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@jas0308

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

loved this ts... awesome

beautifully written

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AdaJ

@AdaJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

A very sweet short take on the future.Also as ASR's son, I think the qualities that you showed in Aarav would be spot on if the serial had progressed to such a future.

Lovely to read

Ada :)

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chaitali

@chaitali12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Loved it.
Aarav is so understanding.
Both asr s are protective over khushi. . . .hw lovely na.

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LazilyAnonymous

@LazilyAnonymous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Superb
Khushi carefully chose her words to reveal the truth about shayam so that aarav won't hate his dad. But arnav can't hide half if the story, the hatred and torture he gave to khushi so he honestly went aarav and reveal each and everything. Arnav prove himself an honest father and the best part he didn't lie. And aarav as a grownup and mature understand everything. That was sweet.
Great work

Thanks 😳

I tried to make Arnav the man I know he is!!! I didn't want him to hide away from his son!!! Im glad you liked it!!! 😳

Originally posted by: AdaJ
A very sweet short take on the future.Also as ASR's son, I think the qualities that you showed in Aarav would be spot on if the serial had progressed to such a future.

Lovely to read

Ada :)

Thanks 😳

Yeah I would love to see bonding between Aarav and Khushi!!! I wish the serial was progressed in the future...

Edited by LazilyAnonymous - 12 years ago

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..MorningStar..

@..MorningStar..

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Awesome One! Loved it all ❤️

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Preet

@Preet.Kc

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

I accidentally clicked on the link, I was about to close it when I read the title, and I said "okay let's give it a read" and I'm happy that i did it, Simply a superb, mind blowing Three Short.

Aarav is simply ASR 2 😆 I love the bond between the three of them especially Aarav and Khushi's and the way the 2 ASRs know well their KKGSR 😆

the last part made me senti, Aarav is a very understanding.

Loved it too too much dammit 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

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LazilyAnonymous

@LazilyAnonymous

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: HK90
I accidentally clicked on the link, I was about to close it when I read the title, and I said "okay let's give it a read" and I'm happy that i did it, Simply a superb, mind blowing Three Short.
Aarav is simply ASR 2 😆 I love the bond between the three of them especially Aarav and Khushi's and the way the 2 ASRs know well their KKGSR 😆
the last part made me senti, Aarav is a very understanding.
Loved it too too much dammit 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

I am glad you liked it!!! I tried to justify their characters!!! :D I really wish we had more family scenes between the 2ASRs and 1KKGSR!!! :)

🤗 🤗