journey became destination(mangalpur episode)- an asya ts. part 3@18

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">This is next os from
me.. Hope u all like it.. it is based on their return journey from mangalpur..</font>


part 2:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/103177115


part 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3951265/journey-became-destination-mangalpur-episode-an-asya-ts-part-3-18




Journey became destination:


Asad was leaning on
to the side walls of the tractor and zoya was sleeping in his shoulders.. and
his hand held her closely.. with a conviction of never letting her go.. he
looked at her sleeping in peace// and a
small stray hair disturbed her face. He slowly pulled it aside and watched his
life in his arms... yes she did became his life..<

He looked back at the
moment when she entered his life.. The very first time he saw in the mazar.. The
asad ahmed khan.. Who believed... that his heart is just a stone... Heard it beating...for the very
first time when he saw her crying in the mazar... and his mind couldn't believe that
stone is beating.. that to for a stranger.. he is Asad ahmed Khan... and he knows
his persona.. and how it affects the opposite sex.. and he was never affected by any of the beauty he has
come across.. but today looking at the stranger .. crying infront of him..
almost pushed him to go to her and take her in his arms and protect her with all his might.. he closed
his eyes.. and sent a prayer for her and opened his eyes to see her missing..
he almost believed it is his dream.. and moved out..</font>


Then the second
meeting.. just say.. she literally swiped him of his feet... and the rest they
say is history.. and now.. he is holding her in his arms.. as he wished.. and
closed his eyes looking back at the past
2 days event of their life. When she came to live with them.. and the contrast
in their personality between them.. made his mind to bury his heart deep down..
so that..it took control over him. But everything
changed in mangalpur.. it looked like.. they were here for a reason.. and just like their hands their life's are entwined<font color="#0000ff">(bubble title😉) for a lifetime
.</font>


His heart started
beating slowly and steadily in here as they spend a lot more time in each
other company and started picking up the pace too.. it was
running at jet speed when he lost her...
and died when he held her lifeless form in his arms and screamed her name...
again and again.. when she opened her eyes... his heart also starting beating..
but now the difference is... It is
beating for her... Bcoz it is hers... only hers.. and he had a small smile in his
lips.. as he realized the truth behind yash words... and for the first time.. his
mind and heart agreed .. and mind smilead and said.. musibet.. magnet... And the
heart replied.. our musibet magnet...</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Zoya slowly stirred
from her sleep.. and she looked up at asad.. and came out of his embrace.. and looked at him
from head to toe... </font>


>Z: mr..khan.. r u ok... u r not hurt anywhere r u..


A: I am ok miss farooqie.. he replied.. and was equally
puzzled at her question. She almost died.. but she is enquiring about his well being..</font>


>Z: I am sorry mr khan.. I always trouble you... I promise I wont
let that happen again..</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">A: Miss farooqie.. it is ok.. u r fine that all that matters..
and I am so sorry for leaving u there
with them.. at that moment.. I couldn't do much... I am so sorry.. but will never
ever leave u..</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Z: mr.khan.. why did u came back in search of me...</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">A: zoya...</font>


Z: what if they did
something to you too... Mr.Khan.. how can u forget.. poophi and najma needs you..
and u aretheir pillar.. and if something happened to you.. how will they survive without you. . you should have left me there. Mr.Khan.. I am
feeling so guilty of dragging u with me when evr I create a mess...


">A: what about u zoya..


>Z: Mr.Khan... I have nobody in this world to call as my own..who
wait for me to come home to them.. to grief over my death..


A: zoya how can u say that. Ur appi and jeeju.. are there
for you..( and he thought so am i)</font>


>Z: yeah. They are.. but they are not my own... Mr.Khan... I am
an orphan..</font>


Asad looked at her..
as she started speaking.. his heart was feeling her pain.. her anguish... after
all it does belong to her now.</font>


>Z: I don't know much about me.. I lost my mom when was a kid.. no idea who my dad is.. and was
adopted by my aapi mom as she was my mom close friend... and six months I came to
know that my dad is in Bhopal.. and
found some old photos in the old suitcase.. and I am here like lunatic..
searching for a person who left me in an
orphanage... in the nukes and corner.. of this city... it has been a dead end so
far mr.khan.. may be it is in destiny... and
Mr.Khan... I do realize my mistake now... I do have overstayed in your home and in the process have created
so many problems for u..


Asad was just hearing
her words and his heart started bleeding with her words.. and what she thinks
about him...</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Z: thank you . so much
Mr.Khan.. for being my savior always.. I will never forget u nor your
family... poophi and najma.. made me believe that I belong there with them. But I
don't want to trouble you any more.. with my impulsive nature..</font>


>A: zoya I don't have to ... u can stay with us... U belong
with us now..</font>


>Zoya had a slight
smile in her face and shook her head at him...</font>


">Z: mr .khan.. now you know my sob story... I don't want ur
sympathy .. I can manage on my own.. and
also realized.. that I unknowingly I started depending on u.. which is not
right for someone like me...</font>


A: zoya.. it is not sympathy.. damn it... I don't know what to
say...to convience you...</font>


Z: mr Khan.. u mean to say.. that I mean something to you..
she asked looking away..</font>


Asad took her face in his hands and made her look straight
in his eyes.. and when she drowned in his eyes.. he said..</font>


">A: zoya... YOU MEAN EVERYTHING TO ME..</font>


AND they
had their famous eyelock.. and emotions taking over them.. asad couldn't
believe he confessed. And was worried about zoya reactions... and zoya was just
dumbstruck by the revelations and was trying to process his words n her mind..
by the brown eyes held her just there in the moment..</font>


>As the tractor jerked
to stop, asad impulsively pulled her
into his arms and crushed her. Zoya could feel something fill her fully.. and just relished the moment in his arms..</font>


The driver shouted.. bhai sahib... Bhopal aag gayee hai...</font>


>Zoya came out of the
embrace.. and looked down, asad jumped
down.. and opened the tractor road.. and strtched his hands at her..
looking at her with all the love in his
eyes.. she slowly kept her hands on his
hands.. and she felt... she reached her
destination.</font>


">The end..</font>




<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"> It didn't turn out
the way.. I wanted... anyways.. love to
know ur comments. About this...</font>


Do hit the like
button.. </font>



<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Link to another os..
of mine.. take me Mr.khan - BASED ON BHOL NA HALKE...</font>


>https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3940890</font>


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Posted: 11 years ago
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rrr
aww such a sweet nd beautifull update it was..
truly amazing..just loved reading it..👍🏼
this update really took me back to the old QH memories..
the little confession by Asad is just amazing.. the way he said,"Uh are my everything" to Zoya was awesome..😳
nywayz would love to read more from uh..plz do post more of ur work😊
Edited by pwenCezz_symrun - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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rrr

amazing wrk dee...

u revive my memories of the golden tym of QH..

mangalpur sequence was undoubtedly one of the best sequence of qh..

n u gv the flavor of romance n confession..

its like cherry on the cake...

amazing piece of wrk dee..👏
Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey

i have to say

i just really loved it

fantastic 😊

i am dreaming about it

pls do many more os

its awesome

do pm for next update or os or anything u do it 😊

thanks for pm


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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's just awesome di

Keep writing

Love it

The way asad confessed

Thanks 4 the pm

Love
Linnet
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PLS OD GIVE MANY MORE OS

DO u remember u gave 6 topics for os 😉

and 1st one is done 👏

now waiting for second 😕

blue berry cheese cake i guess 😉

but pls do it soon 😊

and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its very nice
brought back mangalpur memories
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely OS!!!
Mangalpur the start of their journey nt as Asad & Zoya but AsYa!!!
Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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comment unresed on pg 1😊
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