The swaron wait :) (fun poem) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its awesome Vandana, Loved it.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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adorable poem😳...like button is not working😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you sooo much everyone of y'all who commented/ appreciated my first attempt :).Seriously, hats off to all you people on IF...you guys are seriously amazing! :) <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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keep writing poems 😆 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
lovely poem..
do write more..
thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Just don't say types !
I'm allergic to that word itself !...
well the poem was quite appreciatable 😉as it perfectly discribes our present condition! 😊
Gosh !
Ey phrase ho jaldhi end ,
Arre koi tho kare apne aap ko bend ,[B][/B]
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kya baat kya baat vandhana
aasan nahi aise likh paana
hasi aur mazak ke bhes mein tha hum sab ki dil ki baat
ki kab vapas dikhegi swaron ki khoyi hui chahaat.
swaron ka pyar dekhne ke liye ek bekarar hai jiya.
meri taraf se tumhare liye bahut saare taliya...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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good and nice poem... liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: medhasarkar

kya baat kya baat vandhana

aasan nahi aise likh paana
hasi aur mazak ke bhes mein tha hum sab ki dil ki baat
ki kab vapas dikhegi swaron ki khoyi hui chahaat.
swaron ka pyar dekhne ke liye ek bekarar hai jiya.
meri taraf se tumhare liye bahut saare taliya...

Shukriya shukriya 😆
Aur aapki poetic comment ke liye: waah waah! Kya baat hai! 😊👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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vandana such sweet and lovely poem😃
loved it a lot 😛
when i was reading d poem i just felt that u might be bored of studying n swaron might hv struck ur mind n u might hv penned it down 😉
bcoz even i do such things sumtyms😆
lovely poem
keep writing more

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