FF: Humein ishq nahin hain part 36 teaser 30th MAY @page 149READ MUST - Page 55

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Posted: 11 years ago
very well written.. 👏
Poor jodha, whatever jalal has done thats not fair... Now what ll happen? She is badly hurted.😳
both jodha n jalal r having bad time na... Plz update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Parirajat rocks.Read last update.
Jalal is very unpredictable king.He can do anything anytime anywhere.

Bec i couldn't read the previous chapters i don't know about Adam's incident.

But by your update i can guess that Jalal is fully under Maham's shadow.

What is Maham Planning?will wait for your next update.

May be till that i will read all the chapter at one go and can give review to all the chapters..

Thanks for pm and truely your writing skill it too beautiful


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Posted: 11 years ago


when will u update ... we r waiting eagerly to read next chapter...update soon na...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update Bhavya !!!
I wonder why Jallu chose the bandhi ???
Anyways finally Jodha is going to confront Jallu ...
I can't wait ...
Damn what is Maham planning now ???
Loving the FF a lot Bhavya ..
Keep up the good work !
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Posted: 11 years ago
will update tonight guys...thans for the suggestions and reviews...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Parijatrocks

will update tonight guys...thans for the suggestions and reviews...🤗


Yay !!! Will be waiting for it ... 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Parijatrocks

i think many dint like jalal with Bandhi😆 it was needed to send Jodha to jalal... haan new chaal is on the way...it will give new twist again...will update soon...

hope the FF is going good with readers bhavi😛

UR GOING AWESOME... YOU HAVE NO IDEA BHAVU... I AM ENJOYING EVERY TWIST IN THIS STORY AND LOOKING FORWARD FOR ONE ALWAYS... LOVE THIS FF SO MUCH...😃 WHEN U GET CHANCE UPDATE PLEASE😆
Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
plz plz plz plz plz update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
CHAPTER 28:

"Hum aapse kuch baath karne aaye hai, shehensha"

Jalal is surprised that she dared to come to his hojra ...

he just looks at her and wont respond ...

"i want to talk to you"

Jalal wont answer anything to her... he just ignores her and moves to his inner rooms to picks up the shemsher... and tries the moves, and he wont be satisfied with it...

Jodha follows him to inner rooms of his hojra...
"shehensha i am talking to you"
Jalal feels displeasure at the sword and picks another one...

Jodha feels irritated...

"Hum kabse aapko awaaz laga rahe hai, aap humein dekhi nahin rahe hain..."

Jalal feels irritated now, and turns to her, but without showing any anger moves outside his hojra...

Jodha follows him too...

WHole haremites witness that jalal ignoring jodha and walking towards his sword practice place, and jodha following him...
Maham and resham look at each other and laugh...

"Huzoor kya nazaara hai, shehensha is not paying attention to jodha begum and she is following him everywhere"

"Resham, i want jalal to get irritated more and cut her head off with his sword.."

"aisa hi hoga shayad aaj...shehensha ki mizaaj teek nahin lag raha hai..jaise bhi kaam ho gaya hai."

"haan resham ab sabar nahin hotha "

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"Hoshiyaar, what happend to that bandhi, did she go out of agra"

"begum sahiba, she was not agreeing to leave the palace, than i threatened her for her life than she agreed..."

"what she was not agreeing to leave the palace even though i ordered her to leave...!!!!!!!"

"aisa hi hotha hai, Bandhi bhi shehensha ke saath raath gujaarne ke baadh begum samajne lagthi hai..."

Ruquaiyya throws the vase on the ground and she is irritated more...

Hoshiyaar understands she needed hukka ...

it cools her down for sometime...after getting assurance that she is fine hoshiyyar speaks up...

"Huzoor, i heard that when shehensha was with that kaneez, he was not in his senses, and he was taking jodha begums name itseems...and that kaneez told me"

Ruquaiyya in anger pushes the hukka too...

she holds the neck of hoshiyyar...

"Kya keh rahi ho tum..."

"huzoor hum sacch keh rahe hai, that kaneez was cursing you for throwing her out...and she told me that even Ruquaiyya begums days are numbered in harem as jodha begum is filled in shehenshas heart and mind these days..."
ruquaiyya releases hoshiyyar...

"One ordinary servant women talked about BEK, what were you doing hoshiyyar why dint you kill her for insulting BEK"

"huzoor, mujhe maaf "

"bazzath nikal jao hamari nazroan se..."

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Salima and HB were worried for jodha as jalal was not behaving well with her...

Rahim enters and takes blessings of the two women...

"Ammi jaan, do not worry, choti ammi jaan will win over shehenshas heart soon..."

"Rahim, i am so glad you are back here...by the way how was your journey..."

"ammi jaan, i am fine and my journey was also so good,,, i want to meet my choti ammi jaan soon where is she, i went to her hojra but she was not there..."

"Rahim, its better you wont meet her now, she is with shehensha, so when she is free i will take you to her, now go and relax in mens quartress..."

"dadi jaan, i was here only all these years, i am still a child why are you forcing me to live in mens quartress, i would love to be here only.."

HB smiles...and kisses on his forehead...

"i know Rahim, you are still small, you can stay in harem too, but we want you to get used to live alone and learn to be independent, if you get practiced to stay alone without your ammi jaan, it will be easier for you..."

"Okie than i will take both your leaves now"

Salima remembers something...

"Rahim, meet your badi ammi, and maham anga too...and dont forget to meet bakshi bhanu and shariffuddin sahab"

"ammi jaan, hum unse bhi mil lenge, ab humeain izazath dijiye..."

Rahim leaves the ladies alone to chat...

"Waise salima begum, why jodha is taking so much time to come, and jalal is practicing a lot today, he never takes so much time to practice..."

"ammi jaan, even i am wondering about it..."

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"Hum aapse kabse baath kar rahe hain, "

Jallal still not anwering her he is still in practice session...🥱

"hum aapki patni hai, shehensha"
Jalals eyes turn red... in anger ...he immediately places the sword on her neck...

"woh aapko ab yaad aaya ki aap hamari begum hai"

Jodha sees the sword on her neck..
"ye kaisi, pratha hai aapka, why are you placing the sword on my neck"

Jallal smiles...

"first you anwer my question jodha, you got to know that you are my wife after so many years,,,,"

Jodha pushes his hands away...

"are you joking with me, i was your wife, and will be i dint forget it, this truth will never change..."

Jalal moves away from her...picks up the bowl and pours water on his face...

"oh you remember that i am your husband than why did you try to escape from your own husband that too two times..."

Jodha looks towards him...

"i dont want to talk about of that with you"

Jalal drops the bowl and moves towards her and stands near to her facing her front...

"Than with whom you wish to talk Jodha begum..."

jodha looks in to his eye.s

"WIth you shehensha, i dont want to waste my time speaking unecessary things with you, i want a permission to leave Agra, i cant stay here with you"

Jalal smiles...

"you said just now, i am your husband and now you are asking permission to stay away from me...😆"

Jodha looks anger towards him...
"i dont want to stay with a man who lusts for women,..."

Jalal anger reaches its peak...

and he holds her arms tigtly and pushes her... jodha almost suffer a fall and she balances herself..

she composes herself and stands...

"yes, you heard it right i lust for women, i am shehensha, i can lust for any women whom i desire, but you dont even deserve that jodha, you are just a guarantee of amerians trust for shehensha, try to be in your limits, dont ever dare to stand front of me again..."


But jodha is in no mood to listen to him...

"yes shehensha, i dont want to be another women who fulfills your lust... its good that you dont think that way in my case, if would have thought that, i would have killed myself."

Jalal turns away from her...

"Jodha begum, i cant let you go to amer "

"but i dont want to stay here at any cost and i can reach any level to leave agra now ..."

"try your luck jodha but i will never let you"

"why are you torturing me, what you will get in my pain..."
Jalal looks at her..

"sukooon miltha hai jodha ...🤢"

Jalal walks off from her...

Resham will be hearing all this to inform it to maham...
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Maham gets all the information from resham

"resham kaam aaj hi hojana chahiye"

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Jodha will be sleeping in her hojra in the night when she hears someones footstep noise in her hojra behind the curtains...

she takes the knife kept for her safety below the pillow and moves towards the curtains
"kaun hai waha..."
no one answers...

jodha takes the lamp in her hand and

"kaun hai, jaldi bathao, warna shor machadungi..."

SOmeone holds her hands and pulls her and pins her to the wall and closes her mouth...
jodha could see thier eyes... its familiar one...

"jodha hum hai, suryabhaan,..."

jodha widens her eyes... and struggles to release herself

suryabhaan releases her...

Jodha immediately pushes him away from her proximity...

"you here"

Surya bhaan looks confused...

"Jodha you had written a letter to me that you want to meet me "

jodha looks at him questioningly...

"i never wrote any letter...!!!!!!"

"jodha dont play now, i risked my life, and have made arrangements to elope too...now dont waste time lets escape from here...its not safe to stay here for longer..."

he holds her hands and pulls her... jodha releases her hands from his...

"what are you saying, i never wrote any letter to you...whats wrong with you..."
Suryabhaan looks at her confusingly...

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"pakdo in logon ko sipayiyon..."
Maham shouts at them... suryabhaan and jodha looks towards her and sees that jalal and his men are standing to attack them both...

on mahams order soldiers rush towards them...suryabhaan jumps from the balcony and escapes ...

Jallal and his men reach the balcony and soldiers run behind him...

Jalal looks at her in anger filled eyes..jodha could not understand anything...he holds her hand as tightly as possible and pulls her ...

and drags her forcefully hurting her...

maham and resham smile wickedly...

jalal stops and orders

"Badi ammi, no one should know what happened here in this room...its shehenshas order.."
maham is confused mind nods her head...

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PRECAP: :huzoor where is shehensha he is not anywhere in harem..😲


Edited by Parijatrocks - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Suspence nt again ...it ws nyc👏 update ...nw wi8ing 4 nxt update...thanx 4 d PM😊

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