#2 SS:Teri Meri Love story: Part-11, Page-147 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: jeenia123


Hey niki...
ya i will also type next update.
didn't get time yesterday...
will type just now...



ok... Will be waiting
in this time I will have dinner and come😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: niki795

where are you jeenia


sorry yaar, got a lot busy,...
a lot work and preparation for a meeting tomorrow...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tried to write something stupid.very filmy...
hope you will enjoy it...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part-7

For the complete day, they didn't have direct talk may be due to hesitation... It was almost evening when Astha came to room to serve tea to Shlok...

She was about to turn back when Shlok held her arm...Astha, we need to talk...

Hummm? Astha turned back...

About morning. He spoke sighing...

Ya...she looked at his face...

Whatever happened, was not meant to be, it was just an accident... I am sorry for that and can we behave normally forgetting the incidence... He completed looking at her..

Yup...I was also thinking same... Ten days have already passed, but we gained nothing...when staying together in one room...such small incidences should not suffer our feelings and our friendship... Astha smiled...so no hard feelings, no soft feelings...OK?

Yup...and Shlok gave her hi five...

And they were almost normal since next day, Astha preferred to sleep on sofa even after the request of Shlok to shift on bed...

Five more days had passed like this and Shlok was also normal to walk now... Moreover the family had also come back...Shlok and Astha's plan to fight on small things was almost in drain as bot were not finding a single reason against each other, they were too comfortable with each other now...

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It was fine day in the morning, when they all were having breakfast...

Niranjan looked ta Shlok... so Shlok, you are perfectly fine now? Your foot?

Yes dad...i am OK now...he smiled...Niranjan looked at Anjali and both shared a smile... as breakfast finished, Niranjan gave a packet to Shlok and Astha... These are your tickets for goa, you have to leave in half a hour ...pack soon...

What? They both were shocked...dad? How is it possible? Astha spoke, I mean how can we leave so soon...

Niranjan smiled... no arguments Astha...before you people get another chance to miss honeymoon... You are leaving...pack immediately... Our manager Mr. Oberoi is also leaving with you bot, he will stay there for two days making sure you both are comfortable...

Oh no... they looked at each other and went to their room... Shloku, I can't go... Astha almost cried...

Even I can't Asthu... Shlok sat next to her... Swati is already fuming as fifteen days have already passed and no progress towards end of our relation. Upper se this honeymoon? This will work as fire to petrol for her...Think something fast yaar...

Hummm...Astha nodded... But before they could pass a single moment thinking plan, Anjali was already in the room...are tum logon ne abhi packing nahi ki? Sahib ne kha hai, just fifteen minutes are left...saying Anjali opened the almirah , took bag and started packing their clothes...

Mom, is it necessary to go? Astha asked hesitatingly...

Of course beta, everyone should get time for themselves after wedding and this is your golden period, we don't want you to miss this opportunity... will you like to take this nighty? She took a short nighty form almirah...

Nnn..no mom, I will pack myself...Astha held that immediately...

No dear, I am paking your bags... I know, you love these dresses, it is a chance to wear such dresses...saying Anjali took all the dresses from almirah filling in the bag and same from shlok's almirah...while both were still in shock...

Within ten minutes, Niranjan was almost pulling them to the car with bag and from airport Mr. Oberoi had accompanied them till their honeymoon suit in Goa... They both were shocked within three hours they were in Goa hotel and their no plan no excuse worked this time...

Shlok was on call with Swati who was shouting badly on shlok, in anger Astha held the phone and started shouting...swati...muje bhi koi shaunk anhi hai tumhaare shlok ke sath honemoon pe ane ka...i am also waiting for the day when I will be free to live my own life... roz roz ke drame se main bhi tang a chuki hun...its just a matter of five days and I have decided just after reaching back home, I will file divorce. thats all...

But Astha how could you agree to come? Swati asked her...

Yaar hamein bolne kisne diya? We have been like shifted here forcefully. Mom packed our bags...dad dragged us to airport and His manager Oberoi dragged us to Goa even to the room in hotel... Astha sighed...but don't worry your Shlok is safe in my hands...

Yup... Swati cooled down a bit..i am sorry dear, I was just over tensed...

Ya same here yaar...but please have a little patience... Astha smiled...i had already promised, I am not at all interested in a relation, I just want money form this wedding to start my business and Shlok is all yours...

Its all right dear... Thanks a lot..saying Swati cut the call...

While Shlok was looking at Astha continuously...

What? Astha asked him throwing his phone in his hands...

Thanks yaar... he smiled form saving me from Swati...

Astha jerked her shoulders...mujhe to pta nahi, tum dono ke relation mein pyar khan hai agar trust hi nahi...saying she went to washroom for change...

After half an hour Astha came out while Shlok was sleeping on bed...

Astha kicked him badly...shloku mera room mein sone ka koi mood nahi haai...let's go to the beach...i wanna enjoy here...

Are you mad? I will roam here with you? Shlok spoke sitting on bed...

Yaar main konsa keh rhi hun wife bna ke ghoomo...friend bnaa ke to enjoy kar hi sakte ahain?

Humm.. ye to hai...shlok smiled...moreover no one is there to see us if we are fighting or having fun... let's go... Saying he held Astha's hand both going to have fun in Goa...

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Four days had passed like this they were enjoying their selves dancing, drinking, boating...having adventures... knowing each other more ad having great time...

It was their last evening in Goa, when Astha came there all ready carrying a small bag on her shoulder wearing shorts and a Red t-shirt...

Ahaan, looking smart...Shlok winked at her...

Yaar, its last evening here and I wanna enjoy it the most...she smiled... Shlok... let's go for cruise ride...

Astha, I don't want to go today yaar... I wanna rest, tomorrow we are going back...shlok yawned...you can have fun there in the pub or somewhere else...

Please yaar... shloku, I don't know, when will I get this chance again...let's go na... Astha pleaded...

Ok yaar...but its last time, I am fulfilling your wish...saying Shlok stood up from bed going towards beach for booking on cruise.

It was late evening, when they were in the middle of the sea while the cloud sere thundering in the sky and a bit rain too had started...

Hey Shlok, let's go near railing...i wanna see sky in clouds light...saying Atsha pulled Shlok towards railing of the deck,...The water waves were getting high and cruise was rocking in the waves...

Astha, its getting dangerous, let's sit on chair... Shlok pulled her...

Just as he was about to step away, the ship rocked again, while Astha slipped near railing again... He hold her hand trying to pull her back. The rain had started in the midst of all this craziness. Was there a storm brewing? The boat rocked again this time, they heard an alarm bell and a voice over the PA system, "Please don't panic. We advise everyone to sit on the deck in chairs and stay there. The waters are turbulent, the waves hard and we've heard from the meteorological office that a storm is brewing. Calm down. We are doing our best, we are just one hour away from the beach, will soon reach there. Please have patience..."

Listening both turned back to go but before they could come back... Cruise rocked again and they held the railing tightly...

Was it their luck or bad luck, the railing they were holding broke down...and both slipped into the sea waves...

Shlok...Astha shouted...while Shlok held her tightly...asth...simultaneously he shouted help...

People ran towards them but no one including cruise team came for their help as cruise was stilling rocking and rain was getting heavier as well as water waves.

Holding each other tightly...both started flowing with the water waves unknown where these were taking them.. Astha, shlok spoke...hold me tightly...

I am trying shlok...Astha too spoke...while with quite hard efforts Shlok pulled her tightly into his arms in the form of hug... Within minutes, they had lost their consciousness in the waves...

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Sunlight fell on their faces holding each other in their arms tightly, waking Shlok up on a beach near the rock while water waves still wetting them, may be waves had brought them on the beach...he remembered last night's incidence, and a shiver flew through his spine... But he checked himself immediately...and checked Atsha lying in his arms, she was breathing slowly...this means , we are safe...he jumped happily...he tried to wake up Astha, but her stomach was full of water, he turned her back pressing and removing excess water , soon Astha too opened her eyes...

Sh...shlo...k are you ok? She caressed his face...

Yes Astha...Shlok held her in arms... Yes, we both are ok and safe...and he hugged her tightly in happiness..Astha too hugged him tightly... Soon she spoke...but shlok where are we? She spoke breaking hug...

On the beach dear...Shlok smiled moving bit away...

But why is this beach so lonely...I can't see anyone..Astha looked around...

Shlok too looked around...there was no one around , just some rocks a number of trees...nothing else...both stood up and started running around looking for some people and shouting for help...

But soon they had understood...

This means, we are lost? On a small island in sea? Shlok sat on the sand folding his knees...all alone?

While Astha was shocked seeing nothing but just water around them all over...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: jeenia123


sorry yaar, got a lot busy,...
a lot work and preparation for a meeting tomorrow...



its ok
but I don't know how I will know that you updated...
right on time... My 6th sence tells me😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Tried to write something stupid.very filmy...

hope you will enjoy it...



you don't need to worry dear
we know you will write beautifully
and we will love it😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
but I will unres tomorrow
for both the updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: niki795

but I will unres tomorrow
for both the updates


umm...but my sixth sense says.you will be busy tomorrow evening...😉😉😉

Still happy anniversary in advance...to you and to jiju...
and love to Neha...for her mamma Papa's happiness...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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haha superb update
will unres latter
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jeenia123


umm...but my sixth sense says.you will be busy tomorrow evening...😉😉😉

Still happy anniversary in advance...to you and to jiju...
and love to Neha...for her mamma Papa's happiness...



oh ya
I forgot it 😆

thanks dear

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