D3 Dil Dosti Destine... a Kriyaansh OS

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Before I start I want 2 share wid u that I wrote this when I was in class 9th. I was thinking from many days to write something for kriyaansh, and i found my this story. i then made my hero Rey, and heroine Kria... hahaha..😃

There was a college. There comes a girl Kria. Great friend of all, a little bubbly. Many were friends of her - Sharon, Neha, Anamika and Radhika. There was a boy in the class - Reyaansh. He loved Kria very much. He was a Joking for all but Handsome and Dashing for Kria. Along with Rey many other boys liked Kria but Kria was crazy for Rey. After knowing about Rey - Kria's affair all others left Kria but Vicky, he did not keep quiet.

The school was finished, all were in college. Vicky always wandered back of Kria in college.

Ek din Library mein:

Kria:Tu chahata kya hai Vicky?

Vicky:Tujhe.

:Tu achi tarah janta hai k main Rey se pyar karti hoon phir b tu mujhe pana chahta hai?

:Haan tune Rey k pyar ki toh kadar ki lekin mere pyar ki nahi.Tu kuch b bol Kria sirf Vicky ki hai.

Piche se Rey:Kria Sirf Rey ki hai.[pass aa kar]maine tujhe kitni bar samjaya hai Vicky k Kria ka picha chod de.

Vicky:Tu mera cousin hai Rey warna...

Rey:Warna kya?Waise b kaun sa bhaichara nibhaya hai tune?Yeh jante hue b main Kria se pyar karta hoon or wo bhi mujhe chahti hai,tu use pana chahta hai?

: Maine nahi nibhaya kyunki tune aaj tak bhai hone ka farz nahi nibhaya.Mere liye tu apne pyar ki kurbani tak nahi de sakta?

: Main Kria ko paane ki kosis kabhi nahi karta, na hi usse apne pyar ka izhaar karta Agar tu sahi insaan hota toh.

Kria:Hume alag karna itna assaan nahi.

Rey:Lekin agar tujhe lagta hai tu aisa kar sakti hai to carry on.

Dono:All the best.

Friends

Radhiika-Ab to college khatam b ho jayega or tum log aise hi bethe rahoge,Kuanre.

Kria:Par hum karen kya?

Anamika:Karen kya matlab?Pyar karte ho na, Shaadi karlo.

Rey:What nonsence,Tumhe itna aasan lagta hai kya?

Neha:Are isme muskil kya hai?

Anamika:Haan,sirf baat hi toh karni hai.

Kria:Tu apni saadi ki baat khud kar sakti hai ghar me?Baat karti hai,.

Sharon:Ek dusre se ladhna chodo. Rey, apne pyar par bharosha hai tumhe toh jao, jao or uncle aunty se baat karo Kria k ghar me hum sambhal lenge.

Rey's house

Rey's mom:Are Rey beta teri bua ka phone aya tha abhi abhi,Vicky ki saadi tae ho gayi hai.

Rey:Vicky ki shaadi?Kisse?

Mom: Naam toh pata nahi par usi k college me padhti hai.Ache ghar se hai.

Kria'house

Kria's mom: Kria,tere liye rishta aya hai beta,

Kria:Rishta? kiska?

Mom:Bahut bade ghar se hai.Ladke ka naam Vicky hai.

Anamika:Kya?Kria ki shaadi Vicky se?

Radhika:Lekin aunty,apne aise kaise rishta tae kar diya?Pucha b nahi?

Aunty:Isme puchna kya hai?Hum jisse kahenge,ussi se shaadi karegi hai na beta?

Kria:Ji maa.Tum log mere saath aao.

Wo unhe kamre me le jaati hai or ek chitti likhti hai:

Dear Rey,

Doston ne apko bata hi diya hoga k meri saadi Vicky se tae ho gayi hai. Par main iss Shaadi k liye na nahi keh sakti. Naa keh kar main apne pariwaar k maan maryada ko thes nahi pahucha sakti.Lekin mujhe apne pyar par b pura bharosa hai,main aapse pyar karti hun aur main Vicky se shaadi nahi kar sakti.Apko kissi b tarah ye saadi rokni hogi.Main apse bahut pyar karti hoon aur ye b jaanti hoon k aap jaroor aaoge.Lekin agar aap nahi aaye,To yahan se meri ashti uthegi, doli nahi.

Apki sirf apki

Kria

Kria: Ise Rey ko de dena.

Sab Rey k paas gaye.

Sharon:Kya hua?Tum muhu phula kar kyun bethe ho?

Rey:Vicky ki shaadi tae ho gayi hai Sharon, mujhe dar hai kahin wo...

Anamika:Kria hi hai Rey.

Rey:Kya?

Neha:Ye Kria ne diya hai.

Chitti padhne ke baab wo b chitti likhta hai.

Dear Kria,

In logon ne mujhe sab bata Ria hai.Main samajh sakta hoon k tum apne pariwaar k maan maryada ko thes nahi pahucha sakti.Jitna bharosha tumhe apne pyar par hai, utna mujhpar b rakho. Main b tumse bahut pyar karta hoon aur tumhari asti uthte nahi dekh sakta. Main jarur aaunga.

tumhara sirf tumhara

Rey

phir

Rey:Isse Kria ko de do.

Anamika & Radhika Kria k ghar jaate hain.

Sharon: Kya soch rahe ho?

Rey:Chitthi me likh toh diyak Shaadi Nahi hone doonga,Par main karunga kya?

Neha: Idea!

sharey:Kya?

Friends

Anamika: Aaj haldi ki rasam hai.

Neha: Hame kisi b tarah ye rasam rokni hogi.

Anamika:Lekin agar humne aisa kiya toh bakheda khada ho jayega.

Sharon:Hume iss rasam ko rokne ki koi jaroorat nahi hai,hame bas haldi Vicky se pehle Rey ko lagani hai.

Anamika:Ab ye kaam toh sirf ek hi insaan kar sakta hai.

Neha:Kaun?

Anamika:Tu meri baat samajh gayi na Radhiika?

Radhiika: Haan.kal tak mujhe chid tha k Vicky mera padosi hai,lekin sayad isi din k liye bana tha.

Radhiika aur Anamika jaate hai.Rasam Rey k ghar par hoti hai.

Rey's house

Anamika:Kahan gaya ye?

Radhiika:Uski maa se puchte hain.Aunty Rey nazar nahi aa raha.

Aunty:Uske kamre me hoga.

Kuch der baad Rey niche aata hai.

Anamika:Kahan the tum?Hum tumhe kabse doond rahe hain.

Rey:Kis liye?

Rey's mom: Are Rey beta mehmano ko jara dekhna.

Rey:Ji mom.

Anamika:Ab hum kya karen?

Vicky's mom: Haldi ki katori laana.

Radhika:Kuch to karna padega.

Ek ladki haldi ki katori le k aa rahi thi.Jab wo Rey k pass pahunchi, Radhiika ne jakar uske pair k samne apna pair rakh diya. wo katore k saath gir rahi thi aur Radhika na use pakad liya.Katora Rey ne pakda jisse uske haath par haldi lag gayi.

Radhika:I m really sorry, aapko lagi to nahi?

Ladki:Ji nahi.

Kria's house

Kria:Pata nahi wahan kya ho raha hoga///

Sharon:Don't worry yaar sab hamare plan k mutabik hoga.

Tabhi Sharon ko phone aata hai.Phir:

Sharon:Rey ko haldi lag gayi.

Vicky ki behen Vidya or Rey ki behen Ria U.S se wapas aaye aur unhe pata chala ki Vicky ki shaadi Kria se ho rahi hai.They goes to Vicky.

Vidya:Vicky tu Kria se Shaadi kar raha hai?

Vicky: Haan toh?

Ria:Par tum jante ho k Kria Aur Rey bhaiya ek dusre se pyar karte hai.

: Main b usse pyar karta hoon.

Vidya:EK minuite kya kaha tune?Vicky,kal tak tu kehta tha k tu Neha ko chahta hai Aur aaj tu kehta hai ki tu Kria se pyar karta hai?

Vicky:Di,aap meri behen ho ki Rey ki?

:Dono ki.Main jo b keh rahi hoon tere bhale k liye keh rahi hoon.

Ria:Haan bhaiya.Di bilkul sahi keh rahi hai.Abhi b waqt hai,,tod do ye shaadi.

:tu aisa isliye keh rahi hai na kyun ki tera bhai meri hone waali biwi se pyar karta hai?

Vidya:Vicky,,,behen hai teri..

:YEh meri nahi Rey ki behen hai.

Ria leaves,Goes to Rey.Vidya follows her.

Ria:Bhaiya,,ye sab kya hai?

Rey:Kya?

Vidya:Vicky Kria se shaadi kar raha hai or tu chup chap baitha hai?

Rey:Lekin main kar b kya sakta hoon didi?

He leaves.

Friends

Sharon:Haldi toh ho gayi,,ab baari hai mehendi ki.

Anamika:Hmm..yeh kaam b Radhiika ko karna hoga

Piche se Vidya:Dost kehte ho na khud ko?Dosti ka matlab b jante ho?

Anamika:Excuse me?????????Aap kehena kya chahti hai?

Vidya:Kria or Vicky ki Shaadi ho rahi hai aur tum log chup chap baithe ho?

Neha:Aapko kya lagta hai?Hum khush hain iss shaadi se?

Ria:Toh phir aap log kuch karte kyun nahi?

Sharon:Tumhe kya lagta hai?Hum chupchap baithe hai?

Vidya:Acha??Kya ukhad liya hai tumne?

Anamika:Humne wo kar diya hai Vidya ji,jo sayad aap b kabhi nahi kar patin.

Vidya:Acha?Kya ukhad liya hai tumne??

Radhiika:Hum wo haldi Vicky se pehle Rey ko laga di hai jo Kria k ghar se aayi thi.

Vidya:Kya????

Anamika:Haan. Aur hum Shaadi b Kria ki Rey se hi karayenge.

Vidya:Main tumhare saath hun.

Ria:Main b.Lekin ab hume kya karna hoga?

Anamika:Hume Rey ko mehendi lagani padegi...Vicky se pehle.

Ria:Di,,hume ghar jaa kar haldi dhundni chahiye.

Vidya:hmm.chal.

Dono ghr jate hain bht dundhte hain par unhe kahin nahi milta.Wahin par kuch bache khel rhe the,Rey sidhion se niche aaya aur unke saath khelne laga...tabhi baal almari k upar gai gayi.Usi waqt Radhiika n Anamika aaye.Unhone dekha k mehendi almari upar hai,Rey ball nikalne ki koshish kar raha hai or katora girne wala hai,,wo gir jata hai or Rey use pakad leta hai jisse mehendi uske haath me lag jati hai.Radhiika n Anamika ye dekh kar chale jate hain.

Friends

Kria:Pata nahi kya ho raha hoga wahan...

Neha:Har baar tention mat liya kar..Haldi k waqt b tune yahi kaha tha.Sab sahi ho rha hoga.

Sharon:Haan tu fikar mat kar.

Tabhi Sharon ko phone aaya. Baat karne k baad:

"Rey ko mehendi lag gayi"

Aakhir wo din aa hi gaya jiska sabko intzaar tha.

Kria ki Shaadi

Vicky:Main sart jit gaya Rey...aaj meri Kria k saath shaadi hai.

Rey:Janta hun.Lekin main aaj b yahi kahunga k Kria sirf meri hai.

Vicky:Kis mitti ka bana hai yaar tu?Aaj shaadi hai aur tu abhi b use pane ki umid me hai?

Rey:Umid nahi yakin hai mujhe Kria meri hi hogi.Duniya me aisi koi taakat nahi jo Rey ko Kria se alag kar de,,or nahi aisi koi shakti hai jo Kria ko Rey se juda kar de.

Vicky: Dialogue ache maar raha hai...ek kaam karna meri sadi k baad kisi film k liye try karna tera man b bahel jayega.

Rey:Iski zarurat tujhe padne wali hai..bahut jald.

Vicky:Dekhte hain.

Friends

Radhiika:Kya hua?

Kria:jaise tu kuch janti hi nahi..10 min. me mahrat hai. Aur tu...

Anamika:Don't worry mandap me Rey hoga.

Kria:Kya???

Sharon:Haan.

Kria:Par...

Radhika:Humne Vicky ko baand k store room me band kar diya hai, or uske kapde Rey ko pehna kar mandap pe bitha diya hai..

Kria:Sach??

Anamika:Haan..Teri shaadi Rey se hi hogi.

Thodi der baad Shaadi ho jati hai.

Pandit:Aaj se aap dono pati-patni hue.

Piche se koi:Ruko...

Sab dekhte hai.That's Vicky!

Vicky: yeh Shaadi nahi ho sakti.

Sharon: yeh shaadi ho chuki hai. and u, get lost!

Rey: maine kaha than a, Kria sirf Rey ki hai.

Neha: yeh shaadi ho gayi hai. tumhare manne na manne se koi fark nahi padta.

Vidya: Vicky, Rey and Kria love each other. Do pyar karne waalon k beech aakar tu galti kar raha tha. Kria sirf rey ki hai. bhul jaa use. Iss shaadi se koi khush nahi hota balki tin tin zndagiyan barbaad ho jaati. Tu aise nahi manta, iss liye hame tujhe store room mein band karna pada. Ab toh apni haar maan le.

Vicky: I think u r right. Mujhe inke bich nahi aana chahiye tha. Rey, Kria, I m sorry. Mujhe maaf kar do.

Kria: ab jab tumhe apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya hai, toh tumhe ek hi baat pe maafi mile gi.

Vicky: wo kya?

Rey: marry Neha.

Vicky: Rey...

Sharon: Vicky, Neha aaj b tumse bahut pyar karti hai, agar apni galti sudharna chate ho, toh karlo shaadi. Haan kardo.

Vicky: agar aisa hai toh thik hai. karunga main Neha se shaadi.

And all they lived happily ever after...😊😊😊

Now i m ready for all the tomatoes and chappals... all the stones and potatoes are also welcome...😆

Love,

Radhika

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kya planning hai Ms. Radhika ki!!!! 👏 👏
Rey n kriya hai clg love birds...beech mein aata hai vicky banke villian!!!
Marriage n ol finalize ho gai!!!
Par kriya aur rey ki nahi kriya aur vicky ki!!!
N ye frnds r also grt!!!!!
Har rasam kriyansh k saath hi karva di!!!
Vicky villian ban gya tha...bt fir at d end its viha n kriyansh!!!
Aapki imagination ke liye to ek hi dialogue hai!! Kya baat kya baat kya baat!!!
N ye matlab full on tashan bhi dikhaya hai recky k beech mein!!!
Its grt!!!
Nyc attempt!!! N gud job!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kreya204

Kya planning hai Ms. Radhika ki!!!! 👏 👏
Rey n kriya hai clg love birds...beech mein aata hai vicky banke villian!!!
Marriage n ol finalize ho gai!!!
Par kriya aur rey ki nahi kriya aur vicky ki!!!
N ye frnds r also grt!!!!!
Har rasam kriyansh k saath hi karva di!!!
Vicky villian ban gya tha...bt fir at d end its viha n kriyansh!!!
Aapki imagination ke liye to ek hi dialogue hai!! Kya baat kya baat kya baat!!!
N ye matlab full on tashan bhi dikhaya hai recky k beech mein!!!
Its grt!!!
Nyc attempt!!! N gud job!!! 👏 👏 👏


thnk u so much... i was really worried what will be the response of all... but thank u very much for this...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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leshh
anu ke behan radhikaa hellooo shello🤗
baadmein lamba comment dungee kkk😆
abb ke liye itna jaanaloo awesome update aur likha karoo👏
shaam ko big comment milegaa tujhe😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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kya bat h radhika...tum to puri filmy ho...kriyaansh clg lovers nd vicky pyar ka dushman...
inke dost nd behane badi smart hain...nice ending..loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was a superb and amazing os... loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww cute os
Kuch bhi ho at the end kriyaansh will be together
Awesome os
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow dis waz cute...
kya plans banaya the vicky ko kriya se door rakhne k n kriyansh ki shaadi karvaneke...
nyc...i must say suprb planning...
haldi n mahendi waz cute...
last me viha ki shaadi...nice...
sabse jyada toh meko rey k dialogues aache lage...
do write more..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Haha this was kinda funnyy..
Amazng Os..
Keep it up Radhika..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice one!!!!
this OS bahut filmy laga!!!
kinda cutely funny...

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