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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: zola007

Nice Os !

Loved it !
For once Asad didn't hesitate to tell what's on his heart ! 😳
Thanks for the pm 😊


thank u dear
yeah.. i wish .. he is like this Qubool hai...😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: shishiksg

wow nice one

i wanna knw zoya's answers n feelngs
so continue plz


thank u,

part 2 of this story...hmm...

will think and let u know..

love
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: kals82


thank u,

part 2 of this story...hmm...

will think and let u know..

love


i want part 2
plz plz write na
i wanna knw more abt each of their feelngs
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: shishiksg


i want part 2
plz plz write na
i wanna knw more abt each of their feelngs

ok i will try to pen it.. but it may be late...in a week
will pm you for sure😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kals82

ok i will try to pen it.. but it may be late...in a week
will pm you for sure😊


thnx
take ur time
😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Surprised... even me too... shishiksg.. wanted a part 2 to know how AS-YA.. feeling after the confession..

I was bored reading about basalt fibers...( yet to read...) so thought will pen this down...as the thoughts flowed... so here it is..for you .. shishiksg.. hope it is upto ur expectations:😛

Happy reading guys.. let me know


Part2:


As the hands touched, zoya was feeling something, and asusual, her legs slipped at the edge of the tractor, and as usual her knight held her in his arms with pleasure this time. Still in his arms, he whispered,

A: zoya.. are u ok..

Z: yes mrkhan.. she said lost in the brown eyes. And she suddenly realized that she is the ground safe and sound.

Z: I am ok.. ans she wriggled in his arms, and asad put her down on the ground, masking his disappointment.

They both went forward and asad spoke with the tractor driver, and conveyed his gratitude to him and got his contact to give him something in the future as a token of appreciation, and called Prasad in the driver phone to come over to the place with cash and car.

He moved towards a road side coffee shop, and bought a bottle of water, and give it to zoya. Zoya just moved in daze and was blank in her mind to process anything right at the moment. She sat on the bench and let asad take care of her time being. Prasad came there soon and handed the car and cash to them. Asad took over, and they both returned to KV.. by 8.00 pm. And they split their ways to reach their rooms, looking at each other.

Asad room:

Asad had a shower and changed into his trademark kurta, and sat in his green lounge , and processed everything so far. One thing surprised him was his confession to zoya, and he didn't know what zoya feels about him, and how things were going to be with them. His heart rejoiced his confession and his mind was looking at his heart gapping... at the joy, but slowly kindled some doubt there. Zoya hasn't told him anything in response... and gave a rewind of the past between them, and poked him that he never missed chance to scold zoya or put her down, or pulling her parents while scolding her. He never did anything to make her feel good about him, and he suddenly confess that he loves him,..it asked him. Suddenly his heart went silent by the poking, and then his heart said to go and look at his love.. for the PEACE OF HIS MIND...

He moved out towards her room to call her for dinner and knocked, when the response was zero, he slowly pushed to see his love sleeping the bed . he went and sat in the bed and just stared at her face for sometime. Then he came out and ordered pizza( I know I am back to pizza.. what to do situation demands) and waited to receive it. He took it inside her room and kept it on her table, and turned around to leave the room. But he went and sat in the bed at a distance and kept staring at her sleeping face, and smiled at himself as he remembered the proverb..love does make people go crazy.. from the moment he declared his love.. he was behaving like a kid who got his favorite candy after a long time. His determination also grew to win over zoya.. no matter what.. bcoz he is ASAD AHMED KHAN...

Suddenly he saw zoya shaking in her sleep, and could see she is not well, she gasped as she got up only to be held still asad arms and his hands soothing her back.. chanting... you are fine.. and I wont let anything happen.. she slowly came into her sense and realized her postion I nhis arms. At that moment it gave her sense of peace, which she longed for years in her life. She felt home in asad arm, and just relished it few minutes. Then hesitantly she came out of the hug, and looked at him. His eyes spoke volume to her and the love in them washed away all her sorrows and she just enjoyed that. Just like asad mind, her mind also poked, this man has a multiple personality disorder.. he will say onething, then he will change in the next moment. But she want the assurance from him.. that he means what he said...

Asad just watched her face and tried to guess what her mind was thinking. And wanted to initilaise a conversation to know what her thoughts are..

A: zoya are u ok... he asked.. she loved the way he said zoya.. she realized he is addressing her as zoya..not miss farooqie

Z: yes mr.khan... it just I had a nightmare. But I don't remember much about that..

Ok.. and he poured her a glass of water, and gave her the pizza to eat. Zoya was really surprised by this gesture of asad and tried to get up from her bed, asad held her hands and made her sit on the bed and gave the pizza there to eat there. Zoya just rolled her eyes.😆

She took a slice to her mouth, and then looked at him, and took a piece and gave him slice, to her surprise he gratefully agreed and even took a bite. Both of them nibbled their pizza in silence, and zoya recollected their tractor journey and his confession and also his change in behavior towards her. She blushed imagining his confession, and suddenly she remembered his MPD, what he says.. he didn't mean them.. it was just a blurr of the moment. It confused her and she wanted her clearance, but she accepted the fact she has fallen for him.. for this akdu.. and realized it too.. when he confessed.

ASAD could sense zoya, as if something is bothering her. He also wanted her what she feels about it him.

A: zoya.. do u want to ask me something.. he prompted her.

Z: mr.khan.. do you have MPD.. she blurted out..

A: jee...???

Z: nothing.. mr.khan.

He just took her hand in his.. and looked at her till she looked back at him.

A: ask me.. zoya he said..

His words and his actions gave her the courage to ask him and she wanted her dream to turn into reality.

Z: mrkhan.. do u mean what u said..

A: what did I say.. zoya.. he smirked..

Zoya thought here we go again...

Z: don't u remember.. what u told me..

A:?????

Zoya pulled her hands from his and showed her hands.. which gestured I quote and said slowly" you mean everything to me zoya"...

Asad just pulled her hands back into his hold and said.. YES ZOYA.. YOU MEAN EVERYTHING TO ME.. he repeated again.. and took her hand to his heart and placed it there as a sweet gesture.. and zoya was happily surprised by this. She waited for him to speak.. and when she looked up he opened his mouth.

A: zoya.. I know you r surprised by this behavior of mine.. even me too zoya... I always thought.. I am man whose heart is made of stone... but I never know it was a rigid ice.. to melted by ur fire of your love... and you made that yours too... zoya just looked on...

A: I know.. I have done nothing in the past.. which convey my feeling to you.. I have always scolded u and misjudged you.. I know I am right sometime.. bcoz u were irresponsible too.. and looked up to see a slight smile in her face.. accepting that..

A: the moment I realized I lost you... I realized fully... what you mean to me... I love you.. and I cant ask u to love me back just like that... but I want you to give me chance.. to prove my words.. will you give.. me that.. he asked .. looking into the dove shaped eyes.

Zoya nodded her head negatively. And his eyes looked down. With despair and disappointment and his hands releasied her hands.

But her hands got herself attached to the heart there...

A: asad...she whispered... and he looked up to see her smiling with tears on the brim of her eyes..

Z: u don't need the chance to show me your love... and win over me... I am already yours.. I don't know.. when and where and how... I fell in love with you.. but I did... even though u scold me I see ur concern for me.. u were always my savior.. when I get into trouble.. I want u to smile... and I wanted u to be happy.. ur happiness bring solace to my heart... I.e I poke unnessacry into ur affairs.. to stupid things.. lke ur gori gf.. or making u meet ayaan.. and ur eyes speak a volume to me.. till u akdu took over them.. I cant imagine a life without you...asad.. she whispered.. and the tears flowed. He pulled her closer and dried her tears and dropped a kiss on the forehead.. as his heart did a happy dance inside him.. screaming.. she too lovesme...

He let go of her hand, and gestured her to eat.. and zoya realized she is indeed hungry, as she don't remember when she had a proper meal. And both the lovers enjoyed the silence.. around them. As she finished he took the boz and put them into the dustbin and gave her tissue to clean her hands and mouth. As asad moved, zoya held his hand, and asad whispered..

A: zoya.. sleep u r tired, and I will be here and he pulled the chair to sit next to the bed.. she nodded her head in a NO. and indicated the place next to her in her bed. He looked at her, and then he silently went and laid next to her. She moved closer to him and placed her head on his chest and hugged him by the waist, and asad held her closer and dropped a kiss on the forhead and pulled the duvet over them. There they found their peace in each other.. with the thought that they belong to each other... they slept in each other arms.. and let the exhaustion take over them.

The end...or not..

Just like asad. My mind says.. the end... my heart says.. one more.. like how dilshad caught them almost and how asad declares his love to his mom... much to the surprise of zoya..

Will let u know..

MPD.. was inspired by goinggreen.. MCP...

Love to know your comments.. but do leave a like...


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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Hey, Hi,

ii am really happy that u had changed it into an ts

i just loved it

and loved asya confession to core 😳

i dont have any problem in having 3rd part of it

but do it sooon

i am missing ur sweet stories a lot 😭

and u have to make an os on blue berry cheese cake or whatever topic from the 7 😉

do u remember 😉

pls do that soon

and thanks for update

thank u for pm

pm me for next update

Edited by aishw09 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
ressy messy is here also to res his case first again 😆
Nice update Kalyani Di😃
U made me remember those good old days of QH n the best of those Mangalpur time
I miss that QH n that scenes n fights in KV😭
But this update was very good
Zoya called asad MPD u made remember the Ghajini film which Aamir had same disease😆
Lol finally their both confessed to each other n maily zoya didn't forgot to let go her antic ther also when asad was telling her abt his feelings😆
Love the sleeping position of them 😳

PS: Finally i unresed on ur some Story 😆n sorry for holding my comments for this long
I will unress them also soon 😃
Edited by --SH7_Sunny-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Awesome Part !
Loved it !
Zoya asking him about MPD ! 🤣
Their confessions were so cute 😳
Do continue it 😃
Would love to read how they get caught red-handed by Dilshad !
And How Asad tells Dilshad about his feeling without Woh Actually ! 😆
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
unressy my messy comment on pg 9 😆

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