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Posted: 11 years ago
For all those readers that celebrate the festival of Holi🤗
Even the ones that don't...😆 This is for you🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pwenCezz_symrun

Superb update it was..

loved every bit of it...brilliantly written
Asya's romance was just flawless..
the pic caps were amazing
continue soon😊


hai princess,

thank u for ur wonderful comments..

they are lovely...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Az07

Di update soon

I can't wait for Ajmer FB.
I have a request when you show zoya as pregnant with afzal, would like to see her FB when she got know about her first pregnancy.
You have mentioned in story she got to know her pregnancy on nikhat's nikkah day & since she was standing there as ayaan's wife she couldn't reveal it to asad. You also mentioned that on NikhAt nikkah Malvi declared zoyaan as invalid & they got it annulled. So would like to see her emotions on that time. Does she came to know about her abbu after nikhat's nikkah?
I know I am disturbing you a lot


hai uma,

u have a long list for me to fulfill..
will try to add everything.. thank u so much for loving this story..

you are one of the reason i wrote the next part..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: NAVI55

For all those readers that celebrate the festival of Holi🤗

Even the ones that don't...😆 This is for you🤗


Originally posted by: A.Kh_20

happy holi!!!

love u all!!



hai buddies

thank u for ur wishes... even though i dont celebrate holi...

loved it...

love

kalyani
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hai guys,

I am here atlast with an update... yeah I know it was almost a month since I updated this..FF of mine

Bcoz I think I am dragging ths story... The part 50 has just 50 like only in the last week.. I almost thought I will just edit and write THE END there... but I did promise some dear readers of mine... about bringing afzal... into the happy family..

So here I am.. with the next update.. and I would love if everyone who read this.. leave a like.. atleast.. as the story will end in another 4 update maximum..

And this update goes for Az07... She always wanted an FB in ajmer.. so here it is.. specially for you.. and also for your wonderful stories.. too.. they are awesome..

Part 51:

March 24, 2014.

This day was the most important date in the life of as-ya.. bcoz their princess was born on that day... bringing in the world of joy and happiness in their life. As the day dawned, asya was hugged and cherished by her parents.. and for the first time she had her dad with her for real.. and not in a video. The family along with Anze- aadil visited the mazar in the morning to offer their prayer to the almighty.. the very mazar were asad saw zoya for the first time. The family entered with a wonderful chaddar in their hands as offering in the shrine. They sat at the opposite side of each other, and closed their eyes in prayer.

Asad closed his eyes in gratitude and everything from the last 5 yearplayed in front of him. The moment he saw zoya for he first time in the mazar.. may be bcoz they were made for each other by the almighty.. i.e why he saw her there. Then he remembered how he found peace in ajmer.. and his prayer in ajmer.. he begged the almighty to bring zoya back into his life and he did listen to his soulful prayer.. and he found his zoya in ajmer itself. He had a small smile when he thought about their recent visit to ajmer. He went down on his knees in front of the shrine.. just in pure gratitude and nothing else. When he thought he lost all the hopes of life, god just doubled his happiness bringing in his love back, but also his life asya..

There in that moment, he understood that we all are puppets in the hand of god, and whatever he does, it was for a reason. The whole family entered the ajmer with their offering, and bowed down and then they got up to tie the thread in the sacred wall. Asad and zoya were standing on the opposite side of the wall, and their hand brushed as they tied the wall. And they looked at each other with their eyes filled with love and contentment. Looking into each other eyes they tied the thread with prayer that their life to tied with each other.. Forever.

Asya tucked her mom dress, and she picked her up and with her little finger she tied the thread too, and squealed in joy seeing her abbu on the other side. The happy family came out of the dargah, and asad was very generous in distributing money to the needed once in the surroundings. Suddenly a baba came in fronti of them and blessed them and he said... now you both are bounded to each other for the rest of your life... and whatever problems you may face in the future, you will be each other strength and support... For the rest of the life. These words brought solace to their heart, that now they will be together no matter what.

The family visited the places around, as-ya entered the palace hand in hand were asad confessed his love for zoya. Zoya held asad by his waist and placed her head in his heart, and asad enveloped her in his arms and they walked. As they walked in the whole of their painful past played in front of them, and the hold on each other was becoming very strong, and at that moment, they care a damn about what the people around them will think. They reached the courtyard were asad confessed his love for depth, to their surprise they were the only occupants of the place. Asad held zoya face in his hands caressed her cheeks, and kissed the soft petals. He poured in all his emotions in his kiss and it was not soft and gentle.. it was fierce... expressing his depth of love for her.

They came out of their kiss in need for oxygen, and asad once again voiced his feelings..

A: zoya .. I LOVE YOU...

Z: I LOVE YOU TOO... ASAD.. and they hugged each other, only to here the claps of their family there.

Asya jumped in for a family hug, and the happy family left the place in peace. As they moved around, the couple saw a cute 5 year old girl, holding a hand of 2 year old toddler and walking around in their tiny legs with the proud parents looking at them. Zoya saw them and she wanted her afzal, asya was almost 3, and she was pampered by her abbu, and she need afzal to complete the happy family.

Z: I want afzal asad...

A: yeah.. I want him too.. and I don't mind trying right now.. shall we... he winked

Zoya hit him playfully on the chest and hugged.

Asad opened his eyes to the present, to see asya and zoya sitting in front of him with their eyes closed in prayers. Asya was looking like an pari to him, and he could feel a glow in his zoya face.. serene it was. He closed his eyes and prayed the almighty for his prince and for the happiness of the family. After their prayer the family came out, and the reached asad office for the day. They both had a important client meeting for the day.. in the morning. So they want to finish it first, before they continued the celebrations. Anze and dilshad went back home, to make the preparations, as the whole khan clan will be there for party in the eve and also dinner.

Mr.Mehta was an important client of them, he is nice old man of 60, and had a business spread all over india, and he was interested in a 30 floor corporate office, and he liked asad previous work so much, and gave them the appointment to meet on this day, so they couldn't avoid it. They have done their home work on the work, at sharp 10.00 am the meetin started in the conference hall, where Mr.Mehta was accompanied by his P.A. zoya left asya with her staff, for the one hour. Zoya was presenting them and Mr.Mehta was quite impressed by the couple and their dedication towards their work. As the presentation was about to end, the door burst open and asya came running to her abbu. Asad picked her up in his arms and asked her

A: asya... what is this.

As: abbu u asked me what I want for my bday..

A: yes I did... what do u want princess.

As: now I know what I want... I want a baby brother to play with. Najma and nikhat aunty take asad and zoya back home with them, I want one baby with me always... please abbu...

As-ya were stunned by asya words, and Mr.mehta laughed out loud hearing her words and also at the proud parents. Mr.M came out of the chair, and placed asya on the conference table and asked her.

M: who gave the idea to ask ur abbu for a babu dear...

As: apurva didi.. in ammi office... she said to me that if I want baby brother I should ask my abbu... she said correctly na..

M: yeah.. ur apurva didi.. is very intelligent dear... by she missed out the fact... that ur abbu alone cant bring ur brother.. but he needs full cooperation of ur ammi too..

As; oh really.. uncle, how come apu didi forgot that... She turned towards her mom and asked.. ammi I want a baby brother in 10 months.. ok.. for the astonishment of all there.

M: why in 10 months dear..

As: apu didi said... it will take 10 months for my brother to come.. i.e why..

M: yeah she is right... he looked at the embraced couple there.. u should fulfill ur princess wishes.. and u didn't tell me it is her bday today... we should have had the Meeting there other day. And by the way the deal is urs now.. and now I want o celebrate asya bday. He himself ordered a big cake forher and infront of all staff, asya cut the cake in the office lobby and asad arranged a special lunch for all his staff.

The family landed in KV..for the evening, and all the khans, querishi, were present there for the celebrations.. it was grand in festival but small in numbers only the family was present. Asya perched herself in her abbu arms. And when she cut the cake, asad couldn't stop the tears from his eyes.. he missed 3 bday of her... and held her close, and zoya looked at him to know his thoughts and smiled at him. He smiled back and after a fabolus dinner, they all parted ways. Anze have shifted to Bhopal, and they are just living in the next lane of khan villa to the delight of zoya and asya.

As the night came, asad got asya, a costly drawing kit.. for her to practice.. after all she is suppose to an architect.. just like him. As zoya came and sat in the couch next to them..

As: ammi.. where is my gift...

Z: ammi.. got gift not only for u.. and also for ur abbu..

As: show it naa ammi..

Zoya took asad and asya hand and placed them in her stomach...

Z: you will have ur baby bro is eight months dear...

As: really ammi..

Z: yes sweet heart..

Asad was awestruck by zoya words. And he caressed her stomach, and he bent down and dropped a kiss in her stomach and whispered...

A: hai prince come soon.. abbu is eagerly waiting for u.. and the whole family hugged.. with the fourth member joining them as a part of zoya.

Love ur comments... but do leave a like...

i am writing a series of os.. on asya(kabhi).. down here is the link.. u can read them if u r interested.. so far 3..


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Edited by kals82 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm late very late in commenting😭...Amazing update...loved it to bits...thanks for the super-long update😃...loved every little description of Kodai and all the pics u've posted along...so the long honeymoon+familymoon comes to an end...this is a beautiful FF and I would love to read more and more of it...waiting for a lot more surprises to come😳...I guess it's already time for the next one...again sorrry for being so horribly late😔
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ap3h7u

I'm late very late in commenting😭...Amazing update...loved it to bits...thanks for the super-long update😃...loved every little description of Kodai and all the pics u've posted along...so the long honeymoon+familymoon comes to an end...this is a beautiful FF and I would love to read more and more of it...waiting for a lot more surprises to come😳...I guess it's already time for the next one...again sorrry for being so horribly late😔


hai dear,

thank u for ur lovely comments... u want to read more... that is a booster for me.. i guess...

yeah the next update is right below this..
it is ok . that u here to comment... that matters to me..

thank u sweet heart
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally prince charming is coming too 🥳
Edited by -RM- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
RES...Unres😃
Kalyani...
This was just so awesome👏
Chapter 51 is just such a serene update😃 Maybe because you mentioned Ajmer...
But I thought it was just so cute...Romantic...and beautiful...
Happy Birthday dear Asya...😃
I loved Apu's role here...You surely must have thrilled her to bits😉😆
Asya's conversation with her parents was so fun and cute...You captured the innocence of a child beautifully...I loved it❤️
Zoya's gift to her family...Priceless👍🏼 that moment when Asad placed a kiss on her tummy was indeed the sweetest moment...
Finally the Khan family has come full circle...their family is almost complete😃
Brilliant update Kal...I really don't want this to end but I do know that you will come around with another fabulous fiction for us all😉
Edited by NAVI55 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kalyani, this was a superb update..
Afzal is eventually on his way..
Loved Asya and her demand for a baby brother..

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