, i understood everything u were trying to convey, the pain, the regret, the sheer helplessness and emotion and beauty of their despair. it is utterly heartbreaking but thankfully he gets his chance at redemption, to try to make everything right for her and for them. thanks, this is seriously superb work, masterful, emotional story-telling at its best ⭐️